Guest setojim Posted February 24, 2008 Report Share Posted February 24, 2008 PLZ rate and suggest...thnx. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted February 24, 2008 Report Share Posted February 24, 2008 You need to improve on your capitalization errors, and the uniqueness of both the effect and picture. Once you improve on these things, your work will be about perfect! Keep up the good work! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EliminateHRN Posted February 24, 2008 Report Share Posted February 24, 2008 Bad Pic Graveyard 2x Special Summon Spell Card but it is alright 5.7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted February 24, 2008 Report Share Posted February 24, 2008 omg,was that an insult glasstin?! im appalled.... thats alot meaner than what you normally talk like.... i do like the attempt at balance... just improve the picture, some of the card text and lower the atk... otherwise great card... love the balance attempt, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
baritone_rob05 Posted February 24, 2008 Report Share Posted February 24, 2008 good effect, bad pic 6/10 need tof ix errors. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 24, 2008 Report Share Posted February 24, 2008 All above me more or less said it, improve on the OCC and picture a little and these cards will be very nice indeed.You must also post a disclaimer.8/10 ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultima™ Posted February 24, 2008 Report Share Posted February 24, 2008 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest setojim Posted February 25, 2008 Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 srry bout my "awful" work... for 1, i couldnt find another good pic of silent swordsman so i made my own...second, its ATK and stuff should stay the same since its more like the broken dark monsters in PTDN.lastly, i just dont capitalize things cuz i think it takes too long...xD...and just never really liked capitalizing things other than names and the beginning of the sentence. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RestLess-BoTics Posted February 25, 2008 Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 It's not awful at all... :)Most cardmakers aren't absolutely amazing, so keep a positive attitude, and keep on striving for perfection! :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest setojim Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 thank you glasstin, and if you wanna help me find a wicked'er version of silent swordsman, id love the help...im still open to suggestions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 You need to improve on your capitalization errors Agreed. Also, might I add, Bah-Roke! You get a +1 draw every time your opponent activates a Spell? Not very balanced. The artwork isn't too great either.It's a good effort you just need to look back over the effect and possibly make it less overpowered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Purple Dinosaur Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 The image is basically an inverted Swordsman with "The Beginning of the End" as a Background. Weirdness. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest setojim Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 i no...i was tryin to get people to help me w/ a new pic....anywho....ya..xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kale Posted May 15, 2008 Report Share Posted May 15, 2008 it seems a tad overpowered, because with this you could easily summon more than one monster in a turn and when anyone activates a spell its good for you and only you. Either you gain a card, or the opponent loses life points, it wouldnt matter to me who activated a spell. ^_^ 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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