宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted July 18, 2012 Report Share Posted July 18, 2012 I decided to make an Oni Fist set because I ran out of ideas for Xyz Daily completely. This set's last and support cards will be released tomorrow, so if you like this one and the other, you might want to check it out. (Completely random fact: This is the 50th card I made on Yugico) [IMG]http://i49.tinypic.com/k0wfs.jpg[/IMG] [spoiler=Ridiculously Un-Photogenic Effect] 2 Level 4 Warrior Monsters [color=#5A5A5A][font=tahoma, helvetica, arial, sans-serif][size=3][background=rgb(251, 253, 254)] [background=rgb(255, 255, 255)] This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If you take Battle Damage, place 1 Oni Counter on this card for every 500 damage taken. During either player's turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, remove any number of Oni Counters from this card, and activate one of the following effects depending on how many Oni Counters removed: 1: Both players lose 500 Life Points. 2: This card can attack twice during this turn's Battle Phase. 4: If your opponent activates a card effect, negate it. 6: Destroy all cards on the field.[/background] [/background][/size][/font][/color] [/spoiler] It acts as an insanely insane wall and a Nuke Effect once you lose 3000 Life Points. I'm not actually sure how the effect should be written so if you happen to be an OCG expert, help me with writing this effect! So as usual, rate, fix if broken and CnC is always welcome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cray-Crow Posted July 18, 2012 Report Share Posted July 18, 2012 i think it's a little too easy to summon for such a grand effect. especially for warriors. i would expect for it's stats to be a little lower as well. it isn't always easy to inflict multiples of 500 battle damage while a 2500 atk monster is on the field. otherwise. i like this card's concept. did you mean to prevent damage you'd take and instead place Oni Counters on it? and did you mean to be able to activate all effects if you'd remove 6 counters? if both answers are no, here's the lore as i'd place it. i wouldn't know if it's 100% correct. [spoiler='click']This card cannot be destroyed by battle. If you take Battle Damage, place 1 Oni Counter on this card for every 500 damage taken. During either player's turn, you can detach 1 Xyz Material from this card, remove any number of Oni Counters from this card, and activate one of the following effects depending on how many Oni Counters removed: 1: Both players lose 500 Life Points. 2: This card can attack twice during this turn's Battle Phase. 4: If your opponent activates a card effect, negate it. 6: Destroy all cards on the field.[/spoiler] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted July 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2012 Ah, that's a much nicer wording. I think I'll reduce the ATK and DEF to 2200. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WhoAreYou? Posted July 18, 2012 Report Share Posted July 18, 2012 Sooo.... Take battle damage six times and then destroy all cards including itself? I guess that's fair.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted July 18, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 18, 2012 The nuke activates if you take a grand total of 3000 Damage. And if we're talking about nukes, Black Rose is 1500 times better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WhoAreYou? Posted July 19, 2012 Report Share Posted July 19, 2012 Okay, I see. But yeah, it'd nuke itself along with everything else, then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted July 19, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2012 ^Pretty much this. ------------------------------- >No comment >Better bump again. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Synchronized Posted July 19, 2012 Report Share Posted July 19, 2012 [font="courier new, courier, monospace"]It's somewhat balanced, actually. I can't really find much to complain about.[/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Garthfunkle Vii Backwards Posted July 19, 2012 Report Share Posted July 19, 2012 summon this then use shrink on it ... to try to max the counters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
homerunbom12 Posted July 19, 2012 Report Share Posted July 19, 2012 Nope, I like the card. Nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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