kevin7653 Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 right now there are six cards give me your feed back i will be updating it soon so here they are [spoiler=the cards][spoiler=light][img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/6280/218546.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=dark][img]http://img600.imageshack.us/img600/6280/218546.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=fire][img]http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/6280/218546.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=water][img]http://img641.imageshack.us/img641/6280/218546.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=wind][img]http://img267.imageshack.us/img267/6280/218546.jpg[/img][/spoiler] [spoiler=earth][img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/6280/218546.jpg[/img][/spoiler][spoiler=my greek card set][img]http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/6280/218546.jpg[/img] Lore:This card cannot be special summoned.In your standby phase you may activate this cards effect.By tributing one Warrior type monster card on your side of the field you may deal 700 damage to your opponent and increase this card ATK by half of the tributed card ATK [img]http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/132/218546a.jpg[/img] Lore:This card cannot be special summoned.When this card attacks flip a coin.If heads this card gains 500 ATK for the Battle Phase only.If tails Destroy a card on your opponents side of the field. [img]http://img580.imageshack.us/img580/6280/218546.jpg[/img] Lore:This card cannot be special summoned.When a monster type card is sent to the graveyard increase this cards attack by 200 until the end phase.If this card is sent the grave you may remove from play all monster type cards and shuffle all cards with Greek God in their name back into your deck. [img]http://img802.imageshack.us/img802/6280/218546.jpg[/img] Lore:This card cannot be special summoned.This card may atack in twice in your Bsattle Phase.If your opponent destroyed one of your cards in their last turn increase this cards ATK by 500.If you destroyed one of your opponents cards last turn increase this cards ATK by 300. [img]http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/6280/218546.jpg[/img] Lore:This card cannot be special summoned.Once per turn you may look at a card in your opponents hand or you may pay 100 life points to randomly discard one card in your opponents hand.Once per turn in your standby phase you may pay 300 life points to look at the top two cards on your opponents deck pick one and send it to your opponents graveyard and put the other one on the bottom of your opponents deck. [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/4560/218546l.jpg[/img] Lore:This card cannot be special summoned.When this card is summoned you may pick a equip card from your deck and adding it to your hand.When an equip card is sent to the graveyard you shuffle it into your deck and increase all your cards ATK by 500 until your end phase [img]http://img713.imageshack.us/img713/5123/218546b.jpg[/img] Lore:This card cannot be special summoned.Once per turn you may look at a card in your opponents hand or you may pay 100 life points to randomly discard one card in your opponents hand.Once per turn in your standby phase you may pay 300 life points to look at the top two cards on your opponents deck pick one and send it to your opponents graveyard and put the other one on the bottom of your opponents deck. [img]http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/6280/218546.jpg[/img] Lore:This card cannot be special summoned.When a card on your side of the field is sent to the graveyard due to battle you may pay 500 life points to special summon face down to your side of the field.If a card on your side of the field is sent to the graveyard due to a spell or trap card you may special summon back to your side of the field in face up defense position. [img]http://img819.imageshack.us/img819/4377/218546z.jpg[/img] Lore:This card cannot be special summoned.Once per turn in your standby phase you may pay 300 life points to special summon a level five or lower monster to your side of the field.Once per turn in your draw phase you may pay 300 life points to draw two cards or look at the top three cards in your deck and summon one to your side of the field face down,put one in your hand,and send one to your graveyard. [img]http://img705.imageshack.us/img705/9017/218546y.jpg[/img] Lore:This card cannot be special summoned.When a card on your side of the field is normal summoned,flip summoned.or special summoned you may increase its attack by 100 for every turn this card is on the field.While this card is on your side of the field or in graveyard you may draw one extra card in your draw phase [img]http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/6280/218546.jpg[/img] Lore:This card cannot be special summoned.When a spell card is activated this card gains 500 ATK until your end phase.When a spell trap is activated This card gains 700 ATK until your end phase and negate the effect it's effect.[/spoiler][/spoiler] image kudos to google and devian art give me your feed back and improvment sugestions updates soon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Najarin05 Posted November 27, 2011 Report Share Posted November 27, 2011 You spelled Fiend wrong on them. And I think you made Spirit of the Night have the attribute and effect of Spirit of the Day. Other than that, REALLY COOL! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted November 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2011 thanks i will fix that imedaltyfixed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted November 27, 2011 Report Share Posted November 27, 2011 It isn't very creative to make monsters with similar effects and exactly the same stats but never mind. You should capitalize the first letter od each word in the card's name. Moreover the attributes (LIGHT, EARTH ,DARK ,WATER ,FIRE ,EARTH) are written with every letter capitalized. After an attribute, you don't have to put the word type. We put the word type after Warrior , Spellcaster etc. Cards are good but not very creative. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted November 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2011 not creative because they have the same effect because i have seen plenty of cards like that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamesgent111 Posted December 13, 2011 Report Share Posted December 13, 2011 Try and check the OCG, also, be more creative! These just seem like a bunch of Re-makes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted December 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 16, 2011 glad you all like them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
snowtiger Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 I've got a monarch, or more appropriately, a elemental charmer archetype vibe from these. I recommend going to the Yugioh wikia to find a card example to help improve OCG (that's what I do) and maybe expand on the effects but good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Marluxia~ Posted December 23, 2011 Report Share Posted December 23, 2011 On your DARK card, Shouldn't the attribute be DARK? In your Gods, the woman are are 'Goddess' Also, You misspelled Hermes... H- E- R- M- E- S Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marv_ Posted December 31, 2011 Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 Capitlaize them.... the names look horrid without capitals. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted December 31, 2011 Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 sry, they are all just pretty redundant, and u have atheena up twice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aranger930 Posted January 2, 2012 Report Share Posted January 2, 2012 seems a little underpowered but could work in a deck of that attribute. shouldnt the earth one be spirit of the earth not the dirt? you should add more to this there cool. good pictures too Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted January 4, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 4, 2012 ty i might expand them a little Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
naturiamaster Posted January 9, 2012 Report Share Posted January 9, 2012 the element cards are a little overpowered and the Greek gods need smaller things to go with them and have more of an archetype Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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