Akeno_Ederis_17 Posted February 17, 2012 Report Share Posted February 17, 2012 [img]http://img39.imageshack.us/img39/7021/332516.jpg[/img] [s]LORE: [size=5][color=#b22222]Cannot be normal summoned or set. Must be summoned by its own effect. During your draw phase and you draw this card: you can skip your stand by phase and main phase 1; special summon this card from your hand. only counter traps may be activated in response to the summon of this card. once per phase: add 1 time counter on this card. you can release 1 time counter on this to decrease the ATK of 1 monster on the field by 700. if the ATK of a monster becomes 0 by this card's effect, destroy that card. this card cannot be destroyed twice per turn(either by battle of by card effect).[/color][/size][/s] the new one: [img]http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/4053/332516v.jpg[/img] [color=#B22222][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][size=5]Cannot be normal summoned or set. Must be special summoned by its own effect. During your draw phase and you draw this card: you can skip your entire turn then banish this card ;special summon this banished card banished this way at the battle phase of your opponent.[/size][/size][/font][/color][color=#B22222][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][size=5]only counter traps may be activated in response to [/size][/size][/font][/color][color=#B22222][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][size=5]the summon of this card. once per phase: add 1 time counter on this card. you can release 1 time counter on this to decrease the ATK of 1 monster on the field by 400. if the ATK of a monster becomes 0 by this card's effect, destroy that card. This card cannot be destroyed by battle.[/size][/size][/font][/color] i personally made that artwork xD so i wanna hear your comment about the artwork and the effect.. (i know its not that perfect.. but still i want to hear those comments) COMMENTS,SUGGESTIONS,REACTIONS,RATE [size=6][color=#ff0000]THANKS [/color][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MORPHINGJARFORTHEWIN Posted February 17, 2012 Report Share Posted February 17, 2012 this card cannot be destroyed twice per turn??? what does that mean?? other than that, nice artwork.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted February 18, 2012 Report Share Posted February 18, 2012 So it's a 2500 beastick out from nowhere? Bad card design, seriously. No, really, it doesn't matter that it has crappy effects, other than the destruction protection, the fact is that this card has such an easy Summoning condition that it's not even funny. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 18, 2012 Report Share Posted February 18, 2012 this isn't hard to get to the field at all also, why are you making it once per phase and not once per turn? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akeno_Ederis_17 Posted February 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2012 im not sure.. why i even posted that anyway,,, forget about the first one.,,... here's a repaired version: [img]http://img850.imageshack.us/img850/4053/332516v.jpg[/img] LORE: [color=#B22222][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=5]Cannot be normal summoned or set. Must be special summoned by its own effect. During your draw phase and you draw this card: you can skip your entire turn then banish this card ;special summon this banished card banished this way at the battle phase of your opponent.[/size][/font][/color][color=#B22222][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=5]only counter traps may be activated in response to [/size][/font][/color][color=#B22222][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=5]the summon of this card. once per phase: add 1 time counter on this card. you can release 1 time counter on this to decrease the ATK of 1 monster on the field by 400. if the ATK of a monster becomes 0 by this card's effect, destroy that card. This card cannot be destroyed by battle.[/size][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 18, 2012 Report Share Posted February 18, 2012 you were supposed to say must be SPECIAL summoned by its own effect if you say just summoned by its own effect, that would include normal and special summoning Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akeno_Ederis_17 Posted February 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2012 kk done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 18, 2012 Report Share Posted February 18, 2012 that's more like it now, with regards to the 400 atk drop, it's a bit small. Even shrink is more effective, despite only temporary Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Akeno_Ederis_17 Posted February 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 18, 2012 i was goin to make it 500,, but there's more than 5 phases i na turn.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 18, 2012 Report Share Posted February 18, 2012 and what would that do in the case of 500? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
101100111000 Posted February 18, 2012 Report Share Posted February 18, 2012 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1329545940' post='5824133'] that's more like it now, with regards to the 400 atk drop, it's a bit small. Even shrink is more effective, despite only temporary [/quote] Yeah no. Keyword: Once per phase. This thing accumulates 10 Counters faster than you can recite the Star-Spangled Banner. Starting from the SECOND this thing is SS'ed: Oppo's Battle Phase: 1 total Main Phase 2: 2 total End Phase: 3 Your draw Phase: 4 Standby: 5 Main Phase 1: 6 and so on and so forth. This thing is a Counter machine. Just for reaching your first Main Phase, this thing has the capacities to reduce a card's ATK by 2400, and ultimately destroying it by the second Main, when it'll have a possible 3200 ATK to remove. The severely restricting Summoning conditions is meh, considering there ARE a number of cards to return it to the Deck (ie Transmigration Prophecy). Being at 1500 ATK, certain combinations may allow you to Sangan, then return it to the top of your Deck, but most of them are too much work. I have better things to do than hope I SS this card and hope (again) that my opponent doesn't decide to destroy it. Overall, one could say this card isn't good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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