Glogatha Posted November 29, 2011 Report Share Posted November 29, 2011 [img]http://img403.imageshack.us/img403/6710/442447.jpg[/img] [spoiler=lore]This monster cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. If this monster is targeted by a Spell or Trap card your opponent controls: destroy this card without applying damage calculation. Once per turn during your Standby Phase: Discard any amount of cards from your hand to have your opponent send equal cards from the top of their deck to their Graveyard. If your opponent discards more than seven cards: inflict 1000 points of damage to your Lifepoints for each card.[/spoiler] I made sure i put in thought and made this so it would not be overpowered soooo nb4op'd nextly i gave it a low level for Gravity bind and synchro purposes, and finally thanks too DeadPoolSyndrome for the amazing pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strider Tigerwolf Posted November 29, 2011 Report Share Posted November 29, 2011 Deep Dragon Draw says "hi" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marquispullie Posted November 29, 2011 Report Share Posted November 29, 2011 lol i see a dark world OTK with this guy..have silva, reign-beaux, or a grapha, and its over. lol but of course have 2 of either. haha and a beige XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted November 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2011 [quote name='Lupin Canis Timberwolf' timestamp='1322596174' post='5674391'] Deep Dragon Draw says "hi" [/quote] i don't know of that card...does it make this good or bad? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strider Tigerwolf Posted November 29, 2011 Report Share Posted November 29, 2011 [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Exodia_OTK#Deep_Draw_Dragon_Exodia"]http://yugioh.wikia....w_Dragon_Exodia[/url] Basically, draw till you have like 16 cards, summon this monster (15 in hand) Then discard all for burn OTK/FTK. Either that, or keep drawing until you have Exodia. Either way, you with with either 1 or the other. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted November 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2011 no, if you make your opponent discard more than 7 cards with this card it burns you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strider Tigerwolf Posted November 29, 2011 Report Share Posted November 29, 2011 [img]http://images3.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20101010165354/yugioh/images/thumb/5/52/SpellofPainDT03-EN-DNPR-DT.jpg/300px-SpellofPainDT03-EN-DNPR-DT.jpg[/img] Say's hi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted November 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2011 ouch, ok i like it haha so i guess my card is op'd huh... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strider Tigerwolf Posted November 29, 2011 Report Share Posted November 29, 2011 Pretty much. Dragon Draw will help nab both of these cards to your hand, and if that doesn't work, you can still go into Exodia. Basically, you gave Exodias another way to fight back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted November 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 29, 2011 *facepalm* well i thought i had something, thanks anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
♥Łövëły-Ċħän♥ Posted November 29, 2011 Report Share Posted November 29, 2011 Lupin, RC's Advance Clause says "Hi". This is your first warning (from me at least). You need to read through the Advance Clause thread and update your posting accordingly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Strider Tigerwolf Posted November 29, 2011 Report Share Posted November 29, 2011 OoT - Simple is better: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/268326-rc-advanced-clause-currently-in-effect/page__pid__5674693__st__80#entry5674693 OT: Yes. The card is broken. A good way to fix it is making it so that you don't discard that many cards. Maybe up to 5 without any of the damage...but I still feel it's going to be abusable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Worm Victory Posted November 29, 2011 Report Share Posted November 29, 2011 Here comes me to fix OCG! Hopefully my OCG fixing skills are still at there best. I lol'd when you said "To your Lifepoints"....But now thinking about it, you might have meant it...but w/e. Bold-Underlined words are fixes/additions, Dashed word(s) are unneeded words or just plain silly. Lore: This monster cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. If this monster is targeted by a spell or trap card your opponent controls, destroy it instantly without applying damage calculation. Once per turn during your Standby Phase: Discard as many cards as you like from your hand; your opponent must discard that many cards from the top of their deck. If your opponent discards mor than seven cards, inflict 1000 points of damage to your Lifepoints for every extra card. Improved Lore: This monster cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. If this monster is targeted by a [u][b]S[/b][/u]pell or [u][b]T[/b][/u]rap card your opponent controls[b][u]: destroy this card.[/u][/b] [s]instantly without applying damage calculation.[/s] Once per turn during your Standby Phase: Discard any [u][b]amount of cards[/b][/u] from your hand [u][b]to have[/b][/u] your opponent [u][b]send equal[/b][/u] cards from the top of their deck [b][u]to their Graveyard[/u][/b]. If your opponent discards mor[u][b]e[/b][/u] than seven cards[u][b]:[/b][/u] inflict 1000 points of damage to your [u][b]opponent's [/b][/u]Lifepoints for [u][b]each[/b] [/u]card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted November 30, 2011 Report Share Posted November 30, 2011 all right, let's have a look at this, Shattered Sky seems VERY easy to get destroyed, a simple spell/trap targeting and all that with regards to the burn effect, well I don't really think it's going to get OPed mainly because you put the limit at 7, and despite the draw power nowadays, that's still not easy to pull off. Even with Infinite Cards I don't see this being pulled off often Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted November 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2011 thanks raggy! haha i just now checked this because i thought it was done earlier haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Worm Victory Posted November 30, 2011 Report Share Posted November 30, 2011 [quote name='Glowfly' timestamp='1322622037' post='5675489'] thanks raggy! haha i just now checked this because i thought it was done earlier haha [/quote] Your act of not changing the card's text(corrections) bothers me x.x Plz do it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted November 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2011 ahhhhh! i didn't even bother to scroll up! X_X will do captain! *salute* :EDIT: okay the deed is done, i didn't change the part about not taking damage when destroyed by a spell or trap because thats how i want it Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Worm Victory Posted November 30, 2011 Report Share Posted November 30, 2011 [quote name='Glowfly' timestamp='1322622610' post='5675505'] ahhhhh! i didn't even bother to scroll up! X_X will do captain! *salute* [color=#d3d3d3]:EDIT: okay the deed is done, i didn't change the part about[/color] not taking damage when destroyed by a spell or trap [color=#d3d3d3]because thats how i want it[/color] [/quote] I thought you meant from a monster battle. Sorry for the Confusion! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Glogatha Posted November 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted November 30, 2011 [quote name='Dread689' timestamp='1322689634' post='5676874'] I thought you meant from a monster battle. Sorry for the Confusion! [/quote] hehe its good! oh, Mr.Dread, its against my morals to ask for people to check my topics, but....your really good, and i was wondering if you'd check this for me....[url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/269996-now-attributes-mean-more/"]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/269996-now-attributes-mean-more[/url]/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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