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groniack Posted April 28, 2012 Report Share Posted April 28, 2012 I think that it is not a good idea to create new types of monsters. But, I guess it is acceptable. First card is good for a level 4 tuner. Second card is too situational. It won't activate its effects in every duel which is not that good. The synchro is bad. It has many restrictions for its summoning and it is weaker than catastor. You should power it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted April 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 29, 2012 [quote name='groniack' timestamp='1335652306' post='5927854'] The synchro is bad. It has many restrictions for its summoning and it is weaker than catastor. You should power it up. [/quote] I don't get what you mean by many restrictions for it's summoning, normally it would be a level 4, even harder to get, plus there's two Types to choose from. Also, it isn't meant to be overpowered, it has 2700 ATK plus it can destroy about any fiend monster. I may make it Dark or something. EDIT: I make some changes, see if you like them now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted April 29, 2012 Report Share Posted April 29, 2012 The synchro is way better now good job. About the second card i suggest you to make it so that only when it attacks it gains 500 ATK. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted April 29, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 29, 2012 [quote name='groniack' timestamp='1335690922' post='5928187'] The synchro is way better now good job. About the second card i suggest you to make it so that only when it attacks it gains 500 ATK. [/quote] isn't that not already what it does? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted April 29, 2012 Report Share Posted April 29, 2012 No as you have written it it gains atk when it attacks and when it is attacked. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted April 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2012 [quote name='groniack' timestamp='1335718650' post='5928432'] No as you have written it it gains atk when it attacks and when it is attacked. [/quote]I still don't really get your point, it gets 500 atk, isn't that want you wanted? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted April 30, 2012 Report Share Posted April 30, 2012 Do you know jain the lightsworn paladin? If yes word the effect like his. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted April 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2012 I really don't see the point in wasting my time changing such a simple an unimportant thing such as a few word changes, when it really doesn't matter since I will never be a real card, but as you wish, it's changed again, you happy now nitpicker. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0SS Posted April 30, 2012 Report Share Posted April 30, 2012 ^Surely the whole point of a realistic card is to tweak and improve it in until it gets to a standard in which it could be a genuine card? If you didn't want that kind of in-depth criticism, post cards in other topics... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted April 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2012 The point of realistic cards are to make them look like something that would belong in Yu-Gi-Oh. Maybe you are OCD about making them completly right, but simple little things like missing a word? Really you know what it says, shouldn't that be enough? I'm not trying to make them 101 % perfect, I'm just trying to make cards I think look cool. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
L0SS Posted April 30, 2012 Report Share Posted April 30, 2012 I don't have OCD, but if you can make it better, then why the hell not? Missing a word takes away from the realism a bit, and makes it feel less professional and authentic. If you can improve in a small way to make a big difference to people's perceptions of you as a card maker, then that is the essence of what realistic cards are about. It's not nitpicking, it's giving you advice to make you a better card maker. If you have a problem with that, then perhaps you shouldn't be on here. I don't wanna sound like I'm getting personal, and I like the cards, but I don't really see your argument. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted April 30, 2012 Author Report Share Posted April 30, 2012 I'm here to make cards I like, I really couldn't care about my perception of me, it my sound selfish, but I'm here to make cards I like, and if people like them too, cool, if not just don't borther leaving comments, even if it is constructive criticism.Okay, no more of this stuff, I just want to add new cards, let's just try to forget about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
groniack Posted May 1, 2012 Report Share Posted May 1, 2012 ok . If you don't like my critism, I won't bother you again. I am SORRY for WASTING YOUR TIME WITH MY HELPLESS ADVICE. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted May 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2012 Did I ever say that your advice was helpless? I changed the card, so it reflected what you were thinking, just no exactly. Maybe if you want to help, type out what I should put in, and I'll copy paste it to fit your needs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sander Posted May 1, 2012 Report Share Posted May 1, 2012 The whole idea behind this Humanoid-Type is worthless until you actually produce support that actually SUPPORTS the Humanoid-Type. As for now though, it's just a cute idea, nothing else. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted May 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2012 New Cards Added! Shared Soul Sword: [IMG]http://i1077.photobucket.com/albums/w473/Zaziuma/createcard23php-2.jpg[/IMG] Creepy Masked Machine: [IMG]http://i1077.photobucket.com/albums/w473/Zaziuma/createcard18php-2.jpg[/IMG] Jack the Birdkeeper: [IMG]http://i1077.photobucket.com/albums/w473/Zaziuma/createcard20php-2.jpg[/IMG] Mechchanical Gazeele [IMG]http://i1077.photobucket.com/albums/w473/Zaziuma/createcard21php-2.jpg[/IMG] Mr. Nobody: [IMG]http://i1077.photobucket.com/albums/w473/Zaziuma/createcard22php-2.jpg[/IMG] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted May 1, 2012 Report Share Posted May 1, 2012 [quote name='Zaziuma' timestamp='1335638763' post='5927694'] Hello, while making my next set, I decided to make some fun new cards called Humanoid. These resemble robotic or mechanical monster that also kind of look like human. Also, it's pronounced Gorf Dee Geh [img]http://i1077.photobucket.com/albums/w473/Zaziuma/createcardphp-2.jpg[/img] As you can see, a high level tuner, not something you see enough of, in my opinion [img]http://i1077.photobucket.com/albums/w473/Zaziuma/createcard2php-2.jpg[/img] Found some cool words on the internet, Monolith was one of them [img]http://i1077.photobucket.com/albums/w473/Zaziuma/createcard3php-2.jpg[/img] I wonder if they will ever make duel Types... [img]http://i1077.photobucket.com/albums/w473/Zaziuma/createcard16php-1.jpg[/img] A normal Humanoid monster. Also check out my other cards: [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/282172-priestess-more/"]http://forum.yugiohc...priestess-more/[/url] [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/282322-other-cards/"]http://forum.yugiohc...22-other-cards/[/url] [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/282330-new-archetype-dust-monsters/page__pid__5929533#entry5929533"]http://forum.yugiohc...33#entry5929533[/url] [/quote] 1.So, for the first card, Strong for a level 4, border line Op'ed but it's fine. 2.Second, it isn't that situational. Though many decks do run machines, though the second effect is overpowered, as it essentially turns it into a 2100 ATK four star while attacking non rock and machines (Btw even if it can't be destroyed by Rock or Machines so this will beat down most anything weaker than 2100 ATK) 3. As for the synchro Its a high ATK level 8, meant to be a beatdown....is that all you have? Yes it is strong attack wise and not to hard to summon. Sure it has a resistance to Dark types on offense and it inflicts piercing damage. But can it do much more? Sure it could be a useful finisher but it has no support, defensce and little premise at all. 4. As it's a vanilla there is little to say but the text is worded oddly. "It's steam is what drives this human like a machine. if it were to go out, this monster would die." Last time I checked Steam doesn't go out. it runs out.Also do you really need to make a fake type? "Humanoid?" seriously could there not be Fiends or Warriors? 2/10, you know what your doing but you need some help bud.[quote name='Zaziuma' timestamp='1335904531' post='5930344'] New Cards Added! Shared Soul Sword: [img]http://i1077.photobucket.com/albums/w473/Zaziuma/createcard23php-2.jpg[/img] Creepy Masked Machine: [img]http://i1077.photobucket.com/albums/w473/Zaziuma/createcard18php-2.jpg[/img] Jack the Birdkeeper: [img]http://i1077.photobucket.com/albums/w473/Zaziuma/createcard20php-2.jpg[/img] Mechchanical Gazeele [img]http://i1077.photobucket.com/albums/w473/Zaziuma/createcard21php-2.jpg[/img] Mr. Nobody: [img]http://i1077.photobucket.com/albums/w473/Zaziuma/createcard22php-2.jpg[/img] [/quote] 1. First card is good...I guess< plenty splashable. 2. Can't read the second card's lore. Could you post it separately? 3. So FINALLY some support for an almost useless archetype. Anyways Tiny archetype and purely situational card. 4. So the Sangan for this set? I'm confused about this 'theme' of this set. At first it was involving battling. Then equipping to each other? Now it has machines in the mix? The first card you showed was Anti machine (And rock) so why is this card here? Here's a tip. If you want a good archetype have a set idea. Like "destroying a spell card when summoned" but this is just a nobody's archetype and furthermore, a subtype that ties together by...o wait. It doesn't. 5. So his effect has still nothing to relate to the other cards. He attacks directly (How he pulls this off I have no clue?) does some very minor milling then forces himself into defensce position. An Up'ed ability with no playability. Without changes he will really be a "Mr. Nobody" in any deck. One more thing, the picture are bad. Try going to an image archive for better ones. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted May 2, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2012 Don't you get the words "in production", It means I'm not finished with them, or have tweaked them perfectly yet. Also there's not reason to being a dick when criticizing something, just get to the point please. Also, I don't care where my pictures come from, that's not really something YOU can control. This is something I do for fun, not to make them into a deck or what ever you said. I don't see why you shouldn't be able to make your own type, when the editor let's you, why not do it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Admiral Tim Posted May 2, 2012 Report Share Posted May 2, 2012 [quote name='Zaziuma' timestamp='1335969836' post='5930974'] Don't you get the words "in production", It means I'm not finished with them, or have tweaked them perfectly yet. Also there's not reason to being a dick when criticizing something, just get to the point please. Also, I don't care where my pictures come from, that's not really something YOU can control. This is something I do for fun, not to make them into a deck or what ever you said. I don't see why you shouldn't be able to make your own type, when the editor let's you, why not do it. [/quote] Don't post the cards in this section if you don't want them criticized. If you do it for fun then keep it to yourself. Otherwise no one cares. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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