Sergio Dark World General Posted February 22, 2012 Report Share Posted February 22, 2012 [img]http://img823.imageshack.us/img823/4206/427513a.jpg[/img] On your 3rd End Phase after this card is Summoned: You can Tribute 1 "Aragami - Arda Nova" you control; SpecialSummon 1 "Argami - Fallen Arda Nova". Once per turn: You can discard 1 random card from your opponent's hand; Gain 1000 Life Points. [img]http://img593.imageshack.us/img593/5285/427513.jpg[/img] [b][color=#3A3A3A]Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must first be Special Summoned by the effect of "Aragami - Arda Nova". I[/color][/b][color=#3A3A3A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]f [b]S[/b]pecial [b]S[/b]ummoned [b]by this effect: D[/b]estroy 1 card on the field. Once per turn[b]:[/b] [b]Y[/b]ou can pay 1000 [b]Life Points[/b][b]; Inflict 1500 points of damage to your opponent. [/b][/size][/font][/color] ~More aragami cards soon , rate if possible :3~ [img]http://img843.imageshack.us/img843/4302/427513l.jpg[/img] When this card is summoned your opponent loses 500LP.If this card is in face-up defense position destroy this card.If this card is destroyed by its effect special summon 1 "Aragami - Fallen Borg Camlann" from your hand or deck. [img]http://img16.imageshack.us/img16/5285/427513.jpg[/img] This card can only be special summoned by the effect of "Aragami - Borg Camlann".When this card is special summoned this way acticate 1 of these effects: -Draw 2 cards -Discard 1 card and pay 1000LP and destroy 2 cards your opponent controls. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted February 23, 2012 Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 Ok rating! (since u 2star or below u get +5 on each)... [size=1][sub]so for true rating minus 5 each or 20 from total xP[/sub][/size] OCG - 10/25 Pics - 10/25 Effect - 20/25 Creativity - 25/25 Total - 65% (45 really) ok explanations: OCG is Official Card Grammar... It is off/it is not used right... at most. even the normal grammar... I put the original 5 pts because some is right and u got most of the terms right... (spelling needs work as well) Pics: they have no bg, so automatic points off... and its a little too 3d lookin... needs a more anime look Effect: Effects are cool and make sense ... I'd say a little TOO specific for each effect... like if u dont have that SPECIFIC card you cant use the effect (only some of the cards) It was creative XP what u want me to say xD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sergio Dark World General Posted February 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 [quote name='BT ' timestamp='1329959576' post='5834845'] Ok rating! (since u 2star or below u get +5 on each)... [size=1][sub]so for true rating minus 5 each or 20 from total xP[/sub][/size] OCG - 10/25 Pics - 10/25 Effect - 20/25 Creativity - 25/25 Total - 65% (45 really) ok explanations: OCG is Official Card Grammar... It is off/it is not used right... at most. even the normal grammar... I put the original 5 pts because some is right and u got most of the terms right... (spelling needs work as well) Pics: they have no bg, so automatic points off... and its a little too 3d lookin... needs a more anime look Effect: Effects are cool and make sense ... I'd say a little TOO specific for each effect... like if u dont have that SPECIFIC card you cant use the effect (only some of the cards) It was creative XP what u want me to say xD [/quote]Its not a anime its a PSP game ._. and i didnt rly find that lot of ocg errors .-. but thx anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted February 23, 2012 Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 [quote name='Paulo Silva' timestamp='1329959971' post='5834860'] Its not a cartoon its a PSP game ._. and i didnt rly find that lot of ocg errors .-. but thx anyway [/quote] I know... but u can find ppl drawing it was a cartoon! THERE IS ALOT! xDDD want me to fix em? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sergio Dark World General Posted February 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 [quote name='BT ' timestamp='1329960022' post='5834861'] I know... but u can find ppl drawing it was a cartoon! THERE IS ALOT! xDDD want me to fix em? [/quote][quote name='BT ' timestamp='1329960022' post='5834861'] I know... but u can find ppl drawing it was a cartoon! THERE IS ALOT! xDDD want me to fix em? [/quote]Well if its no trouble go head, btw did u ever play GEB? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted February 23, 2012 Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 1. k 2. nope xP have u watched naruto ;D (i'm gonna bold changes or errors XD) Arda Nova: [b]On your[/b] 3rd [b]E[/b]nd [b]P[/b]hase [b]after [/b]this card is [b]Summoned: Y[/b]ou can [b]T[/b]ribute 1 "Aragami - Arda Nova" [b]you control; S[/b]pecial[b]S[/b]ummon 1 "Argami - Fallen Arda Nova". Once per turn[b]:[/b] You can discard 1 random card from your opponent[b]'[/b]s hand; [b]G[/b]ain 1000 [b]Life Points.[/b] [color=#5a5a5a](^ thats new OCG so lots of fixes but old OCG would have fixes as well! ^)[/color] [color=#5A5A5A]Fallen Arda:[/color] [b][color=#3A3A3A]Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must first be Special Summoned by the effect of "Aragami - Arda Nova". I[/color][/b][color=#3A3A3A]f [b]S[/b]pecial [b]S[/b]ummoned [b]by this effect: D[/b]estroy 1 card on the field. Once per turn[b]:[/b] [b]Y[/b]ou can pay 1000 [b]Life Points[/b][b]; Inflict 1500 points of damage to your opponent. [/b][/color] will do the rest later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sergio Dark World General Posted February 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 [quote name='BT ' timestamp='1329962059' post='5834954'] 1. k 2. nope xP have u watched naruto ;D (i'm gonna bold changes or errors XD) Arda Nova: [b]On your[/b] 3rd [b]E[/b]nd [b]P[/b]hase [b]after [/b]this card is [b]Summoned: Y[/b]ou can [b]T[/b]ribute 1 "Aragami - Arda Nova" [b]you control; S[/b]pecial[b]S[/b]ummon 1 "Argami - Fallen Arda Nova". Once per turn[b]:[/b] You can discard 1 random card from your opponent[b]'[/b]s hand; [b]G[/b]ain 1000 [b]Life Points.[/b] [color=#5a5a5a](^ thats new OCG so lots of fixes but old OCG would have fixes as well! ^)[/color] [color=#5A5A5A]Fallen Arda:[/color] [b][color=#3A3A3A]Cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. Must first be Special Summoned by the effect of "Aragami - Arda Nova". I[/color][/b][color=#3A3A3A]f [b]S[/b]pecial [b]S[/b]ummoned [b]by this effect: D[/b]estroy 1 card on the field. Once per turn[b]:[/b] [b]Y[/b]ou can pay 1000 [b]Life Points[/b][b]; Inflict 1500 points of damage to your opponent. [/b][/color] will do the rest later [/quote]fixed, i copy pasted your ocg to if u made errors i made too lol Edit: Btw yes i watch naruto every day , less for weekend lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BT Posted February 23, 2012 Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 [quote name='Paulo Silva' timestamp='1329963334' post='5835012'] fixed, i copy pasted your ocg to if u made errors i made too lol [/quote] uh... what and nope I did not Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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