redsteel220 Posted July 8, 2012 Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 Hey guys. I've made a new card to follow on from the dark magicians. Its a ritual card and different from magician of black chaos. [img]http://i.imgur.com/Mxdfj.jpg[/img] description: [i]This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Magician's Staves Ritual". For every "Dark Magician" in each player's graveyard, this card gains 3000 ATK. This card can Negate the effects of your opponent's Monster, Magic and Trap cards.[/i] [i]what do you think? [/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc. Posted July 8, 2012 Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 make the x000 an ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alpakha Posted July 8, 2012 Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 Turn the X000 to ??? or just 0. Idk it seems oped? Cut it to gains 2000, i guess. Don't know what to say....... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc. Posted July 8, 2012 Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 [quote name='Kvn523' timestamp='1341742973' post='5970470'] Turn the X000 to ??? or just 0. Idk it seems oped? Cut it to gains 2000, i guess. Don't know what to say....... [/quote] Its only one "?" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
qazwater Posted July 8, 2012 Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 yes i agree x000 is pretty dumb but just next time don't do it its not big deal.but otherwise its a cool card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redsteel220 Posted July 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 Thanks guys i have changed the ATK of the card and thanks for commenting this is how it looks like now. i also put a ritual for it. [img]http://i.imgur.com/JSMLy.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/QYvrj.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc. Posted July 8, 2012 Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 Its only one question mark. Add some more support for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redsteel220 Posted July 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 [quote name='Simon Belmont' timestamp='1341758536' post='5970594'] Its only one question mark. Add some more support for it. [/quote] hello simon. what do you mean by adding support? do you mean adding a better effect for the card? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AGATHODAIMON BANGTAIL COW Posted July 8, 2012 Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 Support for a card would be different cards which help the card (for example, Manju of the Ten Thousand Hands counts as support for this card). As for this card, it is surely difficult to pull out and its effect is powerful, but it completely locks down your opponent while being capable of getting incredibly high ATK, making it impossible to kill once you have two Dark Magicians in your Graveyard. Advanced Ritual Art makes it even easier to get this card on the field, and could also get a Dark Magician in your Graveyard for you, leaving your opponent with nothing to do to beat it unless they just so happen to have a Super Conductor Tyranno or something in their Hand that they can Tribute Summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc. Posted July 8, 2012 Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 [quote name='A Background Character' timestamp='1341759382' post='5970607'] Support for a card would be different cards which help the card (for example, Manju of the Ten Thousand Hands counts as support for this card). As for this card, it is surely difficult to pull out and its effect is powerful, but it completely locks down your opponent while being capable of getting incredibly high ATK, making it impossible to kill once you have two Dark Magicians in your Graveyard. Advanced Ritual Art makes it even easier to get this card on the field, and could also get a Dark Magician in your Graveyard for you, leaving your opponent with nothing to do to beat it unless they just so happen to have a Super Conductor Tyranno or something in their Hand that they can Tribute Summon. [/quote] Manju is support for anything really, Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redsteel220 Posted July 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 Thanks for the advice and info guys. I'll try to make some support the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
coolman365 Posted July 8, 2012 Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 I like the card, but it's effect to negate any of the opponents effects is definitely OP. If you had mirror of yata, then that effect would last until that card was destroyed, which will be very hard to do if you have over 2 dark magicians in the graveyard. And if you had mist body, your opponent is practically doomed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SomnolentWandaranda Posted July 8, 2012 Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 How about putting more restriction to the card? For example, "Once per turn" or "Up to twice per turn" for its negating effect. As it is right now, it can easily pull an OTK, unless your opponent always has some Counter Trap Card face-down, which is some thing only Counter Fairy or Dark Counter would be able to do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sckorpio Posted July 8, 2012 Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 "[i]Magician's Staves Ritual"? [/i]I can't find any thing about it any thing you can tell me about it. 3000 is way too much a better amount would be 1500-2000 also drop the last effect it makes the card op I give the card a total score of 2/10 ( A good idea but flawed with op results) Not un-changable though. Keep working on it and support for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redsteel220 Posted July 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 Thanks everyone for the advice. I've taken all the comments into consideration and these were the results: [img]http://i.imgur.com/BuhLk.jpg[/img] [b]Effect[/b]:[i]This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card, "Magician's Staves Ritual". For every "Dark Magician" in each player's graveyard, this card gains 2000 ATK. You can pay half you Life Points; Negate the activation and effects of your opponent's Magic and Trap cards as long as this card is face up on the field.[/i] [img]http://i.imgur.com/at5uM.jpg[/img] [b]effect: [/b][i]This card is used to Ritual Summon "Staff of Dark Fate". You must also Tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal 11 or more.[/i] [img]http://i.imgur.com/SiZ3X.jpg[/img] [b]effect: [/b][i]Discard 1 card from your hand. You can special summon 1 "Dark Magician" from your Deck or Hand and equip it with this card. At your end phase, Destroy this card and the equipped monster. You can pay 1000 Life Points; return this card to the top of the Deck.[/i] And finally: [img]http://i.imgur.com/yYPwi.jpg[/img] [b]effect[/b]: [i]Equip this card to a monster whose original name is "Staff of Dark Fate". The equipped card will be immune to monster effects for 5 turns. Once 5 turns has passed, Destroy this card and remove from play all cards on the field.[/i] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GhostNinja Posted July 8, 2012 Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 [quote name='redsteel220' timestamp='1341758345' post='5970591'] Thanks guys i have changed the ATK of the card and thanks for commenting this is how it looks like now. i also put a ritual for it. [img]http://i.imgur.com/JSMLy.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/QYvrj.jpg[/img] Am I the only one who noiced that these cards don't go together? On the monster, it says that is can only be played by Magician Staves Ritual, and the other card, Fate of Darkness can play Staff of dark Fate. A little broke, but otherwise god cards. [/quote] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
david ice Posted July 8, 2012 Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 really good cards even if you are using the wrong card grammar, you card instead write ''this card cannot be targeted by card effects'' 8.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
redsteel220 Posted July 9, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2012 Thanks David Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GhostNinja Posted July 10, 2012 Report Share Posted July 10, 2012 Am I the only one who noiced that these cards don't go together? On the monster, it says that is can only be played by Magician Staves Ritual, and the other card, Fate of Darkness can play Staff of dark Fate. A little broke, but otherwise god cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sckorpio Posted July 17, 2012 Report Share Posted July 17, 2012 [quote name='GhostNinja' timestamp='1341893450' post='5972683'] Am I the only one who noiced that these cards don't go together? On the monster, it says that is can only be played by Magician Staves Ritual, and the other card, Fate of Darkness can play Staff of dark Fate. A little broke, but otherwise god cards. [/quote] Yes i noticed too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pedro1234 Posted July 17, 2012 Report Share Posted July 17, 2012 Weird dark magican card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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