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[center][img]http://img830.imageshack.us/img830/1843/eqom.png[/img][/center]

[center][b]Lore[/b][/center]

[center][i]Up to 4 Level 4 monsters
This card cannot be Xyz Summoned except by the Materials listed above (including at least 2 Level 4 monsters). This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the combined level of all its materials x200.[/i][/center]

[center]Okay, pic will be updaed shortly...[/center]

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It's not overpowered, it's fine as it is, because nobody would actually use more than 2 monsters to Summon it anyways. Really, it's just a Gem-Knight Pearl that can go to 3600 ATK, which isn't a problem anyways since that's all it can do. Also, why is this Rank 8? Ranks are equal to the Level of the Xyz Material. :|

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[quote name='Æther Royce' timestamp='1324586245' post='5723736']
It's not overpowered, it's fine as it is, because nobody would actually use more than 2 monsters to Summon it anyways. Really, it's just a Gem-Knight Pearl that can go to 3600 ATK, which isn't a problem anyways since that's all it can do. Also, why is this Rank 8? Ranks are equal to the Level of the Xyz Material. :neutral:
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2 Level 4s = 8 x 600 + 2000 = 6800, how the hell did you get 3600?

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Fix (I think);

[i]Up to 4 Level 4 monsters.[/i]
[i]This card cannot be Xyz Summoned except by the materials listed above. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the combined level of all its materials x600[/i]

First of all you should try to change the summoning condition, because right now it seems as if you can Xyz summon it with 1 Level 4 monster, Although I do like the "Up to" part, makes it original.

[s]so, MINIMUM atk for this card would be 3200 since its original atk is 2000... maybe try lowering original atk to 1000 or 1500 or reduce the amount of atk it gains from the materials.

Or if you want to keep it like that make it so you have to detach 1 material during each of your End Phases maybe? because this card can go to 4400atk right from the get go.[/s]

Overall, I find it to be an original effect and definitaly not done in the actual game yet.

[b]Edit:[/b] I misread the card; that gets a lot of atk points... Maybe try lowering it to 100 or 200 atk gain.. 600 with a minimum of 2 lvl 4's = 6800atk , so its max. atk would be 11600.. not something I would like to go against...

Looking back now, maybe change it to it gains 600 ATK for each material?

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[quote name='Octavia' timestamp='1324586536' post='5723748']
Fix (I think);

[i]Up to 4 Level 4 monsters.[/i]
[i]This card cannot be Xyz Summoned except by the materials listed above. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the combined level of all its materials [b]x 600. Wouldn't that be wrong? Just the Bold Part, nothing else, but thanks...[/b][/i]

First of all you should try to change the summoning condition, because right now it seems as if you can Xyz summon it with 1 Level 4 monster, Although I do like the "Up to" part, makes it original.

[s]so, MINIMUM atk for this card would be 3200 since its original atk is 2000... maybe try lowering original atk to 1000 or 1500 or reduce the amount of atk it gains from the materials.

Or if you want to keep it like that make it so you have to detach 1 material during each of your End Phases maybe? because this card can go to 4400atk right from the get go.[/s]

Overall, I find it to be an original effect and definitaly not done in the actual game yet.

[b]Edit:[/b] I misread the card; that gets a lot of atk points...
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Any suggestion on how to fix the up to part? As I know I don't want them with just 1 Xyz material......

Yea, maybe I should change it to by 400....

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[quote name='Octavia' timestamp='1324586536' post='5723748']Overall, I find it to be an original effect and definitaly not done in the actual game yet.
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OT: To be honest, there's no way to balance it without it being bad design. At 100, it's just a better version of Pearl. Which makes Pearl redundant, and Kachi Kochi too. Which isn't good as it's just retraining cards, which is obvious power creep. At 200, it becomes the best Rank 4 ever. At 150, it's still unbalanced at a new 3200 ATK. At 50 per Level, it's just bad. Doing anything above 200 is just stupid.

So...

nothing can balance this.

Unless you make it an increase of 300 per Level and give it 0 ATK.

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[quote name='Skylie' timestamp='1324587014' post='5723769']
@Above: Yes, Yes there can be, there is always something to balance something, or otherwise Konami would have gone out of business 5 years ago......Watch and learn.....
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Lower the original ATK to 500 and lower the raise to 200 per Level. It'll be fine then.

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[quote name='Skylie' timestamp='1324587014' post='5723769']
@Above: Yes, Yes there can be, there is always something to balance something, or otherwise Konami would have gone out of business 5 years ago......Watch and learn.....
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They're in business because they have a banlist.

Unfortunately, RC doesn't have a banlist.

[quote name='-Tsubaki-' timestamp='1324587117' post='5723774']


Lower the original ATK to 1000. It'll be fine then.
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WAIT WHAT. 5800 ATK?

SERIOUSLY?

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@Above: I sitll go by Konamis Ban List, if its overpowered, i fix it, you see.....I'm not a noob or a newb and not fix it and leave it and thank everyone is dumber then me, i know better, hence why I post stuff here, to Fix IT.........

Anyhow, new lore.....better now?

2 to 3 Level 4 Synchro monsters.
Up to 4 Level 4 monsters.
This card cannot be Xyz Summoned except by the materials listed above. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the combined level of all its materials x400.

I'll do -Tsubaki's edit if this new one don't work...

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[quote name='Skylie' timestamp='1324587298' post='5723786']
@Above: I sitll go by Konamis Ban List, if its overpowered, i fix it, you see.....I'm not a noob or a newb and not fix it and leave it and thank everyone is dumber then me, i know better, hence why I post stuff here, to Fix IT.........

Anyhow, new lore.....better now?

2 to 3 Level 4 Synchro monsters.
Up to 4 Level 4 monsters.
This card cannot be Xyz Summoned except by the materials listed above. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the combined level of all its materials x400.

I'll do -Tsubaki's edit if this new one don't work...
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I don't think you need that [i]"2 to 3 Level 4 Synchro monsters."[/i] in their. Also, to word it better you could possibly use [i]"2, 3 OR 4 Level 4 monsters"[/i], but I'm not an expert at card grammar so that may not be right.

I also think 200 gain per level is good since min. atk would be 3600, but I still think it would be a good idea to have a drawback such as detaching one during your End Phases, but meh. Then again, you could just make it a regular [i]"2 Level 4 monsters"[/i] and keep the x400 or x200 gain.

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[quote name='Octavia' timestamp='1324587677' post='5723797']
I don't think you need that [i]"2 to 3 Level 4 Synchro monsters."[/i] in their. Also, to word it better you could possibly use [i]"2, 3 OR 4 Level 4 monsters"[/i], but I'm not an expert at card grammar so that may not be right.

I also think 200 gain per level is good since min. atk would be 3600, but I still think it would be a good idea to have a drawback such as detaching one during your End Phases, but meh. Then again, you could just make it a regular [i]"2 Level 4 monsters"[/i] and keep the x400 or x200 gain.
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Actually, to my understanding, that would be correct to do comma's + or; Or something along those lines.....But I'm going back to Tsubaki's suggestion unless that is still op'd.....

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@Octavia: Okay then, how's this?

2, 3, OR 4 Level 4 monsters.
This card cannot be Xyz Summoned except by the materials listed above. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the combined level of all its materials x200.

ATK/DEF 500/500

or

2 to 4 Level 4 monsters.
This card cannot be Xyz Summoned except by the materials listed above. This card gains ATK and DEF equal to the combined level of all its materials x200.
ATK/DEF 500/500

Yours is good but I thought maybe my 2 to 4 would shorten it up and is still the exact same thing.....

Also, are you TS?

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