kevin7653 Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 hey kevin7653 here i just made another card let me know what ypu think i couldn't think of a good name so i will take sugestion on that to improvment welcome [img]http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/1213/218546p.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 Name should be "Glow Dragon" OCG fix: When a DARK monster is Summoned; You can tribute it to have this card gain 300 ATK. If you activated this effect; You can Special Summon a Level 4 or lower monster from your ...... (You don't say from where ) I have to know from where you Special Summon the monster and then I will rate your card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted November 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 ty i will do thattry this [img]http://img196.imageshack.us/img196/6280/218546.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 So you can also tribute cards your opponent controls to have this card gain 300 ATK. Hmmm I think it is original but you shouldn't use "must" because your opponent might not have another monster in his hand. You can say "can Special Summon...." Card is Good and quite original. I like it. 9/10 good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted November 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 thank you i will fix taht little glitch[img]http://img846.imageshack.us/img846/6280/218546.jpg[/img] i hope this is better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted November 23, 2011 Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 [center]Your fixed version (not yours gron but kevins) includes must. Always use "can" instead of "must" and "may" unless if they can't, something happens.[/center] [center]Pretty nice card, though Tributing is slow. Tribute monsters are usually only played if their AWESOME. (Like the Supremecy Sun is hardly played, and he may be deemed OP to some people).[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted November 23, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 23, 2011 thanks for the comment on that i will be shure tyo remember that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 24, 2011 Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 Dark isn't a type, it's an attribute 300 atk gain also isn't much either not to mention you didn't say WHERE you're special summoning the lv4 monster from for that reason you need to state that, and maybe suggest a more specific lv4 monster Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin7653 Posted November 25, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 I sugest you look at my updated card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 25, 2011 Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 oh that one? Well for starters the 300 atk gain isn't really much Plus the 2nd sentence you need an alternative This is because you used the word "must", and it means if he has a monster card in his hand, he must summon a lv4 or lower monster from his hand, not doing so is not an option So what happens if you don't have a lv4 or lower monster in your hand? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Archived
This topic is now archived and is closed to further replies.