sasder47 Posted March 25, 2012 Report Share Posted March 25, 2012 Id like constructive criticism. [img]http://i44.tinypic.com/jip2ea.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Partangle the Candle Jangler Posted March 25, 2012 Report Share Posted March 25, 2012 What the hell is Protogenoi.....? And paying half your Life Points to destroy all cards on the field seems broken, but then you see that the LAST effect is the summoning conditions. Order the effects properly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sasder47 Posted March 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2012 ok and protogenoi are a type of greek gods and sry for the made up type Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted March 25, 2012 Report Share Posted March 25, 2012 [quote name='sasder47' timestamp='1332713052' post='5888472'] ok and protogenoi are a type of greek gods and sry for the made up type [/quote] Here's a tip for you, do not post made up types in RC, unless the type is something that the already existing types don't cover. In this case, Fairy / Divine Beast would cover the Greek God aspect of the card. OT: Card is terrible. Its terrible because of its Summoning condition, but terrible as well because it's a badly designed card (ie, another field nuker / burner), but all in all, the Summoning conditions hinder it too much, so it will not be used much, even by casual players. And the card is too vulnerable to card effects if you're able to Summon it somehow (Fiendish Chain, Effect Veiler etc.) So yeah, card is bad, in effect wise and in design wise. And seriously, I do not even know how to fix it without getting rid of the first effect all together. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sasder47 Posted March 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 25, 2012 oops sorry if a disappointed and/or made you mad by making a sucky card its just that i am a YCM noob, especially at making realistic cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted March 26, 2012 Report Share Posted March 26, 2012 [quote name='sasder47' timestamp='1332714279' post='5888498'] oops sorry if a disappointed and/or made you mad by making a sucky card its just that i am a YCM noob, especially at making realistic cards [/quote] You wanted constructive criticism, you got it. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sasder47 Posted March 26, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 26, 2012 oooook... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Miror B Posted March 26, 2012 Report Share Posted March 26, 2012 Zanda's a bit rough but he knows what he's talking about most of the time. A field nuke that also hurts the opponent is bad card design, even moreso since it's cost can always be paid. However tributing 5 DARK monsters makes it so you won't be using it very often because idk about you but when I have 5 DARKs I'd rather Xyz/Synchro into a couple bigger monsters than just get one out. That's what he ment by bad design and card overall. It's effect is broken, yet the conditions to bring it out make it terrible. The effect idea itself is too broken to work with and would be better off if you changed it alltogether. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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