JacobGoch Posted May 25, 2012 Report Share Posted May 25, 2012 [attachment=34658:Jacobs custom yu gi oh card.jpg]Hello this is my first card more that hook up to this will follow soon hope you enjoy! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TeamUnitedNerds Posted May 25, 2012 Report Share Posted May 25, 2012 Your ocg needs a lot of fixing. First, it needs a type, and you need to specify what you need to fuse for it. In addition, it is way too small to see, and they are now called Elemental HEROs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~British Soul~ Posted May 25, 2012 Report Share Posted May 25, 2012 First of all: - NO attachments/thumbnails. to post a card from the card maker, you load it, click on the card, and paste the URL into the topic Secondly: - the OCG makes NO sense whatsoever. "if an E-HERO is destroyed in battle, he can be summoned from the hand or deck." you didn't specify who would be summoned from the hand or deck, and the second effect makes less sense than the first "if there is no monsters on the field, he can be summoned and have 600 ATK." so if there is an empty field, he can be summoned with 600 ATK, for a level 11 monster that can do that, you can't really do much can you. Third: - You didn't specify the fusion materials needed to summon it, also it needs a type, though imho given the pic it doesn't make sense for it to be an E-HERO since they are Warriors and have a human-like appearance. also Hero should be HERO all in all, i'd give the card a 3.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TeamUnitedNerds Posted May 25, 2012 Report Share Posted May 25, 2012 In addition, you do not say "He" in card text. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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