Kazooie Posted March 9, 2012 Report Share Posted March 9, 2012 [center][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][img]http://i39.tinypic.com/351des7.jpg[/img][/font][/center] [center][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]When this card is Normal Summoned: Special Summon 1 Level 1 FIRE monster from your Deck. It cannot be used for a Synchro Summon. This card cannot be used for a Synchro Summon and can only be used to Xyz Summon a "Flaming" monster.[/font][/center] [center][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif][img]http://i44.tinypic.com/mkkveq.png[/img][/font][/center] [center][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]This card cannot be destroyed in battle. Once per turn: If this card is attacked; Destroy the attacking monster and add 1 Level 1 FIRE monster in your Graveyard to your hand. This card can only be used to Xyz Summon a "Flaming" monster.[/font][/center] [center] [img]http://i42.tinypic.com/118oaqv.jpg[/img][/center] [center]2 Level [size=4]1 FIRE Monsters[/size][/center] [center][size=4]Once per turn you can detach 1 Xyz Material Monster from this card: Destroy 1 monster your opponent controls with 2000 ATK or more. If this card destroys a monster by battle: It gains 100 ATK.[/size][/center] [left]Basically, these exist to try and make a decent Rank 1 set. This is just a start, hopefully they turn out decent by the end. Simple effects, mainly because it seems silly to do anything BIG with them when just starting out.[/left] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Northern Sage Posted March 9, 2012 Report Share Posted March 9, 2012 Flaming Boar has way too much ATK to be generic for a Rank 1. It can ram into about anything with that effect, is a beatstick and can be gotten out far too easily. Make it require 3 Materials or make it non-generic. (e.g. 2 Level 1 FIRE monsters or 3 Level 1 monsters). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mugendramon Posted March 9, 2012 Report Share Posted March 9, 2012 No, 3 Materials are stupid. Birdie, let me tell you two things. One, Tour Guide does not need a Level 1 counterpart. Two, your Rank 1 is really too good for a generic. Just take out the ATK increase, and it should be fine. As it is, it becomes too difficult to get rid of after a turn or two, and that removal is too dangerous. x.x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazooie Posted March 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2012 [quote name='Ｍｕｇｅｎｄｒａｍｏｎ' timestamp='1331331942' post='5863440'] No, 3 Materials are stupid. Birdie, let me tell you two things. One, Tour Guide does not need a Level 1 counterpart. Two, your Rank 1 is really too good for a generic. Just take out the ATK increase, and it should be fine. As it is, it becomes too difficult to get rid of after a turn or two, and that removal is too dangerous. x.x [/quote] Tour Guide could use a level 1 fire counterpart to make rank 1's worth some of the effort. :3 As is, all of them require three materials and have NO simple way of getting those materials. Sure, maybe we'll get something eventually, but right now all we have is GOLDRAT TURBO and that sucks because of Welche. Gonna definitely do something with the Xyz, but for now, not lowering the ATK, probably just take out the boost or make it a lot lower, like 100 or something. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted March 9, 2012 Report Share Posted March 9, 2012 Make it 2 Level 1 FIRE Monsters, and give Flamings a "No Xyz except for Flaming ones" clause. Then, it's all fine. I wish for more of this archetype - draw power, search power, revival, more good monsters, etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazooie Posted March 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2012 When the YCM uploader starts working right, I'll make changes on the first two. It's a pain in the ass to do it through Tinypic. For now I'll just edit the text beneath the cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted March 9, 2012 Report Share Posted March 9, 2012 [quote name='Kanade Otonashi' timestamp='1331334092' post='5863512'] When the YCM uploader starts working right, I'll make changes on the first two. It's a pain in the ass to do it through Tinypic. For now I'll just edit the text beneath the cards. [/quote] You could just as well use Photobucket. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazooie Posted March 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 9, 2012 [quote name='Zanda Panda' timestamp='1331334353' post='5863521'] You could just as well use Photobucket. :/ [/quote] Photobucket, do the exact same thing but with an account. :/ I just upload to tinypic, I don't EDIT the cards with Tinypic. Edit them here, save to comp, upload, then post. I would have to do the exact same thing with Photobucket. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
REvan342 Posted March 10, 2012 Report Share Posted March 10, 2012 the concept is perfect, and the abilities are balenced. One suggestion....... change the word "Flamming" to "Blazing" or something along those lines... Because it makes the monsters sound "happy" if you know what i mean..... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazooie Posted March 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2012 [quote name='REvan342' timestamp='1331360783' post='5864113'] the concept is perfect, and the abilities are balenced. One suggestion....... change the word "Flamming" to "Blazing" or something along those lines... Because it makes the monsters sound "happy" if you know what i mean..... [/quote] A little homophobic? Nah, I don't think I will. It's a silly change, like when how the Malefic monsters were called Sin in the OCG, and they changed coming over to the TCG. It's a little thing and it doesn't matter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
REvan342 Posted March 10, 2012 Report Share Posted March 10, 2012 lol just a little. hope my comment wasnt off-putting.. i really do like the cards though =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yosuke-kun Posted March 10, 2012 Report Share Posted March 10, 2012 On the first card, I think it's 'by battle' not 'in battle'. Also not sure if that last bit in the effect is needed. Pics are cool, and the rest of the OCG is fine. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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