Kyng's Old Account Posted March 10, 2012 Report Share Posted March 10, 2012 So, let's get to it then: This set is, as it's name implies, Winged Beasts who're designed to Special Summon fast for easy Synchro / Xyz Summons, but because of that I feel that they may be on the Overpowered Borderline and thus some may need some tweaking to make them much more balanced: this little set of 6 includes 2 Effect Monsters, one with Alternative Artwork, 1 Spell, 1 Trap, and 2 Synchro Monsters. The set's artwork was done by Sword-Summoner on Photobucket. [spoiler=Princess Bird] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/arDW0.jpg[/img][img]http://i.imgur.com/FVdtU.jpg[/img][/center] Lore: You can Special Summon this card (from your Graveyard) by tributing 1 Winged Beast Monster you control. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Aeroraura] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/3IFNa.jpg[/img][/center] Lore: Activate when you Special Summon Winged Beast Monster(s) from your Graveyard; draw 2 cards. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Soldier Bird] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/wEGV3.jpg[/img][/center] Lore: Once per turn during the turn you Special Summon Winged Beast Monster(s); you can Special Summon this card from your hand or Graveyard. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Water Bird] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/cCnoX.jpg[/img][/center] Lore: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters While this card is face-up on the field its Attribute is also treated as WATER. Each time you Special Summon monster(s); increase your Life points by 500. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Fire Bird] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/9Dz2p.jpg[/img][/center] Lore: 1 Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters While this card is face-up on the field its Attribute is also treated as FIRE. Each time you Special Summon monster(s): you can pay 500 Life Points; draw 1 card (You cannot Normal or Special Summon after using this card's effect). [/spoiler] [spoiler=Birdefence] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/DtI5q.jpg[/img][/center] Lore: Activate when your opponent activates an effect in response to the Special Summon of a Winged Beast Monster(s); negate the activation and destroy the card, then draw 1 card. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Pot Bird] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/m0lgG.jpg[/img][/center] Lore: 2 Level 4 or lower Winged Beast Monsters When this card is selected as an attack target: detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; negate the attack. Then, draw cards from your Deck x the multiples of 1000 in the difference of ATK between this card and the attacking monster. You can return this card to the Extra Deck; Special Summon 1 Winged Beast Monster from your Graveyard. You must have at least 1 Xyz Material attached to this card to activate and resolve this effect. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Warrior Bird] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/7DhPL.jpg[/img][/center] Lore: 2 Level 4 or lower Winged Beast Monsters While this card has Xyz Materials; this card is unaffected by effects your opponent controls. When your opponent activates an effect that destroy(s) monsters on your side of the field; you can attach 1 of those monsters to this card as an Xyz Material instead. During your Standby Phase: detach 1 Xyz Material from this card. [/spoiler] [spoiler=Bolt Bird] [center][img]http://i.imgur.com/l6nmh.jpg[/img][/center] Lore: 2 Level 7 or lower Winged Beast Monsters While this card is face-up on the field its Attribute is also treated as LIGHT. Each time you Special Summon monster(s): you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; draw 1 card (You cannot Normal or Special Summon after using this card's effect). When this card is destroyed by battle: banish 1 Winged Beast from your Graveyard; Special Summon 1 Winged Beast from your hand or Graveyard. [/spoiler] CnC Appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheSKPwningest1992 Posted March 10, 2012 Report Share Posted March 10, 2012 Aeroaura would make Blackwings mental. I'd say put a small cost on it, like "Banish 1 Winged-Beast monster from your graveyard". That way it still maintains its +1. Birdfence is completely useless as you cannot chain a Spell Speed 1 card to a Spell Speed 2 card. I'd say make it a Counter Trap and ditch the draw effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black Temple Gaurdian Posted March 10, 2012 Report Share Posted March 10, 2012 You can loop soldier and princess birds to synchro summon twice in a turn. Tribute a soldier bird to special summon a Princess Bird, then special summon a second soldier bird from your grave. Becuase soldier bird special summoned, special summon the first soldier bird, sync for 7 and then normal summon a winged beast, tribute it for princess bird and sync for a second level 7. I'm guessing that was intended? Either way it makes for fast and simple, but not too overpowered (at least if you use the synchro's in this set) to play. Good Job. I know you said this'd be it for the set but it has potential, will you consider making more? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted March 10, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 10, 2012 [quote name='TheSKPwningest1992' timestamp='1331394554' post='5864417'] Aeroaura would make Blackwings mental. I'd say put a small cost on it, like "Banish 1 Winged-Beast monster from your graveyard". That way it still maintains its +1. Birdfence is completely useless as you cannot chain a Spell Speed 1 card to a Spell Speed 2 card. I'd say make it a Counter Trap and ditch the draw effect. [/quote] 1 - I did think Aeroraura would be somewhat too abusive; I'll add a cost, I think banishing from the Graveyard would disrupt their entire flow. 2 - I completely derped there, it was meant to be a Quick Play Spell Card; I don't know why you'd want to ditch the Drawing effect, if anything that makes it a much better card. Any reason you say that, so I can justifiably remove it? [quote name='Black Temple Gaurdian' timestamp='1331400435' post='5864582'] You can loop soldier and princess birds to synchro summon twice in a turn. Tribute a soldier bird to special summon a Princess Bird, then special summon a second soldier bird from your grave. Becuase soldier bird special summoned, special summon the first soldier bird, sync for 7 and then normal summon a winged beast, tribute it for princess bird and sync for a second level 7. I'm guessing that was intended? Either way it makes for fast and simple, but not too overpowered (at least if you use the synchro's in this set) to play. Good Job. I know you said this'd be it for the set but it has potential, will you consider making more? [/quote] I'll consider making a Boss monster for this set, or maybe a Rank 3, 4 & 7 Xyz if I can find good enough images, otherwise that's it; I'm glad you think the set has potential, I do appreciate the comments. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
REvan342 Posted March 10, 2012 Report Share Posted March 10, 2012 aside from the broken trap card.... its a decent set. My fav is Bidefence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cherz Posted March 10, 2012 Report Share Posted March 10, 2012 I dont think a quickplay spell would work either, but w/e. I think the trap and the loop are a bit, just a bit op. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted March 11, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 11, 2012 [quote name='REvan342' timestamp='1331406913' post='5864808'] aside from the broken trap card.... its a decent set. My fav is Bidefence [/quote]Glad you like the Set! Although I don't suppose you've any kind of critique? [quote name='sirluke99' timestamp='1331417374' post='5865038'] I dont think a quickplay spell would work either, but w/e. I think the trap and the loop are a bit, just a bit op. [/quote]They will, Quick-Play Spell Cards are at Spell Speed 2, which means they can chain to Spell Speed 1 & 2 Cards; the only thing they won't chain to would be Counter Trap Cards.[hr]Updated and made the fixes! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted March 12, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 12, 2012 Added Pot Bird, Warrior Bird, and Bolt Bird to finish off the set for good! I'm still appreciating any help to balance these out, although I'd appreciate it even further if these three were the center of attention for the time being. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black Temple Gaurdian Posted March 12, 2012 Report Share Posted March 12, 2012 Pot Bird definately has potential, and not just in this set. Against decks that must attack or in decks that force an attack it'd be great. The drawback is that your opponent can see it coming and avoid it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheSKPwningest1992 Posted March 22, 2012 Report Share Posted March 22, 2012 [quote name='Kyng' timestamp='1331401564' post='5864623'] 1 - I did think Aeroraura would be somewhat too abusive; I'll add a cost, I think banishing from the Graveyard would disrupt their entire flow. 2 - I completely derped there, it was meant to be a Quick Play Spell Card; I don't know why you'd want to ditch the Drawing effect, if anything that makes it a much better card. Any reason you say that, so I can justifiably remove it? [/quote] Because with the draw effect it comes off a +1. Without it, the card effect is a fair trade. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted March 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 23, 2012 [quote name='TheSKPwningest1992' timestamp='1332441022' post='5883787'] Because with the draw effect it comes off a +1. Without it, the card effect is a fair trade. [/quote]Considering the fact it's a situation card, I don't see how removing the Draw effect would be any good.I'm actually surprised no-one has seen the Broken Nature of Princess Bird yet; I'll be editing her asap. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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