Zazubat Posted April 30, 2012 Report Share Posted April 30, 2012 lock Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr Dr Professor Spaz Posted April 30, 2012 Report Share Posted April 30, 2012 1. Post Lores. 2. You spelled 'Beauty' wrong. 3. Numerous OCG errors from what I could read on your cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SunKistRebelution Posted May 1, 2012 Report Share Posted May 1, 2012 Positives: 1. "Day and Night" is an intriguing idea for a card and might be inspiration for a future set of mine, if you don't mind. This includes "Solar Flare Machine" as well. 2. Ritual Spells always needed to be able to summon more than one card IMO. 3. Thank you for posting the lores so I didn't strain my eyeballs. Negatives: 1. For an archetype or archetypes/split-archetype, it really isn't unified. From what I read (but I could be mistaken) the effects don't really work with each other besides the possibility for some swarming. Try to remedy this. 2. I was led to believe that Ritual Monsters would be the "boss cards" of this set. However, I am not sure you did a very effective job of securing their role as such. This may be due to the inconsistency of the archetype/set as a whole. This does not include "Dust Field Controller". 3. OCG errors. Too numerous to list. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted May 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2012 To the other guy, the lores are on the cards, read them there -.- Also fixed the spelling mistake, don't judge me, I'm Danish, english is not my preferred langauage. The main strategy is to have high atterks and defence cards, mainly to protect Tokens, and then Summon the Ritual cards, I see some holes here and there, but not every Archetype that be perfect in every situation. I am still new to making cards, I can't make every one perfect. Now for the OCG mistakes, if you can't borther writing them, I can't borhter fixing them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zazubat Posted May 1, 2012 Author Report Share Posted May 1, 2012 New card: [IMG]http://i1077.photobucket.com/albums/w473/Zaziuma/createcard30php-1.jpg[/IMG] Can be used in any deck, but good for this I guess. EDIT: I know I forgot to add shuffle deck, blah blah, fix it whenever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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