david14 Posted February 29, 2008 Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 What do you think of my first card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadow Dude64 Posted February 29, 2008 Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 8.5/10 Nice!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CandleJack Posted February 29, 2008 Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 Some official card grammar(OCG) errors. Certain words need to be capped numbers are always in numeral form and you miss spelled except. I'm not sure if this is over powered or not you'll have to wait for DJ Osiris or another experienced member for a proper rating. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted February 29, 2008 Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 overpowered Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gary9672001 Posted February 29, 2008 Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 As candlejack said the card has some grammer error but, Nice card for your first time! Can't wait till see your other cards! 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 29, 2008 Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 As most first cards, yours contains errors which i shall point out for ya so you know for next time ^_^ Normal Summoned Set Special Summoned except 5 Fiend-Type Graveyard opponent's Trap Cards Its better to say; 'This card is unaffected by the effects of your opponent's Trap Cards.' I would also lower his Level and ATK and make it 3 removed from play. But its ok ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shonenhikada Posted February 29, 2008 Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 I wouldn't want to be facing down that. nice work8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Junk Raver Posted February 29, 2008 Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 I wouldn't want to be facing down that. nice work8/10 Indeed ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CrazyKev Posted March 1, 2008 Report Share Posted March 1, 2008 OCG errorsBut it is good for your first Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Ruby Posted March 1, 2008 Report Share Posted March 1, 2008 a little overpowered but great o love fiends...8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
david14 Posted March 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2008 I hope these are better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
david14 Posted March 1, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 1, 2008 Sorry I forgot to add these. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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