Dryad Posted February 25, 2008 Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 I feel as if I am slippingSlipping into a void of darknessSurrounded by my own inner demonsWho laugh and jeer at me Hate consumes my eternal heartLeaving an empty shell behindA shell comprised of nothingNothing but an eternal hatred Demeter's sorrow comesBringing with it, a hopeA hope that something good can comeOf the eternal hatred held captive within Hell-stricken souls bind togetherLooking for something lostLost some time agoSomething never to be seen again Hope, Happiness, Love, Fulfillment Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted February 25, 2008 Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 That poem is very emotional, which makes it good 10/10 ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 25, 2008 Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 Very nice poem, as you may be aware, i also have much talent for poem writing, inspired by me? Anyway please post more poems; you have talent. :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ITI3L33 Posted February 25, 2008 Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 Very good. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arpeejajo Posted February 25, 2008 Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 I like that. It's very deep. 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Slime Lord Posted February 25, 2008 Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 Emo much? :P I thought it was pretty good. Helluva lot a better than what I can do (although I don't think I've ever sat down and wrote a poem before). Anyway, u can haz a cheezburger :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dryad Posted February 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 @ Slime Lord: Uh... you can keep the cheezburger, I'm Lactose intolerant Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Slime Lord Posted February 25, 2008 Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 Oh, that sucks. Hamburgerz? :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dryad Posted February 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 : pulls out a Veg-Burger: I prefer this :razz: Thanks everyone for these very nice comments :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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