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[Lucas the Flame]

I-Yi-Yi-Ya!
So much wrong and so little time.
Only one hint,
Effects are broken.

[7swords]

What could I do to fix them?

[sasder47]

you could start by lowering the levels and changing attack and defense and fix the OCG

[Lucas the Flame]

1. It is the effects of the synchros
[indent=1]- Only [b][u]ONE[/u][/b] tuner is uses [b][u]With[/u][/b] [b][u]ONE[/u][/b] non-tuner.[/indent]

[7swords]

Nonono they just use tuners. That is not a mistake.

[Spellcaster2000]

The images are unrealistic, there is a lack of real/imaginative effects and the OCG is just terrible. You should really fix these.

[Lucas the Flame]

Then make it only [b]ONE[/b] tuner

[BlackRose0202]

Ok ppl gotta learn the rulez OCG comment like u need to fix yada yada is not allowed and a synchro can have 1 tuner + 1 or more monsters or 2 tuners + 1 or more monsters that is what makes them synchros, Next is not everyone of these cards can have the same effect due to it making no sense. Not all the cards can be tuners because ucnt tune something with a lvl 12 plus its unheard of to go past 8 stars for a tuner. Be more creative with your card effects and pictures, getting pictures with backgrounds works best. make sure the cards are balanced and try not to make the effects OP. Cards having 0 atk is worthless unless there is a plan that makes sense. Try looking at other ppls cards to get ideas.

What i would like you to do is
1. Remake these cards with better Names, ATK and DEF, Effects, and Strategy.
2. Get better pictures for them and i mean alot better.
3. Re-post them

Then we will see how much you have improved

[Admiral Tim]

Ignore the above posters, man these cards need a tune-up but I LOVE the effects. Its really original. With some OCG fixes it would be just fine. The whole "1 or more Tuner Monsters" is actually a really original effect that you could really build on. These cards still need a lot of work but if you pm me I think we could restart this thread and I can help you fine tune your cards.

[thekazu4u]

You do realize that there are already cards that can use multiple tuner monsters as material already, right?

The fact that upgrade 4 is essentially a level 4 tuner that can attack directly for 1900 is a bit much. Also, it fills up the grave for avarice really quickly. You can be like Upgrade 4 -> Upgrade Knight -> Upgrade Knight -> Upgrade Knight and fill up grave with 4 monsters in like a turn. Plus, 1900 attack direct is a bit much especially since it will "spread" the attack direct ability to any other upgrades you have out.

Ship is also too powerful. It essentially turns upgrade 6 into a -0 tribute monster that will give you at least a +1 per turn. Lots of times it will give you even multiple draws. Anything with that much draw power for no reason should not exist.

The set seems to have no theme and/or strategy other than getting out synchros. Try to base it around one mechanic. Sorta like mill for lightsworn, counters for venom, tagging for gladiators, equipping for inzectors, changing atk/def mode for morphtronic or whatever and that other tier 2.5 machine archetype, etc... this way it is just random effects. People are just more likely to tech in maybe the level 4 a burn variant (don't make cards that get teched in burn) and maybe use the level 6 in monarchs or something.

Oh yea, and speaking of that level 6:
Giant Rat/Treeborn -> Upgrade 6 -> Machine Duplication -> Ship x3 -> draw 9.

Whenever you see "draw 9" you know something is wrong. That is like a 2 out of 3 card combo where all of the pieces are at 3 that gives a plus 7. Yea, not good.

And aside from those the archetype largely sucks. Nobody is going to use them. Oh, and nobody is going to synchro, they are just going to summon out that card's level in tuner form and go for a +0 synchro.

You have some work to do.