Im the prince of the ring! Posted April 29, 2012 Report Share Posted April 29, 2012 [size=5]Here are some Xyz monsters from my Working In Progress Pack[/size] [size=5]called Aspiring Victory (AVCY)[/size] [size=5]Here are the Xyz monsters now. [/size] [img]http://yugico.com/customcard/51919.jpg[/img] [size=5]Name: Number 45: Assertive Knight, Kyu[/size] [size=5]Lore:2 Level 5 Monsters When this card is Xyz Summoned, gain 1000 Life Points. Once Per Turn: You can detach 1 Xyz material from this card; during this turn, if this card battles a monster with an ATK higher than this card:you take no battle damage from that battle and destroy the monster it battled after the damage step. If this card has no Xyz materials: this card cannot attack.[/size] [size=5]Here's the 2nd Xyz Monster[/size] [img]http://yugico.com/customcard/51925.jpg[/img] [size=5]Name: Solaris Sky Dragon[/size] [size=5]Lore:[/size]2 [size=5]Level 7 Normal Monsters Once Per Turn: You can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card; Destroy all other Xyz monsters on the field and inflict damage to your opponent equal the number of monsters destroyed by this effect x 800. You cannot conduct your battle phase the turn you activate this effect[/size][size=5].[/size] [size=5]Ok those are my Xyz monsters that I showed. Make sure to comment, rate, like. Okay! Peace![/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Panda^.^ Posted April 30, 2012 Report Share Posted April 30, 2012 sorry to break it, not very attractive bcuz pic quality is s*** and its not attractive and attention grabbing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Love of Ghibli Posted May 9, 2012 Report Share Posted May 9, 2012 The first Xyz is very nice. Do not understand the life point gain at all but its not really a problem. I can't think of a way to improve it. The second one, though its effect is nice it will never see the light of day. I have tried and I can't think of two level 7 normal monsters I would use to make it. Mainly because 7 is not the lucky number. I mean there was slight hope because Hieratics (don't think I spelled that right lol) use level 6 and 8 normal monsters maybe but nothing really uses level 7's. Therefore the summoning conditions are to hard to meet (or more adequately put they are just impractical). Pity, because it is a good effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Dr. Cakey Posted May 16, 2012 Report Share Posted May 16, 2012 [quote name='Beginning446' timestamp='1336528410' post='5935392'] The first Xyz is very nice. Do not understand the life point gain at all but its not really a problem. I can't think of a way to improve it. The second one, though its effect is nice it will never see the light of day. I have tried and I can't think of two level 7 normal monsters I would use to make it. Mainly because 7 is not the lucky number. I mean there was slight hope because Hieratics (don't think I spelled that right lol) use level 6 and 8 normal monsters maybe but nothing really uses level 7's. Therefore the summoning conditions are to hard to meet (or more adequately put they are just impractical). Pity, because it is a good effect. [/quote] He pretty much said it all. There is basically [i]no[/i] way to summon Solaris Sky Dragon, so its effect is actually incredibly under-powered. Rank 8 would be better, although the Gimmick Puppets pretty much have you covered in the anti-Xyz and monster destruction department. Number 45 is actually not very strong for a Rank 5 (I can't see the picture so I don't know its ATK - if it has 2500+, maybe 2400+, it's good as-is), since its effect is basically a weaker version of "once per turn, you can destroy 1 monster your opponent controls with higher ATK", which is a weaker version of "once per turn, you can destroy 1 monster your opponent controls". Even worse, the effect is actually only good once - once you detach the second material, it can't attack, so it's meaningless. The 1000 LP gain is also meaningless - it has nothing to do with the rest of the card, and who cares if you gain a thousand LP? [i]And[/i] (this one is just a personal peeve) there is already a Number 45. It may not have been designed or even drawn yet, but some time or another there will be an actual Number 45. So why make another one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SunniZek Posted May 16, 2012 Report Share Posted May 16, 2012 I don't think the 1000 life point gain in Number 45 is necessary. Just seems out of place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Im the prince of the ring! Posted May 17, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 17, 2012 [quote name='Dr. Cakey!!' timestamp='1337128239' post='5940179'] He pretty much said it all. There is basically [i]no[/i] way to summon Solaris Sky Dragon, so its effect is actually incredibly under-powered. Rank 8 would be better, although the Gimmick Puppets pretty much have you covered in the anti-Xyz and monster destruction department. Number 45 is actually not very strong for a Rank 5 (I can't see the picture so I don't know its ATK - if it has 2500+, maybe 2400+, it's good as-is), since its effect is basically a weaker version of "once per turn, you can destroy 1 monster your opponent controls with higher ATK", which is a weaker version of "once per turn, you can destroy 1 monster your opponent controls". Even worse, the effect is actually only good once - once you detach the second material, it can't attack, so it's meaningless. The 1000 LP gain is also meaningless - it has nothing to do with the rest of the card, and who cares if you gain a thousand LP? [i]And[/i] (this one is just a personal peeve) there is already a Number 45. It may not have been designed or even drawn yet, but some time or another there will be an actual Number 45. So why make another one? [/quote] The point of getting level 7 normal monsters is trying to increase its level. I can't just give it a really good effect while making it too easy to summon. That would make it OP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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