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[img]http://i.imgur.com/kQS2o.jpg[/img]
[b]Lore:If your oppenet destroys this card he/she will automaticly lose the duel. But if you tribute or discard this card you will automaticly lose the duel.[/b]

[img]http://i.imgur.com/88iwO.jpg[/img]
[b]***Updated*** Lore:You can destroy any card on the field by tributing this card.After tributing this card it does not go to the graveyard instead place it on top of your deck. [/b]


[img]http://i.imgur.com/dz30i.jpg[/img]
[b]Lore: Add 200 ATK points to this card for each aqua type monster in your graveyard,but decrease the Def by 100 for each aqua type monster in your graveyad.[/b]

[b]Any help developing these cards further is greatly appreciated. I tried really hard on these, so let me know what you think! [/b]

[b]I fixed the cards the way you guys suggested! Btw,I knew the first card was over powered,but I had already made it so I thought I would post it with the other two sorta as a joke lol,sorry if I upset anyone by that.[/b]

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Alpakha Newbie

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Tell me your joking, none of these cards are realistic.
First card: Extremely oped, gives you an automatic win and you put a balancing effect where you would lose but it doesn't work. You can just not tribute it or not discard it.
Second card: No such thing as a Ghost Reaper-Type monster.It's effect is actually balanced but stil, make it Fiend-Type or Zombie
Third card: There's no Water-Type monster, water is an attribute.That card is actually underpowered, also make it Aqua-Type
Other Problems: OCG (official card grammar) needs work. Effects need balancing (some too strong while others weak).

PLEASE fix your cards.

Tell me you're joking, none of these cards are realistic.
First card: Extremely oped, gives you an automatic win and you put a balancing effect where you would lose but it doesn't work. You can just not tribute it or not discard it.
Second card: No such thing as a Ghost Reaper-Type monster.It's effect is actually balanced but stil, make it Fiend-Type or Zombie
Third card: There's no Water-Type monster, water is an attribute.That card is actually underpowered, also make it Aqua-Type
Other Problems: OCG (official card grammar) needs work. Effects need balancing (some too strong while others weak).

PLEASE fix your cards.

Tell me you're joking, none of these cards are realistic.
First card: Extremely oped, gives you an automatic win and you put a balancing effect where you would lose but it doesn't work. You can just not tribute it or not discard it.
Second card: No such thing as a Ghost Reaper-Type monster.It's effect is actually balanced but stil, make it Fiend-Type or Zombie
Third card: There's no Water-Type monster, water is an attribute.That card is actually underpowered, also make it Aqua-Type
Other Problems: OCG (official card grammar) needs work. Effects need balancing (some too strong while others weak).

PLEASE fix your cards.

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Sander Newbie

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[quote name='Simon Belmont' timestamp='1341686917' post='5969572']
I think you might have half a brain to think these are realistic.
Please go and have brain surgery.
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[quote name='Wyvernstorm' timestamp='1341688265' post='5969593']
LOLOLOL....i vote for this guy

I can't stop laughing seriously..
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Oh look, two bad card makers going on a power trip by mocking a new member. Honestly, you two should get warned for this. If you're going to insult, actually help the new member by posting advice / fixes.

Other than that, what was needed to be said was already said so I can't say anything else.

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You have to be joking, please tell you're joking... O.o

Anyway let's see:
First Card: Overpowered, clearly a joke card.
Second Card: Ghost Reaper isn't a Type, Effect is actually somewhat balanced due to level.
Third Card: Water isn't a Type, you mean Aqua, Effect and stats are underpowered due to level, on a level 4 or lower it would be quite well balanced.

Overall, actually half decent a bit of practice with knowing how to balance and you might be able to make some good cards.

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[quote name='Kvn523' timestamp='1341690678' post='5969641']
Athena, why did u copy my post o.0 Was about to report for spamming then realized ur new. Did u read the rules yet -___-.......i sound so bossy
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Oh I pretty much did didn't I? XD Oops sorry I wrote that before checking all the posts, which I probably should have done, though that is what I actually thought about the cards. Also yeah I have read the rules and realised how that's may be seen as me just copying you. =P
Sorry again.

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Sorry I'm replacing the pics now,somehow I copied the first one 3 diffrent times!

Why didn't it go back to normal? Well here's the updated cards! I hope!

[img]http://i.imgur.com/AGmbv.jpg[/img]

[img]http://i.imgur.com/AsmNH.jpg[/img]

Ok what's going on why is showing all looooooooooooser's?

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DARKPLANT RISING Newbie

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In short, a realistic card is something Konami might include in a pack.

"LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSER" is far from the names of cards Konami produces, and same goes for eff. Take a look at [url=http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/268282-the-universals-i-think-i-did-a-good-job-on-this-set-revolves-around-peeking/]this[/url] for example of a good RC card set.

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[quote name='Darkplant - VENOM' timestamp='1341706342' post='5969972']
In short, a realistic card is something Konami might include in a pack.

"LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSER" is far from the names of cards Konami produces, and same goes for eff. Take a look at [url="http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/topic/268282-the-universals-i-think-i-did-a-good-job-on-this-set-revolves-around-peeking/"]this[/url] for example of a good RC card set.
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Theres a card called Superdarkpurplethornydragon or something, It was in one of SimplyUnlucky's videos.

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[quote name='Simon Belmont' timestamp='1341776610' post='5970784']
Theres a card called Superdarkpurplethornydragon or something, It was in one of SimplyUnlucky's videos.
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[color=#3A3A3A][font=Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(249, 249, 249)]*Interplanetarypurplythorny Dragon[/background][/size][/font][/color]
[color=#3A3A3A][font=Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(249, 249, 249)]It's also completely different to call a card a ridiculously long-winded name than calling it "LOOOOOOOOOSER" repeating the letter O as many times as you wish.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

[color=#3A3A3A][font=Helvetica, Arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(249, 249, 249)]The card is way too overpowered and kind of stupid given that you gave a level 1 monster an instant win effect that contained several typos along with a very low quality picture to round it off. I know you're new but...this card simply can't be saved, you'd have to change the effect (and hopefully the name) to something totally different to make it seem realistic.[/background][/size][/font][/color]

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