gimmepie Posted November 24, 2011 Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 I got the idea for this when I got bored and made a Kuriboh deck earlier. I realised that whilst they are not intended to be a hugely powerful archetype they lack a significant boss like most other archetypes (unless you count Winged LV10 which I don't). So here is my attempt to create a Kuriboh boss monster. Please review and give constructive criticism. [img]http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/5434/490484w.jpg[/img] Effect: This card cannot be normal summoned or set. This card cannot be special summoned from the deck and can only be special summoned from the hand by tributing two monsters with "Kuriboh" in their name or that are called "Kuribon" or "Kuribolt". This card is not destroyed by battle and you take no battle damage from a battle involving this card. During your battle phase this card gains 1000 ATK and DEF for each card with "Kuriboh" in it's name or that is called "Kuribon" or "Kuribolt" in your graveyard. When this card is destroyed you can special summon as many "Kuriboh" monsters, "Kuribons" and "Kuribolts" from your graveyard as possible, your opponent takes 300 damage for each monster summoned by this effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted November 24, 2011 Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 This card cannot be [u]N[/u]ormal [u]S[/u]ummoned or set. This card [s]cannot be [u]S[/u]pecial [u]S[/u]ummoned from the [u]D[/u]eck and [/s]can only be [u]S[/u]pecial [u]S[/u]ummoned from the hand by tributing two monsters with "Kuriboh" in their name or that are called "Kuribon" or "Kuribolt". This card [s]is not[/s] [u]cannot be[/u] destroyed by battle and you take no battle damage from a battle involving this card. During your [u]B[/u]attle [u]P[/u]hase this card gains 1000 [s]attack[/s] [u]ATK[/u] and [s]defence[/s] [u]DEF[/u] for each card with "Kuriboh" in it's name or that is called "Kuribon" or "Kuribolt" (from where?). When this card is destroyed you can special summon as many "Kuriboh" monsters, "Kuribons" and "Kuribolts" from your grave as possible. You have a lot of OCG errors but that doesn't matter as long as I can understand what you are saying. I don't think that this card would be used if it was real because it is too difficult to have 2 kuribohs ..... on your side of the field. I think that you shouldn't make the ATK gain permanent because you already don't take damage from this card and it cannot be destroyed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted November 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 It isn't really that hard to have two of them. [list] [*]Double Summon [*]Ultimate Offering [*]Flute of Summoning Kuriboh [*]Traps for defence. [/list] As for making the attack gain temporary. That was purely an aesthetic choice, this way just seems more "Kuriboh-ish". Thanks for the fixes and the advice. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted November 24, 2011 Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 You are welcome I believe its a good card and it will help kuribohs a lot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
2Dual Posted November 24, 2011 Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 In case you care for your OCG: Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must be Special Summoned from the hand by Tributing 2 "Kuriboh", "Kuribon" or "Kuribolt" monsters you control. This card cannot be destroy by battle and you take no Battle Damage from a battle involving this card. During your Battle Phase: This card gains 1000 ATK and DEF for each card with "Kuriboh", "Kuribon" or "Kuribolt" in its name (in your Graveyard?). When this card is destroyed: You can Special Summon as many "Kuriboh", "Kuribon" and "Kuribolt" monsters as possible from your Graveyard. the effect is pretty much kuriboh-ish and i guess it could give some beatdown otk potential to kuriboh decks, only possible downside is that you give up on some protection in order to summon it. anyway i like the card even if i'm not a fan of kuriboh's. 7.5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted November 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 Thanks for another comment. Yes you lose Kuribohs, but not protection. This is a semi-impenetrable wall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 24, 2011 Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 Now that's a Kuriboh support I haven't see used glad to see this supports Winged Kuriboh too, that one needs more respect the special summoning effect is good at the end as well it's a shame it has no burn effect like Winged Kuriboh lv10, that would have been good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted November 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 It also would have been OPed. Thanks for the comments though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 24, 2011 Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 well Winged Kuriboh lv10's burn is really big, you could have tuned that down here Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted November 24, 2011 Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 Damn it! [size=5][b]Its not FLUFFY ENOUGH!!!!![/b][/size] Lol. No but there are a lot of OCG errors. I wont repeat what others have posted though. ANYWAY, I like it. Makes me wanna make a Kuriboh deck xD Ill do it online tonight Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted November 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 Fluffiest that still looked good, and either way you look at it it's fluffier than Kuribolt XD. Thanks for the good review. (It was my Kuriboh deck that made me want to make this.) @Ragnarok: You do have a point there. I will consider the burn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 24, 2011 Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 no problem I mean lv10's burn is justified because Winged Kuriboh lv10 isn't exactly easy to get out so to balance, the easier it is to get out, the smaller the burn has to be Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted November 24, 2011 Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 I say the burn could involve banishing Kuribohs from the Graveyard to destory a monster and inflict damage that way. A typical YGO tactic. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 24, 2011 Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 you mean the monster's atk infliction? That would be a little bit like Ring of Destruction + Ring of Defense combo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted November 24, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 hmmm this is certainly something to think about. Maybe a level burn ie level X200 or something?Make it more balanced? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 24, 2011 Report Share Posted November 24, 2011 that's certainly be great so only really high levels can do substantial damage, lv4s or lower it's virtually nothing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iGrowlithe Posted November 25, 2011 Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 That works too. I would say that the level burn makes it nice as well. But I still say the banishment of the Kuriboh(s) would make that even more balanced. Kinda like a weird fluffy dark armed dragon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 25, 2011 Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 maybe, I just don't know how much Kuriboh is used nowadays Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Therrion Posted November 25, 2011 Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 [center]You only lose Kuribohs until it dies, then you get even more then what you started with ^-^[/center] [center]Decent card, it should be 500 for each Kuriboh in grave/field (or Kuribolt/bon).[/center] [center]OR make it have 5000ATK, and make abunch of effects that reduce its ATK so that it can work well with Kuriboh's "Berserker Crush".[/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 25, 2011 Report Share Posted November 25, 2011 once you reach that high atk it's WAY too easy OTK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oh My Anubis! Posted November 26, 2011 Report Share Posted November 26, 2011 I'm not very particular to Kuribohs, but this changed my mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted November 26, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 26, 2011 Awesome thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted November 27, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 27, 2011 Updated version is now up: It has OCG fixes and as suggested a burn was added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 27, 2011 Report Share Posted November 27, 2011 well that burn effect still isn't really much because it's only 300 burn per monster therefore, the max you can turn it up to is 1500 look at winged kuriboh lv10 for instance you tribute it, nuke all your opponent's atk position monsters, they take damage to the combined attack of all of them, easy OTK now yes, Winged Kuriboh lv10 isn't as easy to get out, so to that end your burn should be smaller but given Winged Kuriboh has a OTK setup, yours should be something like TTK (two turn kill) basically burn your opponent enough so he just BARELY has enough LP left, but still enough standing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gimmepie Posted November 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 28, 2011 With an effect like this that makes it severely OPed IMO. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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