MtG-Crown of Chaolda[5/224]

[Simping For Hina]

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[.Rai]

Well, have fun thinking of a new name for Haunt.

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[Simping For Hina]

Is Lineage any better, love?

[.Rai]

Lineage is flavoursome. Me likey. Although, Y IT NO HAVE FLYING.

The colour wheel is all strangely messed up though on the two Undead's cards. Exiling creatures free of cost is so un-blue. Countering spells is also distinctly un-black without blue influences. My other problem with them is that the the tap abilities should be swapped between them. Makes more sense for Blue to force others to draw, and Black to discard their cards (even if it is somewhat more positive for them).

Alvere is a pretty cool dude. Unsure whether I'd play him over Karn in something like Urzatron, but really like everything about it.

Chaolda's Beauty is pretty awesome (if somewhat lol with Eldrazi).

Half of these comments are so useless anyway since probably the set is meant for Block Constructed, and not to interact with other sets.

Edit: YAAAY YOU SWAPPED THEM.

[Simping For Hina]

Because I thought working with other sets would be more fun instead of block, I fixed them.
Originally it was meant for Block Constructed.

[-Lightray Daedalus-]

Lineage should add another copy from the Deck...that would make it cool and not yet another copy of Undying/Persist

Dragon Should actually have Flying too...yeah

Undead's Spells are too powerful for their costs, rarity and abilities...add a cost to the tap effect...[s]also they are kinda off the color wheel as .Rai said...Blue is not really the color of Exiling (that's White's Job) And countering is more of a Blue abililty rather than Black...(thought Black can have counterspells see: Dash Hopes)[/s]

PW seems overcosted...it could be good at CMC 3/4

Land is MEGAULTRAHYPERBROKEN as told you in the other forum...XD

EDIT: Ninja'd on that color wheel thingy...still those effects are really powerful for that rarity and being costless

BTW DAEMON...could you make me a Logo like yours for my Set in Written Cards???

Something...Wild Looking?

Set: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/282327-mtg-set-wilds-of-muraganda/unread/

for reference...XD

[Simping For Hina]

I'll fix the two cards soon, I am too lazy to do anything with the cards because PS is a hassle most of the time with templates /mostlymyproblemandmistake.

And sure, I'll make you a logo. No problem.