First card

[Zioken]

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First card I made please judge it and give me any tips on fixes.

[7swords]

Ok first thing to fix Advanced Clause. Which means that you need to have at least as many words in your post as you level x10 so you are level 1 so ten words. Second I am no expert but I think the text should say " Tails: give control of this card to your opponent." Overall it is a decent first card and is well balanced. 9/10 If you don't fix the advanced clause a admin will lock your post and you get warning points. I know from experience.

[Resident Fascist]

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If you don't fix the advanced clause a admin will lock your post and you get warning points. I know from experience.
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>Admin
>YCM
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Anyway... I wouldn't run it for 2 Reasons. 1) I don't like Warriors outside of HEROs and Bushi. 2) It's entirely luck based. You have a 50/50 chance of giving your opponent a free 3500 Beater. It is level 8, so I guess it gets the support of things like Trade-In, but why exactly you'd use it on this I do not know. I can't really talk much about a simple card so, I'll just give my thoughts on a suggested fix. Why do Arcana Force suck? Because they are luck based. Even their field spell which attempts to circumvent this luck is luck based, meaning most of the time you are relying on a coin toss to win, and despite the fact the entire game pretty much [i]is [/i]a coin toss, requiring luck to be half-decent is not a good mechanic unless the odds are rigged to some stupid number, such as snipe hunter. It will work 2 out of 3 times, where as this is 50/50.

So yea, the idea's unique but it's really luck based. If I where to suggest a fix, reduce the ATK to about 2.5K, and discard 1 or pass control.