my death dragon duo

[austinh100]

hello these are my first creations so hope u enjoy ^.^

[宇佐見 蓮子@C94]

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I'm now going to list the faults in your first card one by one;

1. It's morally wrong. The only DIVINE/Divine Beast card that should exist is the three god cards, nothing else.
2. 8000 ATK? You can't be serious.
3. Underpowered as hell.
4. Terrible OCG.
5. Did I mention how UP'd it is?

Basically, your card is terrible, (Typical for first cards) wrong and stupidly underpowered. This card for me, is Krillin. It's f*cking Krillin. No, in fact it's Raditz. It doesn't deserve to be called Krillin. It's easy to summon, but it's underpowered for its class! It doesn't have any protection, 8000 ATK means instant death if your opponent has Magic Cylinder and you can't bring it back if got Torrential'd! And the biggest issue is it's ATK. 8000. No cards should exceed 5000 ATK. I repeat: [b]No cards should exceed 5000 ATK. [/b][color=#ff0000][b]NO CARDS SHOULD EXCEED 5000 ATK! [/b][/color][color=#000000]This card shouldn't be posted here, it should be posted on the Other Cards section. Since it's not realistic in any way. And I wont comment on the other one since it's basically the first one but even weaker.[/color]

[Alpakha]

Jeez, why so harsh o.o. But he's kind of right, you rlly need to work on your card. Though Dread was being a total @ss

[宇佐見 蓮子@C94]

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Jeez, why so harsh o.o. But he's kind of right, you rlly need to work on your card. Though Dread was being a total @ss
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Haha, yeah. I guess I did become a major @ss whole reviewing that card. Listening to a guy ranting on a bad game while writing a card review isn't such a good mix after all. But my point stays clear. These cards are sh*t and they don't deserve to be posted here.