TheKrazyJames Posted July 18, 2012 Report Share Posted July 18, 2012 [size=6]i have designed these to be powerful but fare[/size] [b][u][size=6]tokens[/size][/u][/b] [img]http://i.imgur.com/q08Nq.jpg[/img] [size=6][u][b]monsters[/b][/u][/size] [img]http://i.imgur.com/aBUtG.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/LsVUK.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/EWITg.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/wgvbE.jpg[/img] [img]http://i.imgur.com/MJni1.jpg[/img] [b][u]spells[/u][/b] [img]http://i.imgur.com/8KnHa.jpg[/img] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gojira/Godzilla Posted July 18, 2012 Report Share Posted July 18, 2012 [color=#000000][b]lets see, your OCG is absolutely terrible, so improve it. Then I will try and review these.[/b][/color] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Expelsword Posted July 18, 2012 Report Share Posted July 18, 2012 I agree. Interesting concept, but phrased very poorly. Also, try not to give them all different types. They'd probably be Warrior, Beast, or Beast-Warrior. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheKrazyJames Posted July 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2012 [quote name='~shadow~' timestamp='1342634303' post='5981978'] [color=#000000][b]lets see, your OCG is absolutely terrible, so improve it. Then I will try and review these.[/b][/color] [/quote] ocg don't no what that is but i fink i fix it anyway Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black Metal Posted July 18, 2012 Report Share Posted July 18, 2012 You have to correct your OCG (official card grammar) errors if you want to make this card look good, and the background. Try looking at real yugioh cards and studying their effects, types, level, and all the other bullcrap so you'll understand the OCG. That's how I improved mine. Also, the pics aren't that bad, just try to find a picture of the characters that aren't overused and that has a background rather than just a black or white background Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheKrazyJames Posted July 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2012 [font="comic sans ms, cursive"][size="4"]ah i see now i do my one artwork so i could use that[/size][/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Monteparnas Posted July 18, 2012 Report Share Posted July 18, 2012 Also, I think the Rings will work better as Counters than as Tokens. Any other advice will need a better ocg. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Expelsword Posted July 18, 2012 Report Share Posted July 18, 2012 Oh, yes, the type of effects you describe are Counters, not Tokens. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheKrazyJames Posted July 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2012 oh yer i wasn't sure what they wer called Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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