SwineRider Posted July 15, 2012 Report Share Posted July 15, 2012 Hey there! I'm working on my final Alien archtype, so I want to make sure I'm using the latest ocg right. I hope you can comment and correct on my card, since I'm not that stable with the current ocg yet. [img]http://i.imgur.com/5uORE.jpg[/img] [u][b]Effect:[/b][/u]If destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard; target and destroy 1 monster your opponent controls. You can tribute this card and face-up 1 monster your opponent controls; Special Summon 1 Xenomorph monster which Level equals the Level of your opponents tributed monster from your Hand, Deck or Graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nu-Mou Knight Posted July 16, 2012 Report Share Posted July 16, 2012 Your OCG looks pretty good, actually. You have a few mess-ups: I believe the first word should be "When", you have 1 [b]after[/b] face-up, Archetypes have to be in quotes, and it should be "whose Level". I think you also missed the apostrophe in opponents, and I believe Tributed should be capitalized. I'm pretty sure "hand" isn't capitalized. It's just minor stuff, but overall pretty good. The effects might be a mite OP, but you could limit that by placing a Level cap of 6 or so on the effects. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SwineRider Posted July 16, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2012 Thank you for your detailed correction, I'll keep those things in mind while finishing the set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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