Baliarth Dragon - My first Card

[paulopalma77]

Hey guys, its my first card so be nice with me =D ... Im not very good using the new grammer because i no play many years ago, i ready to receive all critics and suggestions.

[img]http://img13.imageshack.us/img13/1463/534109.jpg[/img]


1 Tunner + 1 non-Tunner monsters
Once per turn select on card on the field and destroy. Once per turn can tribute one Light monster by your side the field to gain 1000 ATK, in the end of turn ATK backs to the normal.

[YuichiHokuto]

[ Dragon / Synchro / [b]Effect[/b] ]
Tu[b]n[/b]er + 1 non-Tu[b]n[/b]er monsters
Once per turn, select 1 card on the field and destroy [b]it[/b]. Once per turn[b], you[/b] can Tribute [b]1 LIGHT[/b] monster [b]on[/b] your side of the field to [b]have this card gain[/b] 1000 ATK, [b]until the End phase.[/b]

Improve your card grammar. Effect is little OP, maybe destruction with cost (pay LP, discard, Tribute). ATK-gaining effect fine for me.
Overall 6/10, good job for 1st card, keep creatig and improving

[Sander]

[quote name='Yusei-san' timestamp='1324927898' post='5730429']
Improve your card grammar. Effect is little OP, maybe destruction with cost (pay LP, discard, Tribute). ATK-gaining effect fine for me.
Overall 6/10, good job for 1st card, keep creatig and improving
[/quote]

The effect isn't overpowered at all, the hell are you talking about? And really, you should catch up with the card grammar as well before you start correcting it.

[color=#666666][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Once per turn[b]:[/b] [b]Target [/b]1 card on the field[b];[/b] destroy the [b]targeted [/b]card. Once per turn[b]:[/b][/size][/font][/color][b] You[/b][color=#666666][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] can Tribute 1 LIGHT[/size][/font][/color][color=#666666][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3] monster [b]you control; [/b]increase the ATK of this card by 1000, until the End Phase.[/size][/font][/color]

[color=#666666][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]Anyways, as I said before, card isn't overpowered. The first effect isn't serious enough to warrant a cost.[/size][/font][/color]

[EdelweissQueen]

I suggest maybe having a cost for the destruction of a card but apart from that effect seems balanced. Pic is good just a bit off the yugioh style. Grammar never expected you to get right since you are translating from your grammar to English Google shows how hard that is without allot of help. Nice card I like it.

[paulopalma77]

yah it was with a google, bored write in english xD

tks a lot Æther Royce help me a lot =D

[u raging?]

kinda op but great pic =S

[ragnarok1945]

change Light to LIGHT (remember that's an attribute)

the 1000 atk gain is fine, nothing really wrong with that

same goes with the destroying 1 card on the field

only thing I'd change (but it's your call) is maybe say for those two effects, you can't activate both of them in the same turn

[jaster_rogue]

Looks like nice because it's easy to summon this card since there is not any specific Type or attribute you need to use as a material, I guess this card should be on my extra deck if its real =D

[momobeast]

Nice card everybody pointed out all the mistakes so a 7/10

[MikuMiku4Ever]

For the first try, it's really good =)
I like the pic and it's easy to summon an the effect isn't really overpowered
Because today, you open a pack and BOOM, you have a Card to counter the effect
and destroy the Synchro-monster instead