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[align=center]I have been bored so i made this, i saw the wonderful picture that wolf made and i said "I must make a card with one of the pictures" so i made one.

 

I really hope you like this card, to understand it fully read the notes ^_^.

 

Breaker Unit X-045

Common-Phantom Rare

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Effect-

If your opponent activates a Spell or Trap card pay 600 Life Points to activate one of the following effects

- negate the effect of the Spell or Trap and destroy the card.

- Set the Spell or Trap card then draw 2 cards and then discard 1 card.

 

Notes-

- The picture is made by wolfy.

- The ATK and DEF is to give the card a Mechanic feeling.

- The card is a personal faviourate.

- Hope you like the card

- I love Snickers ^_^

- We have Cookies @_@

 

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OCG errors. Re-worded effect:

 

As long as this card remains face-up on your side of the field, when your opponent activates a Spell or Trap card you may pay 600 Life Points to activate one of the following effects:

- Negate the activation of the Spell or Trap card and destroy it.

- Your opponent must Set the Spell or Trap card face-down on the field. You must then draw 2 cards from your Deck, then discard 1 card.

 

Other than that, not bad. I don't see what's so awesome about the picture, but that's just me. I'm not particularly fond of the ATK and DEF, especially considering they make the monster overpowered.

 

-Artwork: 8.5/10

-OCG: 7/10

-Originality: 8/10

-Balance: 6.5/10

-Effect: 8.5/10

 

~Overall: 7.7 (Fix OCG, reduce stats and increase activation cost, or nerf the effect)

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when you say "Spell or Trap card" it should be "Spell or Trap Card"

 

Yea, he is right. It's good.

 

"When your opponent activates a Spell or Trap Card, you may pay 600 Life Points to activate one of the following effects:

- Negate the activation of the Spell or Trap Card and destroy it.

- Negate the activation of the Spell or Trap Card and Set it on your opponent's side of the field, then draw 2 cards from your Deck and discard 1 card from your hand."

 

^^^This i guess, sounds better.

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