BenStudios - Feenan

[BenjaminLohman]

[font=times new roman,times,serif][size=4] Hello everyone, I am new to this site, but I really enjoy making these cards. I am not that swell at Yu-Gi-Oh! in real life, so please correct me if I screw up anything on the cards. I like making realistic cards, but I also enjoy the occasional fake card like Chuck Norris or Jar of Pickles. I plan on mastering the art of making these cards and I need your input to help me better myself. Anyways, here's my first card I'll post. Tell me what you guys think![/size][/font]
[font=times new roman,times,serif][size=4][img]http://i.imgur.com/QCWMn.jpg[/img][/size][/font]

[7swords]

The card is not very useful and it would only be used in side decks so unless all your friends use spellcasters this card is useless but i like the picture:) If you give it some other effect i think it would be better.

[BenjaminLohman]

[color=#000080][size=5][font=comic sans ms,cursive][b]Be that as it may, the ATK of the card still makes it worth having your deck (in my opinion).[/b][/font][/size][/color]

[Gojira/Godzilla]

[quote name='BenjaminLohman' timestamp='1338302857' post='5948767']
[color=#000080][size=5][font=comic sans ms,cursive][b]Be that as it may, the ATK of the card still makes it worth having your deck (in my opinion).[/b][/font][/size][/color]
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[b][color=#000000]well, your opinion is not right, because people can synchro summon and Xy summon monsters that are much stronger, and haave better effects than this card. But, the picture is quite good.[/color][/b]

[BenjaminLohman]

[color=#000080][b][size=5][font=comic sans ms,cursive]Yeah, I'm still not good with those cards. Like I said, I played Yu-Gi-Oh! back when it was just the original four types of monsters. I really wouldn't know... But I appreciate everyone's unput! Thanks for responding! Oh, if you guys think you have a better effect, by all means let me know.[/font][/size][/b][/color]

[Icy]

[quote name='BenjaminLohman' timestamp='1338303436' post='5948772']
[color=#000080][b][size=5][font=comic sans ms,cursive]Yeah, I'm still not good with those cards. Like I said, I played Yu-Gi-Oh! back when it was just the original four types of monsters. I really wouldn't know... But I appreciate everyone's unput! Thanks for responding! Oh, if you guys think you have a better effect, by all means let me know.[/font][/size][/b][/color]
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Well that's the thing, your card idea doesn't express much to even modify without it being considered our card. Sure we can turn this around and maybe say something like (in old grammar since I'm not up to date):
"When this card battles a Spellcaster-type Monster, send it to the graveyard and inflict 1000 damage to your opponent."
But we don't know whether or not your intent was strict battle effect or something to actually destroy them. That being said, not a huge fan of this card as a whole. Blunt sure, but even a burnt steak has meat to it. /random saying to finish this off.