Alice Moonflowyr Posted January 19, 2012 Report Share Posted January 19, 2012 [img]http://img837.imageshack.us/img837/4110/203822.jpg[/img][spoiler=Lore]1 tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters. This card can attack your opponent directly while in Defense mode. When it does: Inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each Xyz monster they have on the field. Once per turn: Decrease this cards DEF by 1000; Destroy one Xyz monster your opponent controls.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted January 19, 2012 Report Share Posted January 19, 2012 Good, but only because of the first effect. Utterly remove the really bad anti-Xyz effect, and add something more useful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted January 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2012 Like what? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
.Rai Posted January 19, 2012 Report Share Posted January 19, 2012 No clue, but I'm sure you can think of something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc. Posted January 19, 2012 Report Share Posted January 19, 2012 [quote name='Dworkin' timestamp='1327004262' post='5771505'] [img]http://img560.imageshack.us/img560/8711/203822t.jpg[/img] [spoiler=Lore]1 tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters. This card can attack your opponent directly while in Defense mode. When it does: Inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each Xyz monster they have on the field. Once per turn: Decrease this cards DEF by 1000; Destroy one Xyz monster your opponent controls.[/spoiler] [/quote] This, to some degree is OP, Only drawback for the first effect is the decreasing DEF, but overall, nice card, Picture needs polishing a little, also, What happens when DEF hits 0? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted January 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2012 [quote name='DemoPan' timestamp='1327004870' post='5771518'] This, to some degree is OP, Only drawback for the first effect is the decreasing DEF, but overall, nice card, Picture needs polishing a little, also, What happens when DEF hits 0? [/quote]The second effect is optional, and usable three times. You could theroretically go through the whole duel without using the second effect. Nothing happens. Except he becomes more vulnerable. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc. Posted January 19, 2012 Report Share Posted January 19, 2012 [quote name='Dworkin' timestamp='1327004955' post='5771522'] The second effect is optional, and usable three times. You could theroretically go through the whole duel without using the second effect. Nothing happens. Except he becomes more vulnerable. [/quote] Still OP in my opinion, noobs will probably cry when this card is on one of those online YGO games, forgot the name but i think it allows you to upload your own cards XD. EDIT: Also, any card that raises defense, again OP. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted January 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 19, 2012 I based it off Evil HERO Infernal Sniper. I worked his effect to go anti-Xyz. The 3000 DEF is only 3000 cus of the second effect. And there is always the possibility that someone will not use Xyz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted January 19, 2012 Report Share Posted January 19, 2012 If you want to make this effect optional, you've got to use the 2 simple words, which are YOU and CAN. Put them together and you get what? [i]You can[/i], obviously. If you're not using "you can" in the effect, the effect will be treated as mandatory, ie you will have to activate the effect if the conditions can be matched. Anyways, the card would be fine without the last effect, but I really have no idea, same as .Rai. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted January 19, 2012 Report Share Posted January 19, 2012 nice, like Total Defense Shogun that can attack in def however the last effect is situational since it requires xyz monsters on the field, which may not be the case all the time you should have allowed it for other monsters your opponent controls too, then just change the cost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted January 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted January 20, 2012 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1327014888' post='5771750'] nice, like Total Defense Shogun that can attack in def however the last effect is situational since it requires xyz monsters on the field, which may not be the case all the time you should have allowed it for other monsters your opponent controls too, then just change the cost [/quote]No, I want it strictly anti-Xyz. [quote name='Zanda Panda' timestamp='1327010865' post='5771641'] If you want to make this effect optional, you've got to use the 2 simple words, which are YOU and CAN. Put them together and you get what? [i]You can[/i], obviously. If you're not using "you can" in the effect, the effect will be treated as mandatory, ie you will have to activate the effect if the conditions can be matched. Anyways, the card would be fine without the last effect, but I really have no idea, same as .Rai. [/quote]oh s***, forgot the YouCan. Poop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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