CMRenji Posted December 29, 2011 Report Share Posted December 29, 2011 [center][b]Hello RC, it's meh, Renji, back in CC. I've been really into a few clubs recently(still gonna be), but I've decided to start posting in CC more often, post some cards, rate some etc. This is also to celebrate the fact that I'm halfway there. COME HERE YOU 6TH STAR B**TARD! --------> [img]http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/public/style_images/YCM/star.gif[/img] So without further ado, here is my returning card:[/b] [img]http://img715.imageshack.us/img715/6959/145730hm.jpg[/img][/center] [center][size=2]Image Credit: Jazin Kay[/size][/center] [center][i][b]Lore: If this card is in your Graveyard when an opponent's monster declares a direct attack: You can banish this card; Negate the attack and switch your opponent's monster into Defense Position. Your opponent cannot change the monster's position for 2 of your opponent's turns. During your Standby Phase: You can discard this card; Decrease a face-up monster's ATK or DEF by 600. Once per turn: You can banish a DARK monster from your hand; Select this card from your Graveyard or banished zone and add it to your hand or Graveyard. You can Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard by banishing 1 DARK monster from your hand or Graveyard. This card cannot declare an attack on the turn it was Special Summoned.[/b][/i][/center] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CCX-Kero Posted December 29, 2011 Report Share Posted December 29, 2011 Its a very good card.It would fit in very well with a DARK deck. I just find that being able to bring it back to your hand regardless of if it was banished or in the graveyard and still be able to Special Summon it is a little OP'ed, but that's just me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted December 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2011 Hmm, might need to change that part. Thank you for commenting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 29, 2011 Report Share Posted December 29, 2011 well that's going to be hell due to low def and your opponent can't change its position, it's an even bigger drawback than Goblin Attack Force for me I would have said it this way I'd allow your opponent to change its position via card effects still, but only during your turn. Then, when it shifts to their turn, the monster immediately goes back into def position again even so you did really well for this card, I'm impressed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted December 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2011 I get what you're saying. Now that I look at it, the fact that it keeps it in DEF position for at least a few turns may be OP'd. Perhaps I should just change it to negating the attack and switching the monster into DEF position until the opponent's next End Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 29, 2011 Report Share Posted December 29, 2011 well 1 turn seems a bit on the short end Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted December 29, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 29, 2011 How about 2 turns? I think an attack negate plus keeping a monster in DEF for 2 turns would be fair. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 29, 2011 Report Share Posted December 29, 2011 yeah that seems ok, you going to change it to that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted December 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 Yeah, I need to do it later though, gotta leave in a sec. Thank you for your help rag, you're always helpful to all us CC fellows. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 30, 2011 Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 well, there are those that disagree..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted December 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 Fix'd the card. Don't listen to haters rag, you've been helping out members for as long as I remember, pretty sure you helped me when I was a hopeless newbie. I applaud your willingness to help beginners and even master card makers. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 30, 2011 Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 tell me Renji, this going to be the only card here, or will you eventually add a support here too? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted December 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 Now that I think of it, possibly. I could imagine making a sort of set based off this card. I may actually start a new thread sometime in the near future and post support cards, and monsters that would work in tune with this guy. Or, I could get lazy. But I may try to make a set of it soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted December 30, 2011 Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1325209595' post='5737941'] well, there are those that disagree..... [/quote] We disagree because your so called advice is hardly even relevant. Most of the time you point of stuff that have been already pointed out, and you seriously don't know jack s*** about card balance. So no, Renji, we're not "hating" on ragnarok. But enough about that. Really, the card seems to be too easily summoned. Banishing a DARK to SS it from the Graveyard isn't that hard to accomplish and 2+ DARKs in the Graveyard can accomplish 3 Number 61: Volcasaurus and other Rank 5's with too much ease. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted December 30, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 Okay, well his advice is a bit dated, but I just said that he's good with helping out with some errors and is really helpful with new members. But, I don't wish to start something about all that. What would you think if I made it so you banish 2 DARKs and/or adding an effect that says it can't be used in a Synchro/Xyz summon on the turn it was SSd? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 30, 2011 Report Share Posted December 30, 2011 [quote name='CM Renji' timestamp='1325216906' post='5738180'] Now that I think of it, possibly. I could imagine making a sort of set based off this card. I may actually start a new thread sometime in the near future and post support cards, and monsters that would work in tune with this guy. Or, I could get lazy. But I may try to make a set of it soon. [/quote] if you do just let us know, k? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted December 31, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 I most certainly will, may be a while though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted December 31, 2011 Report Share Posted December 31, 2011 that's ok, we can wait Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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