Organics Posted March 3, 2008 Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 I'm hoping to make these into a card set and i think its actually proving to be quite interesting. Please help me by correcting OCG errors.DISCLAIMER - ALL IMAGES FOUND VIA GOOGLE OR PHOTOBUCKET I DO NOT OWN THEM. When this card is Summoned, it is placed into your Field Spell Card Zone. ( This card is treated as a Field Spell Card while face-up in your Field Spell Card Zone. ) While this card is face-up in your Field Spell Card Zone, it gains the following effect: "When a LIGHT monster on your side of the field attacks a monster in the same column as it, destroy the attacked monster at the end of turn." Activate when a "Wish" monster on your side of the field is selected as an attack target, Special Summon one Level 4 or lower "Wish" monster from your Deck and change the attack target to the Summoned monster. Destroy the Summoned monster during the End Phase of the turn this card was activated. When this card battles a monster in its same column, this card gains 200 ATK during the Damage Step. When this card destroys a monster as a result of battle, Special Summon 1 "Balance Token" to your opponents side of the field at the end of the Battle Phase. The "Balance Token" always has the same Type, Attribute, Level, ATK, and DEF as that monster, and cannot be used for a Tribute Summon. This card's effect is not applied when it battles a "Balance Token". This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle by a monster in the same column as it. Once per turn, this card can move to an adjacent unoccupied Monster Card Zone. If this card attacks the monster in its same column, this card gains 300 ATK during the Damage Step. When this card destroys your opponent's monster as a result of battle, Special Summon the destroyed monster to your opponent's side of the field during their next End Phase. This card can only be Special Summoned from your hand by destroying all cards on your side of the field and discarding all cards from your hand. During your opponent's Stand-by Phase, reduce their Life Points by half. Destroy this card during your second Standby Phase after activation. Tribute 2 "Wish" monsters on your side of the field and flip a coin. Depending on the result, apply the following effect: ~Heads: Special Summon 2 "Wish" monsters from your Hand, Deck or Graveyard. ~Tails: Destroy all cards on your side of the field. Activate only when a "Wish" monster declares an attack. Move the attacking monster to an adjacent unoccupied Monster Card Zone and increase its ATK by 300. Once per turn, this card can move to an adjacent unoccupied Monster Card Zone. During your Standby Phase, if all the zones of this card's column are occupied. Destroy all cards in this column. After activation, any monster card played in the same column as this card is automatically destroyed. (This effect is not applied to monsters that already exist on the field before this card is played) Once per turn, this card can move to an adjacent unoccupied Monster Card Zone. If this card attacks the monster in its same column, this card loses 500 ATK during the Damage Step. Activate only when a "Wish" monster is sent from the field to the Graveyard. Remove from play a "Wish" monster in your Graveyard to inflict 1000 points of damage to both players' Life Points. Activate only when at least six (6) Monster card Zones on the field are occupied. Destroy all monsters on the field. As long as this card remains face-up on the field, No cards can be played in the same column as this card and set Monster, Spells and Traps Cards cannot be activated.-I really think this card should be worded differently. I Updated Wish - The Time's picture, and added new cards. I'm not sure about the OCG on "One-Winged Angel" So I'd really be appreciative if you guys have me feedback on that. Oh Please tell me what you think about pictures and whatnot too.I made the monsters thinking about what people would wish for/on. I think they turned out alright. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rentaworrio Posted March 3, 2008 Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 Goob work for a newbie like me8/10 :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God of Cadillacs Posted March 3, 2008 Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 pretty good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted March 3, 2008 Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 Organics, They're all very interesting and have a nice concept. I skimmed through for OCG errors, Stanby is not Stand-ByAnd some of the pictures looked squished. I'd take it to any place where you can resize it and make it a square. Very Nice job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 3, 2008 Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 Pretty good. 8/10 Some images are blurry, and 1 is un-sized. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Organics Posted March 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 Pretty good. 8/10 Some images are blurry' date=' and 1 is un-sized.[/quote'] Which ones? Angelic Brawl, Earn your Wings, Wish - The Time i'm assuming? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Organics Posted March 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 Organics' date=' They're all very interesting and have a nice concept. I skimmed through for OCG errors, Stanby is not Stand-ByAnd some of the pictures looked squished. I'd take it to any place where you can resize it and make it a square. Very Nice job.[/quote'] Do you happen to know of such a place? XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 3, 2008 Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 Yeah, those who you posted, dont double post. Also Summoned isnt capitalized. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Organics Posted March 3, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 But Summoned is supposed to be capitalized, Look at Armageddon Knight. Also, sorry for Double posting, i'll private message them next time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 3, 2008 Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 K, sorry."Everyone makes mistakes..." said hedgehog , when jumped off cactus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J-Max Posted March 3, 2008 Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 Pretty Nice Cards! I really like the Art on some of them! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grayall Posted March 3, 2008 Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 Man/Woman, just download and cut out.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Saiba Aisu Posted March 3, 2008 Report Share Posted March 3, 2008 Nice one, Organics. If you're looking for somewhere to make them square-you can just use MS Paint if you don't have GIMP or photoshop. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
White Devil Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 pretty nice cards and concept: 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Yankee Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 Not bad, good effort ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 Pretty good set in my opinion :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Black Fang Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 nice, 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kid Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 good job :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Organics Posted March 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 Thanks for all the wonderful comments! *Blushes* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
God of Cadillacs Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 Keep making excellent cards^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Organics Posted March 4, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 Keep making excellent cards^^ I'll try ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ultima™ Posted March 4, 2008 Report Share Posted March 4, 2008 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Organics Posted March 5, 2008 Author Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 Thanks again for all the wonderful ratings/reviews/corrections. I have updated the set with 5 new cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chevalier Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 Ah so it's like needle ceiling but a bit more flexible. Nice cards. Maybe you should edit them into the first for easier access. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Huntar! Posted March 5, 2008 Report Share Posted March 5, 2008 not bad. not bad at all. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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