Arunos Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 [IMG]http://i1205.photobucket.com/albums/bb431/Rai_Clearheart/createcard.jpg[/IMG] i tried my best to make it like a balanced card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guuu1234 Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 Pretty good. Simple is better and, imo, pretty hailed upon in RC. Your OCG could use some work (I'm bad at fixing OCG, so maybe another member can help you out, sorry). Hmm this is just me, but maybe you can increase the defense by 200? That way it won't be totally runover early game by things like Thunder-King/Doomcaliber Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
R3mixKillah Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 im not the best but i think it goes like this. OCG fix:[b][i] Once per turn, when a dragon-type monster on your side of the field is the target of a card effect, negate the effect.[/i][/b] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 [quote name='R3mixKillah' timestamp='1329058232' post='5812567'] im not the best but i think it goes like this. OCG fix:[b][i] Once per turn, when a dragon-type monster on your side of the field is the target of a card effect, negate the effect.[/i][/b] [/quote] If you know that you're not good with fixing OCG, why do you even bother posting an OCG fix in the first place? [i][b]Once during either players turn[/b], if another Dragon-Type monster is targeted by the effect of[/i] [i]a Spell, Trap, or Effect Monster; negate the effect of that card,[b] and destroy it[/b].[/i] I added the "once during either players turn" and "and destroy it" to the effect because it just makes the card better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jaster_rogue Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 Yeah, just correct the OCG and it'll be fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 well it should be fine now that you said it can only be limited to once per turn now all you need is another Dark Aura Dragon on the field and it'll be just fine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
drcrisis Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 Lord of D? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 12, 2012 Report Share Posted February 12, 2012 and that's exactly how to make it happen Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arunos Posted February 13, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 13, 2012 Thank you for your feed back ive been working on a card game so i need to learn balance, but yea i agree with most of the comments. [img]http://i1205.photobucket.com/albums/bb431/Rai_Clearheart/createcard-1.jpg[/img] there i think that is better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 13, 2012 Report Share Posted February 13, 2012 you should have said if another Dragon type monster of a different name Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Valkyrus Posted February 13, 2012 Report Share Posted February 13, 2012 [quote name='Zanda Panda' timestamp='1329061027' post='5812616'] If you know that you're not good with fixing OCG, why do you even bother posting an OCG fix in the first place? [i][b]Once during either[size=6] players[/size] turn[/b], if another Dragon-Type monster is targeted by the effect of[/i] [i]a Spell, Trap, or Effect Monster; negate the effect of that card,[b] and destroy it[/b].[/i] I added the "once during either players turn" and "and destroy it" to the effect because it just makes the card better. [/quote] it's either [b]player's[/b]. If you're going to lecture others, try to be flawless yourself, or you're just going to sound bad. And actually I think it'd go more like this: "..if another Dragon-Type monster on your side of the field is targeted by a Spell, Trap or a Monster Card's Effect.." (not a fix, just an alternative) About the card, pretty good for a first try in my opinion. It's really like a Dragon version of Lord of D. which makes it better than him Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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