Nightblade Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 Yay my first post. Anyways, I love Dragon Quest, it's an awesome JRPG. So far I have 6 Dragon Quest Cards. Another thing about me: I love to hear good/bad criticism. So tell me what I need to fix, and it'll be done in almost a flash. Cards: [spoiler/][img]http://img847.imageshack.us/img847/415/531223.jpg[/img][img]http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/415/531223.jpg[/img][img]http://img202.imageshack.us/img202/415/531223.jpg[/img][img]http://img32.imageshack.us/img32/415/531223.jpg[/img][img]http://img842.imageshack.us/img842/415/531223.jpg[/img][img]http://img163.imageshack.us/img163/1023/531223l.jpg[/img][/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Yairnet Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 You need to fix the cards ASAP after that I will give you my opinion Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightblade Posted January 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 [quote name='Yairnet' timestamp='1326038328' post='5754433'] You need to fix the cards ASAP after that I will give you my opinion [/quote] Okay, personally I think I should change Dragon Lord to Dragonlord and change him to a normal monster. So I'll get that done. (If that's what you meant) I'll find other things to fix also. Don't worry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Yairnet Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 [quote name='Nightblade' timestamp='1326038809' post='5754445'] Okay, personally I think I should change Dragon Lord to Dragonlord and change him to a normal monster. So I'll get that done. (If that's what you meant) I'll find other things to fix also. Don't worry. [/quote] I don't know anything about Dragon Quest. What I meant by fixing is the pics but, hey if you want to fix other things, knock yourself out. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 You're a newbie here, you'll get the hang of things soon enough. Ask for some help around and you'll improve your card making. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hermit Purple Posted January 8, 2012 Report Share Posted January 8, 2012 if anything, its the pictures..thats really it. but in my opinion, you should make more effect monsters and shorten the amount of normals you put. but remember that's just me, you don't have to if you don't want too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nightblade Posted January 13, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 13, 2012 Oh... well thanks for the info. It was hard to find anything for the Dragonlord's Flame so... I just used that pic. I will find better ones though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jdrawer Posted January 16, 2012 Report Share Posted January 16, 2012 Slime: Please make it an Aqua type. Also, Water would be a good attribute. Jessica: Please make it a Warrior or Spellcaster type. Dragonlord: Make it level 7 or 8, it's weaker than Blue Eyes. Also, make it a Vanilla. Dragonlord's Flame: "If 'Dragon Lord' is on the field, this card may be used as a tribute to give 'Dragon Lord' 1000 ATK" should be written as "Activate while 'Dragon Lord' is on the field. Increase its ATK by 1000 until the End Phase." You might want to make it a counter spell. Trap Chest: Kinda high, try 800, like Ookazi. If you want to make it stronger, make it 850, or give it some sort of payment, like destroying a card from the hand. Bianca: Make it a Spellcaster, not a "Human / Mage." Pics: Slime, DragonLord, and Bianca's pics need backgrounds. Dragonlord's Flame and Trap Chest are okay, it'll be kinda hard to find any better. Try deviantArt. I hope this helps! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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