! BIG_SCRUB ! Posted January 7, 2012 Report Share Posted January 7, 2012 I used to frequent YCM quite a bit a few years ago with an older account, and thought I'd get back into making cards and posting in the forums and stuff. Here's my first card for this account [img]http://img851.imageshack.us/img851/9803/537547.jpg[/img] Image Credit goes to =leomon32 on Deviant Art I'll be making sets and arch-types but I'll be finding images to use / drawing card arts. Thanks for viewing/comments/feedback! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
101100111000 Posted January 7, 2012 Report Share Posted January 7, 2012 Well, I like the card (I don't like that it's a panda, but whatever), but there are some tiny card grammar errors you've got going ("Banish(ed)" should be "banish(ed)"). The resolve of the first effect I would've written as "During the Damage Step, this card gains the banished monster's ATK and DEF" (I'm a little iffy on stating DEF, as it would only be required if you were hit with Piercing Damage, which isn't that common). As for the second effect, personally, I would prefer using the End Phase as the time to Shuffle the card back in, to avoid little instances of confusion where one would forget to do it until the end of their turn. I like how you seemingly made this card's ATK and DEF below average for a Level 4 just to "compensate" for the gain during the Damage Step. Overall, the card looks nice, the effect is great, it's all just the grammar that needs some work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 7, 2012 Report Share Posted January 7, 2012 1450 isn't really powerful, but it works due to the atk gain effect problem is it only lasts 1 turn, and then goes back into the deck the 1st part where it's only temporary is fine, but the 2nd really brings it down if you're going to do that, you shouldn't have said it can't be special summoned from the deck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted January 7, 2012 Report Share Posted January 7, 2012 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1325930339' post='5752295'] if you're going to do that, you shouldn't have said it can't be special summoned from the deck [/quote] It's good to see that you understand that the first effect isn't all that good, but why the hell are you suggesting to make it even more underpowered than it already is? Special Summoning from the Deck is all this card really has going on for it (Giant Rat etc. etc.), so why would you even suggest that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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