robertrex9383 Posted December 28, 2011 Report Share Posted December 28, 2011 [img]http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/9968/426593.jpg[/img] [img]http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/9968/426593.jpg[/img] his card cannot be normal summoned or set. this card can only be special summoned by tributing three dragon type monsters on your side of the field.This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If this card is sent to the graveyard by a card effect target one card on your side of the field, destroy the targeted monster and inflict damage to your opponent equal to that monsters attack. [img]http://img21.imageshack.us/img21/1851/426593f.jpg[/img] [img]http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/2384/426593h.jpg[/img] [img]http://img10.imageshack.us/img10/9968/426593.jpg[/img] [img]http://img207.imageshack.us/img207/9968/426593.jpg[/img] [img]http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/9968/426593.jpg[/img] This card cannot be special summoned or Set. This card can only be special summoned with the effect of "Dragon Ritual". Once per turn you can pay 1000 life points to target all the cards your opponent controls. Send the targeted cards to the graveyard and gain life points equal to the number of cards sent x 300. This card cannot attack the turn you activate this effect. [img]http://img534.imageshack.us/img534/9968/426593.jpg[/img] This card cannot be special summoned or Set. This card can only be special summoned with the effect of "Dragon Ritual". Once per turn you can pay 1000 life points to target all the cards your opponent controls. Send the selected cards to the graveyard and inflict damage to your opponent for each card sent x 300. This card cannot attack the turn you activate this effect. [img]http://img684.imageshack.us/img684/9968/426593.jpg[/img] This card cannot be special summoned or Set. This card can only be special summoned by tributing two " Great Dragon" monsters from your side of the field. Once per turn by paying 1000 life points destroy all other cards on the field and activate one of the following effects: * Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of cards sent x 400, and gain life life points equal to the number of cards sent x 400. * This card gains 2000 ATK. [img]http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/9968/426593.jpg[/img] [img]http://img546.imageshack.us/img546/3084/426593g.jpg[/img] Once per turn if this card would be destroyed and sent to the graveyard, you can discard two cards from your hand instead. If you sent a dragon type monster to the graveyard due to this cards effect inflict damage to your opponent equal to that cards attack. [img]http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/3084/426593g.jpg[/img] [img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/9968/426593.jpg[/img] [img]http://img840.imageshack.us/img840/9968/426593.jpg[/img] [img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/9968/426593.jpg[/img] [img]http://img515.imageshack.us/img515/2271/426593l.jpg[/img] [img]http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/9968/426593.jpg[/img] Target one dragon type monster on the field, then activate one of the following effects based on the monster's level: *1-4: Target one card on the field, send the targeted card to the graveyard. *5-8: Target up to two cards on the field, send the targeted cards to the graveyard. * 9-11: Target all face up non dragon type monsters on the field. Send the targeted cards to the graveyard. *12: Target all the cards on your opponent's side of the field. Send the targeted cards to the graveyard. [img]http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/9968/426593.jpg[/img] [img]http://img268.imageshack.us/img268/9968/426593.jpg[/img] [img]http://img546.imageshack.us/img546/9968/426593.jpg[/img] [img]http://img862.imageshack.us/img862/9968/426593.jpg[/img] [img]http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/9968/426593.jpg[/img] [img]http://img809.imageshack.us/img809/9968/426593.jpg[/img] [img]http://img205.imageshack.us/img205/5935/426593v.jpg[/img] [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/9968/426593.jpg[/img] [img]http://img94.imageshack.us/img94/9968/426593.jpg[/img] [img]http://img100.imageshack.us/img100/9968/426593.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted December 28, 2011 Report Share Posted December 28, 2011 [b][color=#000066]How is this a structure deck? Also:[/color][/b] [b][color=#000066]Once per turn: If this card destroys a monster by battle; This card may attack again. If this card attacks a defense position monster, inflict piercing Battle Damage to your opponent.[/color][/b] [b][color=#000066]Nice and balanced, but slightly OP'd. Ah well. 9/10[/color][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robertrex9383 Posted December 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2011 i know i know, just im not finished posting yet, but thanx anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~British Soul~ Posted December 28, 2011 Report Share Posted December 28, 2011 shouldn't Greater Dragon be an effect monster? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted December 28, 2011 Report Share Posted December 28, 2011 [color=#000066][b]Please write out lore for Gold Tempest. Some people can't see.[/b][/color] [color=#000066][b]Also, check your OCG here: [/b][/color][url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/162881-the-ocg-grammar-card-presentation-thread/"]http://forum.yugiohc...ntation-thread/[/url] [color=#000066][b]Also, for RC, make created year 1996 and Creator KAZUKI TAKAHASHI and avoid the limited edition thing.[/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robertrex9383 Posted December 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2011 hey stay on youl get to see more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted December 28, 2011 Report Share Posted December 28, 2011 [color=#000066][b]._. I am on. So did you see your above post?[/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robertrex9383 Posted December 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2011 yeah Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astolfo Posted December 28, 2011 Report Share Posted December 28, 2011 [b][color=#000066]Please try not to do one word posts. :/[/color][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robertrex9383 Posted December 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2011 ok thanxthese next three are pretty cool Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robertrex9383 Posted December 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2011 well thats all for now , ill add more soon, current amount 25/40 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mecha Love Posted December 28, 2011 Report Share Posted December 28, 2011 You asked me to have a look. Unfortunately, I'm on my mobile, which limits how in depth I can rate and critique. A common mistake is lack of capitals. You put words like normal summon, set, special summon, life points etc etc. These words have capital letters in card lores: normal summon becomes Normal Summon, set to Set, special summon to Special Summon, life points to Life Points. That sort of thing. Sorry that I can't say more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robertrex9383 Posted December 28, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 28, 2011 its ok i understand, il be sure to change that with the new ones, thanx Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 29, 2011 Report Share Posted December 29, 2011 Overlord: make sure the 2nd attack cannot be a direct one (otherwise it might get broken) Gold Tempest: the burn effect is good, but you should limit it to only once per turn, not as many times as you want for Greater Dragon, if you're going to make the 800 atk gain a permanent one, I'd recommend you say for the select a dragon type monster, that monster's atk has to be 1000 or less please write the lore out for Monochrome Dragon (too small right now) Benevolence is too powerful for nuking your opponent's entire field like that. You only said THAT card can't attack, you didn't say anything about your other monsters on the field Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robertrex9383 Posted December 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2011 thats the whole point of benevolence and malevolence, and ultamism, there realy strong cards, almost too strong, besides there are other cards with similar effects, and they were deemed fair enough to be allowed in tournaments.plus im not sure if anyone knows this but Ragnorok, means the fall of the gods, so im not sure its a good name for a card pack based on the nordic gods, and supports them, plus they didn't even spell it right, it should be Ragnarok, with two dots over the o, making a u sound. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 29, 2011 Report Share Posted December 29, 2011 oh that, I was a bit lazy to look for that symbol on Microsoft Word Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
robertrex9383 Posted December 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 its all right i just thought it would be an interesting little fact to now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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