I need help with the lore on this card

[RBY]

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Effect:You may activate this card during the Battle Phase. If a Dinosaur-type monster you control is battling an opponent's monster at a higher level you may select another monster you control (it must also be a lower level than the opponent's monster) and add its attack to your monster. If the opponent's monster still destroys your monster by battle, then both monsters are destroyed.

There must be a better way to phrase it. Basically, the card allows two lower level dinosaur monsters to double team a higher level monster (both are destroyed if the higher level monster wins).

[Durandamon]

The wording should go like this:

"During the Battle Phase, if a face-up Dinosaur-Type monster battles a monster controlled by your opponent with a higher Level than your monster's: Select another face-up monster you control and increase the ATK of your first monster by the ATK of the selected monster. If your monster is destroyed by battle: destroy the selected monster."

I like it really, it's like Double Attack (Attack Union) but for Dinosaurs, and an effect that balances it out.

[Kyng's Old Account]

[quote name='Damage Inc.' timestamp='1336085246' post='5932007']
The wording should go like this:

"During the Battle Phase, if a face-up Dinosaur-Type monster battles a monster controlled by your opponent with a higher Level than your monster's: Select another face-up monster you control and increase the ATK of your first monster by the ATK of the selected monster. If your monster is destroyed by battle: destroy the selected monster."
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"During the Battle Phase, when a face-up Dinosaur-Type monster battles a monster your opponent controls with a higher Level: Target another face-up monster you control; increase the ATK of the attacking monster by the ATK of the targeted monster. If your monster is destroyed by battle: destroy the selected monster."

That's how it's done.

[Durandamon]

[quote name='Kyng' timestamp='1336087468' post='5932027']
"During the Battle Phase, when a face-up Dinosaur-Type monster battles a monster your opponent controls with a higher Level: Target another face-up monster you control; increase the ATK of the attacking monster by the ATK of the targeted monster. If your monster is destroyed by battle: destroy the selected monster."

That's how it's done.
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Except it's not the ATTACKING monster, but the monster you own that battles; you can activate this when the opponent attacks too.

[RBY]

Thanks for the help.