宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted July 14, 2012 Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 Yay! My Xyz Daily series finally inspired members to make their own XXX Daily series! I'm so happy~ *ahem* [img]http://i46.tinypic.com/4gggfr.jpg[/img] [spoiler=If you can read the effect without having to look here, I'll give you a rep. NOT. KIDDING.] [color=#000000][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]If this card is targeted for an attack: You can detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card and target 2 monsters on the field; banish those target(s). While you control this face-up card with no Xyz Material, it gains the following effects:[/size][/font] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]* Cards in the Graveyard cannot be banished, except with this card's effect.[/size][/font] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]* Once per turn: You can pay 1000 Life Points and discard 1 card; send 1 Monster Card from your Deck to the Graveyard.[/size][/font] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]* This card's ATK becomes equal to the number of monsters in your Graveyard x 500.[/size][/font] [font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3]* If this card would be removed from the field by battle or by a card effect; you can banish 2 monsters from your Graveyard, instead.[/size][/font][/color] [/spoiler] "What about Chaos Dragons?! They will be abusing this card like crazy! Are you out of your mind, man?!"[color=#000000] If you thought of that, you are clearly not reading the effect carefully enough. Because there is this effect: "[/color]Cards in the Graveyard cannot be Banished, except by this card's Effect." So Chaos Dragons won't abuse this that much, but they can still run it, especially since it can send 7 Monsters, unless you're using LP increasing cards. So anyway, as usual, Rate, Fix [s]my netherworldly bad[/s][s] OCG[/s] if Broken and CnC is always appreciated. EDIT: Changed OCG completely and fixed a part of it's effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Durandamon Posted July 14, 2012 Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 *raises hand* Everything I can do in order to help put the forum back on track. Not that I got a comment... ITT: It might seem a bit op'd, but I don't think anyone would attack it while knowing her effect, and they would go with effect destruction. It can work the other way, because if the only monsters on the field are the attacking monster and this card, you must banish them both or let it be destroyed, right? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted July 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 [quote name='Damage Inc.' timestamp='1342225787' post='5977054'] *raises hand* Everything I can do in order to help put the forum back on track. Not that I got a comment... ITT: It might seem a bit op'd, but I don't think anyone would attack it while knowing her effect, and they would go with effect destruction. It can work the other way, because if the only monsters on the field are the attacking monster and this card, you must banish them both or let it be destroyed, right? [/quote] Well, sort of, yeah. But if it's destroyed, you can bring it back with cards such Monster Reborn or Call Of The Haunted and that will allow the Deck-to-graveyard massacre begin. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zelfore Posted July 14, 2012 Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 Effective, without being overpowered. I love how it's both helpful yet devastating to a banishing deck. That's genius. I can't say much more than the fact that your OCG seems pretty solid, and it's a perfectly well-rounded card altogether. [size=1][sub][sup]Also, I read the cards effect from the card itself.[/sup][/sub][/size] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cray-Crow Posted July 14, 2012 Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 I agree. I don't really see a huge flaw with this card. Well thought out and clear with its purpose. Good job, Dread. This should be legit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted July 14, 2012 Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 If you don't force this card's Saiyan mode with Oni-Gami Combo or something your opponent will never attack it and it will just sit there. If you revive it later, it becomes extremely loud since getting it off the field is nigh-impossible, on par with Vennominaga. [spoiler="hey"]where my rep[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted July 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 There is always the Dark Hole + Call Of The Haunted Combo. But yeah, I get your point. This card can also act as a wall since your opponent will most likely try to not attack it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Piercer of the Heavens Posted July 14, 2012 Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 *also raises hand* ditto I like this card because even though its not OP it is a pain to get around. You could leave it alone, but you can't do much or attack but would it be worth the sacrifices. So yeah... good card overall. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted July 14, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2012 Wow. Thanks for all the support and comment guys... I never expected this to be balanced TBH. I always thought someone will come and say it's overpowered like all of my other cards... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synchronized Posted July 15, 2012 Report Share Posted July 15, 2012 Read the effect with ease without using the spoiler. Where's my rep? (Just kidding ^^; ) Anyway, onto the card. Prepare to be disappointed, for I will be the first to tell you that it's somewhat broken. I fixed the OCG for you, too, but let me elaborate on why it's broken. [quote]If this card is targeted for an attack: You can detach 2 Xyz Materials from this card and target 2 monsters on the field; banish those target(s). While you control this face-up card with no Xyz Material, it gains the following effects: * Cards in the Graveyard cannot be banished, except with this card's effect. * Once per turn: You can pay 1000 Life Points and discard 1 card; send 1 Monster Card from your Deck to the Graveyard. * This card's ATK becomes equal to the number of monsters in your Graveyard x 500. * If this card would be removed from the field; you can banish 2 monsters from your Graveyard, instead.[/quote] It's still a Foolish Burial on legs with built-in protection[i]and [/i]the ability to banish things. Rank 6 monsters are getting easier and easier to bring out with each set, second only to Rank 3 and 4 right now, I'd say. In addition, I'll ask the same question I ask to all cards worded this way; with the last part of the effect, you imply that I could Tribute this card to Summon Caius the Shadow Monarch, and then banish 2 monsters from my Graveyard to keep this card on the field [i]and[/i] bring out Caius. That could be a problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted July 15, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2012 *poker face* Alright. OCG fix and minor effect change coming right up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ryoki Posted July 16, 2012 Report Share Posted July 16, 2012 Shoudn't, like most XYZs, there be some form of debuff insted of an additional effect or two. Please just take it consideration. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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