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  1. 1. i see those cards are very good, what you see?

    • WAAAO! KAZUKI TAKAHASHI CAN'T MAKE CARDS LIKE THIS
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    • I SEE YOU SHOULD MAKE CARDS FOR YUGI HIMSELF
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    • VERY GOOD, KEEP IT UP
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    • I THINK YOU NEED SOMETIME TO MAKE BEST CARDS
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    • SORRY, BUT THOSE CARDS ARE VERY BAD
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kendrick sendersson ovak Newbie

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it was a coincidence when i get this idea, i found a beautiful angel warrior image and make it a card then i make a cards series named "justice guardians". all of this series power is in the last justice guardian.
[size=7][img]http://i.imgur.com/qHO5F.jpg[/img][/size]
[size=7][size=6]effect:[/size][/size]
[size=7][size=6][size=4]this card can't be normal summon or set. this card can only be special summon by tribute 1 fairy type monster in your graveyard.
a while this card is on the field, your opponent can't activate any trap card. when this card destroyed remove it from play.[/size][/size][/size]

[size=7][size=6][size=4][size=7][img]http://i.imgur.com/9iI3Y.jpg[/img][/size][/size][/size][/size]
[size=6]effect:[/size]
[size=6][size=4]this card can't be normal summon or set. this card can only be special summon by tribute 1 fairy type monster from graveyard.
a while this card is on the field both players can't normal summon or special summon any monster with level 6 or higher.when this card destroyed, remove it from play.[/size][/size]
[size=6][size=4][size=7][img]http://i.imgur.com/x1VVn.jpg[/img][/size][/size][/size]
[size=6][size=4][size=7]effect:[/size][/size][/size]
[size=4][size=6]this card can't be normal summon or set. this card can only be special summon by tribute 1 fairy type monster from graveyard.
a while this card is on the field,decrease the attack of all dragon type monsters by 800 point. when this card destroyed, return it to your deck and shuffle it.[/size][/size]
[size=4][size=6][size=4][size=7][img]http://i.imgur.com/10guf.jpg[/img][/size][/size][/size][/size]
[size=4][size=6][size=4][size=7][size=6]effect:[/size][/size][/size][/size][/size]
[size=4]this card can't be normal summon or set. this card can only be special summoned when you have 3 (justice guardian) monsters removed from play. this card atk & def points equal to the monsters in your graveyard.
this card is unaffected by spell&trap cards or monsters effects. (even the monsters who can negate other monsters effects. when this card destroyed, remove all monsters in both players graveyard.[/size]
[size=4][size=7][img]http://i.imgur.com/IHNNW.jpg[/img][/size][/size]
[size=4][size=7][size=6]effect:[/size][/size][/size]
[size=4][size=7][size=6][size=4]you can activate this card only when you have (justice guardian- caris the space balancer ). this card can't be destroyed ever or banished or removed from play or return back to it's owner hand, this card effected only by cards related with ( justice guardian- caris the space balancer). when this card destroyed, destroy all cards in the field except divine attribute or divine-beast type monsters and inflict damage to it's owner equal to the destroyed monsters attack points.[/size][/size][/size][/size]
[size=4][size=7][size=6][size=4][size=7][img]http://i.imgur.com/iMltx.jpg[/img][/size][/size][/size][/size][/size]
[size=6]effect:[/size]
[size=6][size=4]when your opponent special summon any monster to his field, remove all monsters in the field except (justice guardian- caris the space balancer) and destroy all spell\trap cards in the field except cards related with ( justice guardian- caris the space balancer).[/size][/size]
[size=6][size=4][size=7][img]http://i.imgur.com/kMYPW.jpg[/img][/size][/size][/size]
[size=6][size=4][size=7][size=6]effect:[/size][/size][/size][/size]
[size=6][size=4][size=7][size=6][size=4]you must pay half of your life points to activate this card, inflict damage to your opponent life points equal the number of his monsters number x1000 or he must pay half of his life points to negate this effect.[/size][/size][/size][/size][/size]
[size=7][img]http://i.imgur.com/hTMa2.jpg[/img][/size]
[size=7][size=6]effect:[/size][/size]
[size=7][size=6][size=4]this card can destroy (balanced earth) only.[/size][/size][/size]



i want to post a legendary ancient characters series in the next time, correct any mistakes and rate my cards.

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宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Newbie

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Okay, let's see here....

1st card: What on the land of Yu-Gi-Oh do you mean by "Tribute in your graveyard"?! (I assume you mean tribute 1 fairy type, but it's still weird) Also, it's effect isn't really that great. If you take out the cannot normal summon effect, I think it's a pretty solid 1900 ATK beater that will work tremendously in anti-meta decks.

2nd card: Mother of god... That effect is pretty powerful... I think this set is supposed to be anti-meta or something? Based on what I see on the first two cards, probably yes. Also, ditto on the cannot normal summon part.

3rd card: I've said it twice and I won't stop repeating it; the cannot normal summon part makes it rather... pointless to me. Nothing much to say about it's other effects though. The 800 ATK decrease for dragons is a bit steep. Maybe reduce it to 500 or something? (Idk, I use dragons IRL so... yeah.)

4th card: Eh.. what? I don't understand... "This card's ATK & DEF is equal to the number of monsters in your graveyard." Weakest. Effect. Ever. Period. (If you think about it, the absolute maximum number of monsters in your graveyard is 59. So it's ATK can only be as high as 59?) I think you meant X1000 or even, X500 to make it less OP'd.

5th card: Useless, yet freakazoidly OP'd if you managed to get the effect right. If it couldn't be destroyed then how could it ever activate it's second effect? Remove the "Cannot be destroyed" effect and the "Inflict damage" effect and it would be a nice fit in your Justice Guardian deck.

6th card: "What the eff... A trap, slightly watered down version of Dark Hole? *Fangirl squee* It will halt many decks in the current meta. It's amazing! OwO The rest of the effect is pointless for me LOL." Is what I would say if the destroy all spell/trap card effect doesn't exist. Because right now, it's so OP'd it'll make the Spirit Bomb look a like beach ball.

7th card: Hmm. Your usual effect damager. I don't like the fact that it's a quick-play though. Makes it a bit OP'd.

8th card: Won't work. Since Balanced Earth's effect states it can't be destroyed (ever).

Overall: Your OCG (Official Card Grammar) is (I'm sorry) truly horrible. I couldn't understand some of the effects (Especially that tribute from graveyard bit! D:<) but that's understandable, since you're new. I'd give it a 6/10 overall, because some of these are OP'd *coughblackholecough*


If you need help with making cards, feel free to PM me and I'll help in any way I can.

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[quote name='Dread☆プロイセン' timestamp='1339596018' post='5956341']
Okay, let's see here....

1st card: What on the land of Yu-Gi-Oh do you mean by "Tribute in your graveyard"?! (I assume you mean tribute 1 fairy type, but it's still weird) Also, it's effect isn't really that great. If you take out the cannot normal summon effect, I think it's a pretty solid 1900 ATK beater that will work tremendously in anti-meta decks.

2nd card: Mother of god... That effect is pretty powerful... I think this set is supposed to be anti-meta or something? Based on what I see on the first two cards, probably yes. Also, ditto on the cannot normal summon part.

3rd card: I've said it twice and I won't stop repeating it; the cannot normal summon part makes it rather... pointless to me. Nothing much to say about it's other effects though. The 800 ATK decrease for dragons is a bit steep. Maybe reduce it to 500 or something? (Idk, I use dragons IRL so... yeah.)

4th card: Eh.. what? I don't understand... "This card's ATK & DEF is equal to the number of monsters in your graveyard." Weakest. Effect. Ever. Period. (If you think about it, the absolute maximum number of monsters in your graveyard is 59. So it's ATK can only be as high as 59?) I think you meant X1000 or even, X500 to make it less OP'd.

5th card: Useless, yet freakazoidly OP'd if you managed to get the effect right. If it couldn't be destroyed then how could it ever activate it's second effect? Remove the "Cannot be destroyed" effect and the "Inflict damage" effect and it would be a nice fit in your Justice Guardian deck.

6th card: "What the eff... A trap, slightly watered down version of Dark Hole? *Fangirl squee* It will halt many decks in the current meta. It's amazing! OwO The rest of the effect is pointless for me LOL." Is what I would say if the destroy all spell/trap card effect doesn't exist. Because right now, it's so OP'd it'll make the Spirit Bomb look a like beach ball.

7th card: Hmm. Your usual effect damager. I don't like the fact that it's a quick-play though. Makes it a bit OP'd.

8th card: Won't work. Since Balanced Earth's effect states it can't be destroyed (ever).

Overall: Your OCG (Official Card Grammar) is (I'm sorry) truly horrible. I couldn't understand some of the effects (Especially that tribute from graveyard bit! D:<) but that's understandable, since you're new. I'd give it a 6/10 overall, because some of these are OP'd *coughblackholecough*


If you need help with making cards, feel free to PM me and I'll help in any way I can.
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balanced earth effect: this card can only be destroyed by cards related with justice guardian caris the space balancer, and earth destruction is related with caris the space balancer, now if you destroy balanced earth by earth destruction caris will be destroyed because it'[s not a divine monster. about caris effect, i'm forgot to write x1000
secondly, about cesar, i see many cards without a great effects, to get balance in your deck you should have weak monsters, medium monsters, powerful monsters, and cesar is not that great monster.

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[quote name='Herman The German' timestamp='1339648182' post='5956689']
i bet you are [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/user/593274-kso/"]kso[/url] second account have 2 more accounts is illegal here

now then AGAIN MORE GEMNI BUT NO GEMNI EFFECT WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU
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first, aboudeh 2ooo is not my second account, because i don't like wwe and the dragon collection is the worst cards ever.
secondly, i said it twice and i will repeat, i don't care if it's gemini or not.

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[quote name='kso' timestamp='1339696790' post='5956920']
first, aboudeh 2ooo is not my second account, because i don't like wwe and the dragon collection is the worst cards ever.
secondly, i said it twice and i will repeat, i don't care if it's gemini or not.
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[quote name='aboudeh2ooo' timestamp='1339696851' post='5956921']
HEY ! HERMAN GERMAN I KNOW YOU HAVE A PROBLEM WITH YOUR BRAIN !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IM NOT ( KSO ) SECOND ACCOUNT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
BUT I KNOW YOU CRAZY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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[color=#000000][b]Well, you two joined at the same time, Aboudeh2ooo always says that your cards are great, (Even though most of the time they are bad) and your both friends, you are also [u]ALWAYS [/u]online at the same time. So your probably either Alt's or related[/b][/color]

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[quote name='~shadow~' timestamp='1339697303' post='5956924']
[color=#000000][b]Well, you two joined at the same time, Aboudeh2ooo always says that your cards are great, (Even though most of the time they are bad) and your both friends, so your probably either Alt's or related[/b][/color]
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hmmm true shadow

btw
their effects are OP'ed first second ocg is way off do not get me started on it 3 and most likely the most important part they are all gemni and they do not have the gemni effect which they need
[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gemini_monster"][color="#1e4371"]http://yugioh.wikia..../Gemini_monster[/color][/url]

[b]Gemini monsters[/b], known as [b]Dual monsters[/b] in the [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Yu-Gi-Oh!_Official_Card_Game"][i][color="#1e4371"]OCG[/color][/i][/url] are a subtype of [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Effect_Monster"][color="#1e4371"]Effect Monsters[/color][/url]. They have [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Effect"][color="#1e4371"]effects[/color][/url], but these effects must be "unlocked" by performing an additional [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Normal_Summon"][color="#1e4371"]Normal Summon[/color][/url] on them while they are [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Face-up"][color="#1e4371"]face-up[/color][/url] on the [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Playing_Field"][color="#1e4371"]field[/color][/url] called a [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gemini_Summon"][color="#1e4371"]Gemini Summon[/color][/url] (known in the [i][url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/OCG"][color="#1e4371"]OCG[/color][/url][/i] as a [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Second_Summon"][color="#1e4371"]Second Summon[/color][/url]). Until then, they are treated as [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Normal_Monster"][color="#1e4371"]Normal Monsters[/color][/url] on the field and in the [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Graveyard"][color="#1e4371"]Graveyard[/color][/url]. All Gemini monsters to date are treated as Normal Monsters while they are face-up on the field before being [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gemini_Summon"][color="#1e4371"]Gemini Summoned[/color][/url], or while they are in the Graveyard. If they exist anywhere else, they are treated as [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Effect_Monster"][color="#1e4371"]Effect Monsters[/color][/url]. They benefit greatly from the many support cards that allow Normal Monsters to be Summoned back from the Graveyard, like "[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Birthright"][color="#1e4371"]Birthright[/color][/url]".
The process of Gemini Summoning a Gemini monster (that is being treated as a Normal Monster by its effect) is just the same as performing any other Normal Summon, except that the monster is already on the field and you don't have to [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Tribute"][color="#1e4371"]Tribute[/color][/url] monsters for Gemini monsters of [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Level"][color="#1e4371"]Level[/color][/url] 5 or above. You cannot Gemini Summon a Gemini monster that has already been Gemini Summoned (and is still considered to have been Gemini Summoned).
Once a Gemini monster has been Gemini Summoned, it is then treated as an Effect Monster and it gains the effect(s) written on it. While this entire process seems very troublesome to go through for just one monster, note that Gemini monsters usually have extremely powerful effects, often without a drawback.
The Gemini monsters were initially released in [i][url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Tactical_Evolution"][color="#1e4371"]Tactical Evolution[/color][/url][/i], with more released in [i][url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gladiator%27s_Assault"][color="#1e4371"]Gladiator's Assault[/color][/url][/i], [i][url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Phantom_Darkness"][color="#1e4371"]Phantom Darkness[/color][/url][/i], [i][url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Light_of_Destruction"][color="#1e4371"]Light of Destruction[/color][/url][/i], [i][url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Structure_Deck_17:_Warrior%27s_Strike"][color="#1e4371"]Structure Deck 17: Warrior's Strike[/color][/url][/i] and [i][url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Stardust_Overdrive"][color="#1e4371"]Stardust Overdrive[/color][/url][/i].
Gemini monsters can play an important role in Decks based around Normal Monsters. A good example of this is "[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/C%C3%BA_Chulainn_the_Awakened"][color="#1e4371"]Cú Chulainn the Awakened[/color][/url]", seeing as he can use the [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/ATK"][color="#1e4371"]ATK[/color][/url] of a Normal Monster in the Graveyard.
For quite some time, there have been a few Gemini monsters that are part of an [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Archetype"][color="#1e4371"]archetype[/color][/url]; the first being "[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Alien_Hypno"][color="#1e4371"]Alien Hypno[/color][/url]" and "[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Ancient_Gear_Knight"][color="#1e4371"]Ancient Gear Knight[/color][/url]" which were then followed by "[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Elemental_HERO_Neos_Alius"][color="#1e4371"]Elemental HERO Neos Alius[/color][/url]", and finally three "[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gem-Knight"][color="#1e4371"]Gem-Knight[/color][/url]" Gemini; "[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gem-Knight_Amber"][color="#1e4371"]Amber[/color][/url]", "[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gem-Knight_Iolite"][color="#1e4371"]Iolite[/color][/url]" and "[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gem-Knight_Sanyx"][color="#1e4371"]Sanyx[/color][/url]".
So far, Gemini monsters have yet to make a proper appearance in the anime or manga. However, several members have made brief appearances in [i][url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Yu-Gi-Oh!_5D%27s"][color="#1e4371"]Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's[/color][/url][/i] and [i][url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Yu-Gi-Oh!_ZEXAL"][color="#1e4371"]Yu-Gi-Oh! ZEXAL[/color][/url][/i]. "[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Phoenix_Gearfried"][color="#1e4371"]Phoenix Gearfried[/color][/url]" is on the poster for the [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/World_Racing_Grand_Prix"][color="#1e4371"]World Racing Grand Prix[/color][/url], "[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Gigaplant"][color="#1e4371"]Gigaplant[/color][/url]" appears in a flashback of [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Akiza_Izinski"][color="#1e4371"]Akiza Izinski[/color][/url]'s past, and "[url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Crusader_of_Endymion"][color="#1e4371"]Crusader of Endymion[/color][/url]" has been seen played by random [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Duelist"][color="#1e4371"]Duelists[/color][/url] in [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Yu-Gi-Oh!_5D%27s_-_Episode_114"][color="#1e4371"]Yu-Gi-Oh! 5D's - Episode 114[/color][/url] and [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Yu-Gi-Oh!_ZEXAL_-_Episode_001"][color="#1e4371"]Yu-Gi-Oh! ZEXAL - Episode 001[/color][/url].

example of the gemini effect
This card is treated as a [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Normal_Monster"][color="#1e4371"]Normal Monster[/color][/url] while [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Face-up"][color="#1e4371"]face-up[/color][/url] on the [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Playing_Field"][color="#1e4371"]field[/color][/url] or in the [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Graveyard"][color="#1e4371"]Graveyard[/color][/url]. While this card is face-up on the field, you can [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Normal_Summon"][color="#1e4371"]Normal Summon[/color][/url] it to have it become an [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Effect_Monster"][color="#1e4371"]Effect Monster[/color][/url] with this [url="http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Card_effect"][color="#1e4371"]effect[/color][/url].
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you have been warn a couple times on this thread of yours ([url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/284408-grim-reapers-execution-team/"][color="#1e4371"]http://forum.yugiohc...execution-team/[/color][/url]) and your other thread ([url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/284492-justice-guardians/"][color="#1e4371"]http://forum.yugiohc...tice-guardians/[/color][/url]) which is in all fairness is fair since you are new but now that you been warn a couple times about the effect error ocg error on this thread and the other one if you do not change it this thread and any other that you refuse to fix will be lock please check the rules and any admin about this

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