dbz starters unfinished

[yamiyugi111]

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[Legiit]

I would go along with OP of this card. The OCG isn't so good it needs work. And a question of "Piccolo's" effect ( YOU spelled piccolo in your card wrong ).... why does piccolo gain 300 ATK and DEF for each "SAIYAN". Piccolo is a Namek and has nothing to do with Saiyans, so making the effects involve saiyans is ridiculous, but the OP part is how when this card is destroyed you can Special Summon 1 Saiyan Type monster, IGNORING the Summoning effects.

And that picture is also extremely overused, I suggest another one. ** AND also, before mentioning Saiyan - Type monsters in your effect, you should have Saiyan-Type monsters to begin with posted here on this thread .

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[yamiyugi111]

Ya. I kinda reallized its effect was op a year of not making any. But thx for the advice. I appriciate the criticism. Everyobe makes mistakes.