ITI3L33 Posted February 20, 2008 Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 This is my newest card that is going into a set with my other card. I am still working on it so that is why I made separate threads. I know I don't make sense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 20, 2008 Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 Grammar, pic, simple....6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ITI3L33 Posted February 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 Grammar?! What did I mess up on? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brushfire Posted February 20, 2008 Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 "All cards on the field with "Elemental Dragon" gain 200 ATK. What it should be: All cards on the with "Elemental Dragon" in it's name gains 200 extra ATK . Or something like that. I'm gunna say the same for what I did for the other one. It's good, but could be better, 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted February 20, 2008 Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 Actually, it's ocg It should be written:As long as this card remains face-up on the field, increase the ATK of all cards on the field with "Element Dragon" in it's name by 200. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ITI3L33 Posted February 20, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2008 Actually' date=' it's ocg It should be written:As long as this card remains face-up on the field, increase the ATK of all cards on the field with "Element Dragon" in it's name by 200. ^_^[/quote'] Fixed! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted February 21, 2008 Report Share Posted February 21, 2008 7.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted February 21, 2008 Report Share Posted February 21, 2008 8/10 you tried..you tried Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
casaditymaker Posted February 21, 2008 Report Share Posted February 21, 2008 Nice job man, keep it up :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RiffMaster Alex Posted February 21, 2008 Report Share Posted February 21, 2008 some bad OCG, and since this is with you fire breath card, it should be in that thread. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted February 21, 2008 Report Share Posted February 21, 2008 Not a very original effect. The picture isn't too good and the OCG isn't the best. Good effort, better luck next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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