Durandamon Posted March 18, 2012 Report Share Posted March 18, 2012 ...so I made him a hole. I believe that, not for destroying but for making it hard to get for a while. So: [img]http://i44.tinypic.com/j75lw1.jpg[/img]x [b]Fixed OCG:[/b] [b]When a Dragon-Type monster is Summoned: Return it to the bottom of the Deck. This card can be activated from your hand if you control no Spell or Trap cards.[/b] CnC <3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vairocana Posted March 18, 2012 Report Share Posted March 18, 2012 it's = it is its = possessive form of it. I'm pretty sure the OCG is wonky, but I won't comment more than that becaues it has been a very very long time since I've actually looked at OCG. On a more regular gramatical note, it's a little confusing that you use "your hand" in the last sentence, when I think it's applying to your opponent? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Durandamon Posted March 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 18, 2012 Wow, how did I pass that? The hand thing, means that instead of setting the card, you can activate it from your hand if your opponent special summons a dragon and you have no s/t on the field. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arsenjam Posted March 18, 2012 Report Share Posted March 18, 2012 Lore's messed up i believe it should be: When your opponent Special Summons a Dragon-Type monster(s) to their side of the field, return the Special Summond monster(s) to the bottom of your opponent(s) deck, your opponent then draws one card(s). If you control no spell or trap cards, this card can be activated from your hand. I see the effort though.[quote name='arsenjam' timestamp='1332114121' post='5877367'] Lore's messed up i believe it should be: When your opponent Special Summons a Dragon-Type monster(s) to their side of the field, return the Special Summond monster(s) to the bottom of your opponent(s) deck, your opponent then draws one card(s). If you control no spell or trap cards, this card can be activated from your hand. I see the effort though. [/quote] I stand to be corrected on the Lore issue. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CDDRodrigo Posted March 18, 2012 Report Share Posted March 18, 2012 It's too situational and it's a -1 that gives them a free draw. I don't like it. You should remove the draw part, and make it so it happens under any kind of a Dragon's summon (Normal or Special). It would still be too specific and only used under a metagame of Dragons (which is something close for us since Hieratics are running rampant). Also, to fix your OCG, following my suggestions: "When a Dragon-Type monster is summoned: Return it to the bottom of the Deck". Simple as that =3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Durandamon Posted March 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 18, 2012 I believe it works better that way. Gonna change that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tormented Posted March 19, 2012 Report Share Posted March 19, 2012 I see what you did with the title hehe. Anyhow I don't see much else I can really add on other than this seems simple and easy to play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Not-so-Radiant Arin Posted March 19, 2012 Report Share Posted March 19, 2012 While we are talking about Grammar Usage, as most of the thread is compiled to be, anyway, "he/she" should be "your opponent". That +1 card that your opponent gets could very well be another REDRUM, so it's not really all that beneficial. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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