Darkness Dragon Posted March 31, 2012 Report Share Posted March 31, 2012 [size=4][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]This is the first card I have properly saved and made on here (to be put on the site). I'm not the best at making these, but I thought I'd have a go at making one for you to see so that you could point me in the right direction of making cards. Please correct any grammar if you spot any and maybe suggest other things to add to the card effect. Also level ratings if you think it is too low or (more likely) too high. Anything really, I'm not that bothered as I want to get better at these things.[/font][/size] [img]http://i1092.photobucket.com/albums/i410/FourthDoctor/gravekeepersdemon.jpg[/img] [u][size=4][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]Card description:[/font][/size][/u] [size=4][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]Sacrifice any Dark-Type monster from your field to bring one Dark-Type Beast monster from your Graveyard back into play. This card is destroyed at the end of its turn.[/font][/size] [size=4][font=arial,helvetica,sans-serif]When I found the image, I was asked to credit (as it belongs to someone on here). This is their username: [b][color=#0000ff]R.I.P[/color][/b][/font][/size] [font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]I hope that's it for what I need to add. Please also state whether I need to add anything to the post.[/font] [size=5][b][color=#ff0000][font=arial, helvetica, sans-serif]DD[/font][/color][/b][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheKaitoKid Posted March 31, 2012 Report Share Posted March 31, 2012 Looks more like an Iron Core monster and doesn't fit the archetype [Gravekeeper's]. Also the lore should read more like this: Tribute 1 DARK monster: Target 1 DARK Beast-Type monster in your Graveyard; Special Summon that target. This monster is destroyed during the End Phase of the turn this effect it used. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkness Dragon Posted March 31, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2012 Thank you. I wasn't really sure with the grammar at all (I'm not a huge Yu-Gi-Oh! fan). Thanks for the corrections. I'll keep an eye out for exactly what kind of picture I use. I see some people have used Ancient Egyptian-style pictures and I tried to match it a little with the head. What exactly would you recommend for "Gravekeeper's" monsters? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheKaitoKid Posted March 31, 2012 Report Share Posted March 31, 2012 c Well Gravekeeper's are usually humans so that's a start, They're also all Spellcasters. But that's not what I meant when I said this didn't fit the archetype. Remember that Gravekeeper's focus around Necrovalley. Necrovalley would invalidate this card's effect entirely. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darkness Dragon Posted March 31, 2012 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2012 Oh, OK. As I said, I'm not a huge fan, so I'm not entirely sure exactly what that all means. What's 'Necrovalley'? Thanks for the pointer on the 'human' thing though. I now know that. Any others I make will use a human as you said. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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