Lucas Maximus Posted February 25, 2008 Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 This is my 4th poem i have submitted on this site, i don't think its the best i have wrote but still i hope you like it. ^_^ It is a void of immeasurable coldIt goes on forever, with nary a foldIt is home to every bright starIts endless blackness they do marThe glory of it puts all else to shameFrom destruction in ice to birth within flameThe flame fuels the forge constantly makingCold is the fuel for the endless breakingThe fabric of life is like laceReady to tear in what we call space Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kizzi Posted February 25, 2008 Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 O_oStop being so awesome! That's my job! (xD, j/k) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 Thankyou kizzi, i'm awesome. O_oNobody ever told me i was awesome. ='/I'm very glad you like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nobody9999 Posted February 25, 2008 Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 Wow, that's uber "Set my mind into space"9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 Thanks Sonic, i'm glad you like it, any ideas on what my next poem could be on? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nobody9999 Posted February 25, 2008 Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 The sky? The ocean? The earth? Life? Beans? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 Thanksyou for your ideas, i'm going to try and come up with some poem on the ocean. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted February 25, 2008 Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 Thats Great o.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 25, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 Thanks Slash. =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parting Shot Posted February 25, 2008 Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 well, it's certainly interesting. definitely got me thinking about space. overall - i rather enjoyed it ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Careless Whisper Posted February 25, 2008 Report Share Posted February 25, 2008 and yet, another awesome poem, I crown you, YCM Poet King....none shall challenge you, for none can overthrow you...lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flame Dragon Posted February 26, 2008 Report Share Posted February 26, 2008 Dude, that is so deep. I'm in shock. I love that poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rentaworrio Posted February 26, 2008 Report Share Posted February 26, 2008 ^_^0_o>o< Awsome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liverpool rule Posted February 26, 2008 Report Share Posted February 26, 2008 10/10 awesomewhen r u gonna write some more cos if that ones anything to go by then it will be grate :mrgreen: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joenorman Posted February 26, 2008 Report Share Posted February 26, 2008 O_oStop being so awesome! That's my job! (xD' date=' j/k)[/quote'] no offense but that poem was awsome.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
loren Posted February 26, 2008 Report Share Posted February 26, 2008 shweet Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 26, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 26, 2008 Thankyou very much all, i'm going to post another one tonight, twill be my 5th and it will be on the subject of the ocean. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted February 26, 2008 Report Share Posted February 26, 2008 Why are your poems so awsome?!? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Silencerleader Posted February 27, 2008 Report Share Posted February 27, 2008 It's all right...7.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Supreme Gamesmaster Posted February 27, 2008 Report Share Posted February 27, 2008 Deep. You should do one on cheese puffs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted February 27, 2008 Author Report Share Posted February 27, 2008 Why are your poems so awsome?!? My poems are only so awesome because it takes me about 30 days to write' date=' edit and be happy with, i put much effort into my poems. ^_^ It's all right...7.9/10 Its all right? Why is it only all right? Tell me what you dislike about it? =/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
liverpool rule Posted March 3, 2008 Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 yeah what is wrong with it it is 100percent awesome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucas Maximus Posted March 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 Thanks liverpool rule! Thankyou for the rating and thankyou for bumping my thread. ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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