Partangle the Candle Jangler Posted February 28, 2012 Report Share Posted February 28, 2012 [color=#000000]Skloop! I'm not sure if the effect is OK.[/color] [img]http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/850/472406.jpg[/img] [color=#000000]When this card is destroyed by a card effect: Special Summon one WATER monster from your Graveyard with ATK equal to or less than this card. This card's original ATK and DEF are treated as 1500.[/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pokemon Trainer Red Posted February 28, 2012 Report Share Posted February 28, 2012 hmm interesting plenty of use id say 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Partangle the Candle Jangler Posted February 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2012 [quote name='Yurik the Red Mage' timestamp='1330465151' post='5846556'] hmm interesting plenty of use id say 6/10 [/quote] Hmmm interesting...6/10? What's wrong with it or can be edited? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pokemon Trainer Red Posted February 28, 2012 Report Share Posted February 28, 2012 well i mean its not very powerful its average is my thoughts im sure it could be used effectively and ocg is off slightly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Partangle the Candle Jangler Posted February 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2012 [quote name='Yurik the Red Mage' timestamp='1330465480' post='5846566'] ocg is off slightly [/quote] Fix it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghost Ryder Posted February 28, 2012 Report Share Posted February 28, 2012 I apologize if this comment turns out terrible but I hope I still have the card-making skills I had in the past (not sounding cocky or anything!). [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]When this card is destroyed by a card effect: Special Summon one WATER monster from your Graveyard with ATK equal to or less than this card. This card's ATK and DEF are treated as 1500 when in the deck or in the Graveyard. [/size][/font][/color] [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]New OCG Fix: [/size][/font][/color][color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]When this card is destroyed by a card effect, Special Summon 1 WATER Monster Card from your Graveyard with ATK equal to or less than this card. [/size][/font][/color][color=#ff0000][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]While this card remains in your Deck or your Graveyard, this card's ATK and DEF is treated as 1500. [/size][/font][/color] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]The fix highlighted in red is a fix I'm not very sure about. [/size][/font] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]OK, aside from the OCG Fix: Change the Monster Type from 'Fish' to 'Serpent' (I think). The name could be more original, in my taste I would rather put another name after 'Skloop' because it's too simple and short (if it has a meaning ignore this). The image is carefully selected, and in good quality. However, I'm not the sort the guy who could think certain situations of using cards like these but overall I would give this card a 7.2/10. My main point is, work on your OCG, you're getting there. [/size][/font] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]*Edit: 7.7/10[/size][/font] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]@Below post: Yeah that's it. I don't think you need the 'each' though.[/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pokemon Trainer Red Posted February 28, 2012 Report Share Posted February 28, 2012 this card's original ATK and DEF are each treated as 1500 i think thats how it goes i cant remember the treated pert (i did say slightly right?) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Partangle the Candle Jangler Posted February 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2012 The thing is....I've never seen an effect like this so I'm not sure how to say it. Yeah about the name....it's just a random word that came into my head. Your version of the effect is closer I think. I'll change it when I get time to. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Organized Chaos Posted February 28, 2012 Report Share Posted February 28, 2012 Hmm, good card. I see the general idea of being able to be searched by Mother Grizzly and returned by the effect of Salvage. It's other effect of being able to Summon a card with ATK lower than it's own as you could just equip it with loads of equips, activate Dark Hole and Special Summon Coelcecanth, other Strong WATER monster. It can also Special Summon itself but it isn't bad because you would probably go for something more useful. And even now it can abuse Skreech. Destroy this, Summon Skreech, Send 1/2 of these to grave, recycle with Salvage. Unless that was your intention, either way, try putting a limit on the ATK of teh Special Summoned monster, say "1500 or less". Just to get more searchers out. But besides from that, great card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Partangle the Candle Jangler Posted February 28, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 28, 2012 ****. I meant to say equal to or less than the [b]original[/b] ATK of this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 28, 2012 Report Share Posted February 28, 2012 then it'll work for any WATER monster as long as it has 1850 atk or less personally though, I think you should make sure it can't summon ITSELF back to the field via that effect make it less recycling so you can't abuse it as much Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Partangle the Candle Jangler Posted February 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 29, 2012 [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1330472419' post='5846794'] then it'll work for any WATER monster as long as it has 1850 atk or less [/quote] That was the idea, yes. [quote name='ragnarok1945' timestamp='1330472419' post='5846794'] personally though, I think you should make sure it can't summon ITSELF back to the field via that effect make it less recycling so you can't abuse it as much [/quote] However I think not letting it summon itself back would limit usefulness a bit. Edited OCG. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted February 29, 2012 Report Share Posted February 29, 2012 why not? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Partangle the Candle Jangler Posted March 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2012 What? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Partangle the Candle Jangler Posted March 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2012 I still need an answer bro..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ragnarok1945 Posted March 2, 2012 Report Share Posted March 2, 2012 you said it'll limit the usefulness a bit. Explain yourself on that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Partangle the Candle Jangler Posted March 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2012 If it couldn't summon itself back, it couldn't create the loop cards like Giant Rat do at the moment ~ Get destroyed, SS another, get destroyed, SS another, get destroyed, SS another, get destroyed, SS some other monster. It's the same basic principle here, although slightly different. Basically, you get 1 of these on the field and 1 in the Grave, you've got a pretty good defensive wall system loop thing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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