Reirai Posted March 30, 2012 Report Share Posted March 30, 2012 This is my first card. Any comments will be appreciated. [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/M62Tn.jpg[/IMG] I made this card to help quickly bring out Rank 4 XYZs like Utopia. EDIT: Thanks, Kyng. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted March 30, 2012 Report Share Posted March 30, 2012 Hasn't worked, bro. Save your Card to your Computer, and upload it using this (quickest one to do it): [url="http://imgur.com/"]http://imgur.com/[/url]Very simple, very versatile. Not sure if it's been actually done, but whatever the case this card is perfect Synchro/Xyz food, simply because of the capability. Maybe broken to a degree, I'd say you should only be able to use it's effect once per turn (say if you add more than just 1) so it balances it out to a degree. Otherwise, considering this is a first card, I am very impressed! You've, surprisingly, outperformed any new card maker I know with this very powerful card! Well done! It may not work in all Decks, but it may be a certainly powerful addition. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reirai Posted March 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2012 Sorry if this is a noob question, but what do you mean by "broken"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kyng's Old Account Posted March 30, 2012 Report Share Posted March 30, 2012 It's not a Noob question, it's a Newb question: the difference is you're new, and not obnoxious or rude 'n' shizz, but nice instead, so you're not a Noob, you're a Newbie, something not to be ashamed of. Anyways, according to the wiki, [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Broken"]Broken[/url] is a term used to refer to any card giving the user of the card an excessive advantage or defines the competitive metagame in a negative or imbalanced manner. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ｄｈａｒｃ Posted March 30, 2012 Report Share Posted March 30, 2012 [size=3][font=verdana,geneva,sans-serif][color=#8b4513]"Broken" is a term that refers to a card that has too powerful of an effect for its own limitations. Allow me to show you an example of a "broken" card:[/color][/font][/size] [size=3][font=verdana,geneva,sans-serif][color=#8b4513][img]http://yugico.com/customcard/40968.jpg[/img][/color][/font][/size] [size=3][font=verdana,geneva,sans-serif][color=#8b4513]Now, if you can't read the text of this uber-broken card, it basically allows you to bring out as many copies of itself as you can, and your opponent cannot penalize you for it. Then, if it EVER leaves the field, you get to banish a card your opponent controls AND draw a card. Then, if it's banished (ie, by REDMD's effect), you can add it to your hand and destroy any card on the field.[/color][/font][/size] [size=3][font=verdana,geneva,sans-serif][color=#8b4513]Granted, it's a rather extreme example, but it is a good example of many things you can put in a card to make it broken.[/color][/font][/size] [size=3][font=verdana,geneva,sans-serif][color=#8b4513]As for your card, in terms of balance, I'd suggest changing the effect to "If this card is added to your hand by a Spell or Trap effect: Special Summon it; this card must be in your hand to activate and resolve this effect." That way, if you just decided to use Card-Car D's effect, and you happened to draw two of these, you wouldn't be defenseless on your first turn. Also makes it less broken if you happen to be running this and Maxx "C".[/color][/font][/size] [size=3][font=verdana,geneva,sans-serif][color=#8b4513]All-in-all, it's good for a first card. Most new members don't quite understand the OCG, but you actually handled that well. Also, you didn't make the most broken thing ever, which is a promising sign.[/color][/font][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cobalt2 Posted March 30, 2012 Report Share Posted March 30, 2012 This is a good card, and I don't find it very broken. Just generally good for syncs and xyzs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted March 30, 2012 Report Share Posted March 30, 2012 Sangan has a new buddy. Dharc kinda said it all. But yeah. Change it to either Once per Turn or When added by Spell or Trap card eff. Otherwise its a little broken. Anyway, amazing card for a new member! Most new members make some sort of overpowered mess.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reirai Posted March 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 30, 2012 Is this better? [IMG]http://i.imgur.com/cE9Bh.jpg[/IMG] Dharc, I can't see the picture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted March 30, 2012 Report Share Posted March 30, 2012 I can see the picture. And yes, that is way better. Now its awesome. Sangan approves. :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
and1dodger Posted March 30, 2012 Report Share Posted March 30, 2012 Nice card, if it were real I would try it out in my warrior deck mainly for xyz summoning. It would be nice with sangan or Rota. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParadoxCaller Posted March 30, 2012 Report Share Posted March 30, 2012 hate to break it to you, but weve already got a card with this eff, anyone remember this guy? [url="http://images.wikia.com/yugioh/images/5/55/WataponMOV-EN-C-LE.jpg"][img]http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20090119210713/yugioh/images/thumb/5/55/WataponMOV-EN-C-LE.jpg/300px-WataponMOV-EN-C-LE.jpg[/img][/url] But i like your card better cause its makes for a better Xyz fodder Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ekko1990 Posted March 30, 2012 Report Share Posted March 30, 2012 You'll have to change it a bit up if you want it to be a once per turn effect. As far as I remember, you have to write it like this: "When this card is added to your hand by a card effect; Special Summon it. The effect of "Instant Warrior" can only be activated once per turn." Its a very nice card which can give you rather easy Synchro and XYZ summon access. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alice Moonflowyr Posted March 30, 2012 Report Share Posted March 30, 2012 [quote name='Paradox Caller' timestamp='1333143729' post='5895273'] hate to break it to you, but weve already got a card with this eff, anyone remember this guy? [url="http://images.wikia.com/yugioh/images/5/55/WataponMOV-EN-C-LE.jpg"][img]http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20090119210713/yugioh/images/thumb/5/55/WataponMOV-EN-C-LE.jpg/300px-WataponMOV-EN-C-LE.jpg[/img][/url] But i like your card better cause its makes for a better Xyz fodder [/quote]You cant make Utopia with Watapon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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