Kitsumonogatari Posted February 19, 2012 Report Share Posted February 19, 2012 Thanks for entering, please leave a Comment and fix my Grammar lulz ^^ Card Images from RIP... I Mean HPDOOM [b]Berserker - Mijukuna[/b] [img]http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/2258/416492.jpg[/img] [b]ATK 900 [/b] [b]DEF 0[/b] [b]LVL 3[/b] [b]Tuner[/b] Lore:If this card is Send to the Graveyard from your Deck, You can Special Summon it to your Side of the Field. This card's name is treated as "Berserker - Thanatos" while it is face-up on the field, Once per Turn you can Send 1 card from your Hand to the Graveyard, if you do, Change this Monster Attribute to FIRE Until the End Phase. (You can use this One as a tuner with a Archetype that send your deck to graveyard) [b]Berserker - Thanatos[/b] [img]http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/2258/416492.jpg[/img] [b]ATK 1400[/b] [b]DEF 1100[/b] [b]LVL 4[/b] [b]Lore[/b]:If this card is sent to the Graveyard from your Deck; You can Special Summon it to your Side of the Field. When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle: you can send the top card from your Deck to the Graveyard; Special Summon 1 Lvl 3 or Lower FIRE monster from your Deck or Hand to your Side of the Field. [b]Berserker - Genesis[/b] [img]http://img35.imageshack.us/img35/5263/416492q.jpg[/img] [b]ATK 2300[/b] [b]DEF 2600[/b] [b]LVL 6[/b] [b]FUSION[/b] Lore:Berserker - Thanatos + Any FIRE Monster This card must be Fusion Summoned with `Berserking Invoke`and cannot be Summoned by other ways. If your opponent controls no cards except Defense Position monsters; this card can attack your opponent directly. Once per turn: you can send the 2 top cards from your Deck to the Graveyard; destroy 1 face-up monster in Attack Position your opponent controls with 1600 or less ATK. [b]Berserking Invoke[/b] [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/2258/416492.jpg[/img] [b]Continuos Spell[/b] [b](Pay attention that it is Continue)[/b] Lore:Send the 2 top cards from your Deck to your Graveyard and Pay 1000 Life Points: send, from your hand or your side of the field to the Graveyard, the Fusion Material Monsters that are listed on a "Berserk" Fusion Monster; Special Summon that Fusion Monster from your Extra Deck. (This Special Summon is treated as a Fusion Summon). Monsters Summoned by this effect cannot be destroyed by battle or card effects during turn it is Fusion Summoned. What do ya think?, ill love using those cards in a Duel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 19, 2012 Report Share Posted February 19, 2012 for Mijukuna, changing its attribute is fine, but since it's temporary, I see no reason to limit it to only ONCE per duel. Certainly once per turn is too much, but still Thanatos I wished you made it treated as a FIRE attribute as well, that way it'll help out Mijukuna Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitsumonogatari Posted February 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2012 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1329694340' post='5827716'] for Mijukuna, changing its attribute is fine, but since it's temporary, I see no reason to limit it to only ONCE per duel. Certainly once per turn is too much, but still Thanatos I wished you made it treated as a FIRE attribute as well, that way it'll help out Mijukuna [/quote] Will make Miju to Once per turn, thanks for the advice ^^ btw, in a scale, how would you rate it? *wink *wink* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 19, 2012 Report Share Posted February 19, 2012 if you have to insist, I'll say like 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitsumonogatari Posted February 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2012 I SAID [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]*wink *wink* SO 10/10 NAO[/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]jk jk, thanks for Wasting your time on there ^^[/size][/font][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 19, 2012 Report Share Posted February 19, 2012 sorry my friend, but 10/10 is almost impossible from me because there's no such thing as a perfect custom card so if you want that, you'd REALLY have to leap off the page Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitsumonogatari Posted February 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 19, 2012 Ikr , btw, how the heck u are everywhere and always in all the posts O__O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 19, 2012 Report Share Posted February 19, 2012 I'm not, but that's beside the point I'm actually hoping you could make the set a bit bigger Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted February 20, 2012 Report Share Posted February 20, 2012 I'm rating these because Ragnarok has, ergo you have had no decent rating; that, plus your Avi has some nice tits: [b]Berserker - Mijukuna[/b] [b]OCG FIX:[/b] If this card is sent from your Deck to the Graveyard; You can Special Summon this monster (from your Graveyard) to your side of the Field. This card's name is treated as "Berserker - Thanatos" while it is face-up on the field. Once per Turn: you can send 1 card from your Hand to the Graveyard; treat this card's Attribute to FIRE Until the End Phase. ...meh, nothing special: It has Wulf's Sp Summon clause plus it mills. 7/10 [b]Berserker - Thanatos[/b] [b]OCG FIX:[/b] If this card is sent to the Graveyard from your Deck; You can Special Summon it to your Side of the Field. When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle: you can send the top card from your Deck to the Graveyard; Special Summon 1 Lvl 4 or Lower FIRE monster from your Deck or Hand to your Side of the Field. This is both Broken and Overpowered (the card's effect is too powerful) because you can just spam any Lv4 beater. You need to weaken this effect and limit it greatly, because Special Summoning when you destroy an opponent's monster is generally an unfair clause; maybe have it recover cards from your Graveyard to your Deck? How it is now = 4/10 [b]Berserker - Genesis[/b] [b]OCG FIX:[/b] Berserker - Thanatos + Any FIRE Monster This card must be Fusion Summoned with `Berserking Invoke`and cannot be Summoned by other ways. If your opponent controls no cards except Defense Position monsters; this card can attack your opponent directly. Once per turn: you can send the 2 top cards from your Deck to the Graveyard; destroy 1 face-up monster in Attack Position your opponent controls with 1800 or less ATK. Considering the summoning clause, I think this card's effect is fine; Black Tyranno clause + 1800 smash for 2 cards, not bad...I'd say maybe tone the ATK limit to 1500. 7/10 [b]Berserking Invoke[/b] [b]OCG FIX:[/b] Send the 3 top cards from your Deck to your Graveyard and Pay 1500 Life Points: send, from your hand or your side of the field to the Graveyard, the Fusion Material Monsters that are listed on a "Berserk" Fusion Monster; Special Summon that Fusion Monster from your Extra Deck. (This Special Summon is treated as a Fusion Summon). Monsters Summoned by this effect cannot be destroyed by battle or card effects during turn it is Fusion Summoned. Very harsh summoning criteria, so all I can say is chop off the 1500. 7/10 [b]Overall Rating: 6.25/10[/b] [hr] Okay... [quote]for Mijukuna, changing its attribute is fine, but since it's temporary, I see no reason to limit it to only ONCE per duel. Certainly once per turn is too much, but still Thanatos I wished you made it treated as a FIRE attribute as well, that way it'll help out Mijukuna[/quote] This is not a good review, because it contains minimal advice on the matter; Ragnarok has a knack at this but to give him credit he does give some feedback. Some people get eff all but Ragnarok doesn't give any decent criticism to make your cards better. Your cards all have OCG issues, which means Official Card Grammer; you should keep up to date with this in order to make your cards much more realistic and closer to that 10/10. It takes time, but all you need to do is look at a few new cards in the TCG and you'll be fine. I'll gladly keep reviewing this set for you, with a good quality level of scrutiny in contrast to Rag work. ¬_¬ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitsumonogatari Posted February 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2012 [quote name='::Kyng::' timestamp='1329696790' post='5827835'] I'm rating these because Ragnarok has, ergo you have had no decent rating; that,[b]--------->[/b] [b][i][u]plus your Avi has some nice tits[/u][/i] <------------[/b] [b]Berserker - Mijukuna[/b] [b]OCG FIX:[/b] If this card is sent from your Deck to the Graveyard; You can Special Summon this monster (from your Graveyard) to your side of the Field. This card's name is treated as "Berserker - Thanatos" while it is face-up on the field. Once per Turn: you can send 1 card from your Hand to the Graveyard; treat this card's Attribute to FIRE Until the End Phase. ...meh, nothing special: It has Wulf's Sp Summon clause plus it mills. 7/10 [b]Berserker - Thanatos[/b] [b]OCG FIX:[/b] If this card is sent to the Graveyard from your Deck; You can Special Summon it to your Side of the Field. When this card destroys an opponent's monster by battle: you can send the top card from your Deck to the Graveyard; Special Summon 1 Lvl 4 or Lower FIRE monster from your Deck or Hand to your Side of the Field. This is both Broken and Overpowered (the card's effect is too powerful) because you can just spam any Lv4 beater. You need to weaken this effect and limit it greatly, because Special Summoning when you destroy an opponent's monster is generally an unfair clause; maybe have it recover cards from your Graveyard to your Deck? How it is now = 4/10 [b]Berserker - Genesis[/b] [b]OCG FIX:[/b] Berserker - Thanatos + Any FIRE Monster This card must be Fusion Summoned with `Berserking Invoke`and cannot be Summoned by other ways. If your opponent controls no cards except Defense Position monsters; this card can attack your opponent directly. Once per turn: you can send the 2 top cards from your Deck to the Graveyard; destroy 1 face-up monster in Attack Position your opponent controls with 1800 or less ATK. Considering the summoning clause, I think this card's effect is fine; Black Tyranno clause + 1800 smash for 2 cards, not bad...I'd say maybe tone the ATK limit to 1500. 7/10 [b]Berserking Invoke[/b] [b]OCG FIX:[/b] Send the 3 top cards from your Deck to your Graveyard and Pay 1500 Life Points: send, from your hand or your side of the field to the Graveyard, the Fusion Material Monsters that are listed on a "Berserk" Fusion Monster; Special Summon that Fusion Monster from your Extra Deck. (This Special Summon is treated as a Fusion Summon). Monsters Summoned by this effect cannot be destroyed by battle or card effects during turn it is Fusion Summoned. Very harsh summoning criteria, so all I can say is chop off the 1500. 7/10 [b]Overall Rating: 6.25/10[/b] [hr] Okay... This is not a good review, because it contains minimal advice on the matter; Ragnarok has a knack at this but to give him credit he does give some feedback. Some people get eff all but Ragnarok doesn't give any decent criticism to make your cards better. Your cards all have OCG issues, which means Official Card Grammer; you should keep up to date with this in order to make your cards much more realistic and closer to that 10/10. It takes time, but all you need to do is look at a few new cards in the TCG and you'll be fine. I'll gladly keep reviewing this set for you, with a good quality level of scrutiny in contrast to Rag work. ¬_¬ [/quote] you needed to say that? lol and, thanks for really making a wall, ill try fixing most of the things you said ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted February 20, 2012 Report Share Posted February 20, 2012 Well, when a possibly good card maker, who's avi, as previously stated, has a nice rack, is mislead by Ragnarok, I have to step in; you know what to do with the OCG Fixes, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitsumonogatari Posted February 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 20, 2012 [s]Ignore them right?[/s] Change my shitty grammar for that OCG Fixes ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted February 20, 2012 Report Share Posted February 20, 2012 Now you're on the ball. Also, do notice how Ragnarok did not mention this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kitsumonogatari Posted February 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 21, 2012 Bump? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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