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Addition to Holy Marked


Zetsumei_15

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This card can be special summoned from your hand by banishing 3 LIGHT Dragon-Type monsters from your graveyard. Once per turn you can activate one of the following effects:

You can tribute up to 1 "Holy Mark" monster from your side of the field or hand to destroy 1 card on your opponent side of the field.

Tribute 1 "Holy Mark" monster from your side of the field or hand to have this card attack Twice this turn. You cannot attack your opponent directly.

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Light has to be LIGHT (remember that's an attribute)

the card destruction effect is a bit too easy to pull off because all you need is LIGHT Dragon-type, no other specifications. All it takes is a simple DNA transplant

siimilarly for the attacking twice, I would have allowed it to attack twice, but none of the attacks can be DIRECT attacks

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Ugh, it's one of THESE cards.

First off, why did you name it after a Judeo-Christian figure whose name is in Greek, here? Apollyon or Abaddon, which is the Hebrew, have NOTHING to do with Egypt, and is closer to a Manticore as legends go, than a human.

Flavor aside...

The card is actually really solid. It sets up for big plays and serves as a game ender, but as such it might be a little too much. I mean, it's similar to DAD, just with banishing, so... IDK, make it only tribute 1 to destroy 1, and give its second effect an ability to just attack another MONSTER, to avoid OTKing.

Not sure if it's broken, just... It could lead to abuse, is all.

Just... Make it a Dragon and fix it to an Egyptian theme, otherwise the flavor is G-O-N-E GONE =-=

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well i was looking for an egyptian name actually but the majority of the egyptian gods names have already been used thru previous cards so i just threw a name i liked on it (yes tacky i know but not what i was after in making the card) and as for making it a dragon i considered it but the reasoning for not is the Red-Eyes Darkness Metal Dragon effect to recycle this cards effect via tributing it for the special summon of another holy marked and allowing it to be resummoned and reused for destruction... and yes i was toying with the destruction amount

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