宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted July 19, 2012 Report Share Posted July 19, 2012 The third and final monster in my Oni Fist set. Nothing else to say, really. I feel my creativity going down the drain [img]http://i45.tinypic.com/29cv0r5.jpg[/img] [spoiler=EASY EDITING ONLY] 2 Level 4 Warrior Monsters This card cannot be destroyed by battle. During your opponent's turn, you can pay 1500 Life Points: This turn, your opponent can only attack this card. If this card battles a monster, you can place 1 Oni Counter on that monster at the end of the Damage Step (max. 1). You can detach 2 Xyz materials from this card to destroy all monsters with an Oni Counter(s) on it. [/spoiler] Well obviously it's supposed to work best with the other 2 monsters, but I think she can hold her own rather well. The effect protects you and can act as a substitute Dark Hole. (Albeit Weaker) Now, the potential may not shine here, but with the upcoming support cards, it can make a pretty solid combo. So as usual, rate, fix and CnC is appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted July 19, 2012 Report Share Posted July 19, 2012 At the cost of 2 monsters, you create an immortal monster who can pop 1 monster after attacking it. This is too cheap for a 2-part Rank 4 generic Xyz, even if it can't destroy monsters by battle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted July 20, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 20, 2012 It's not generic It needs Warrior type monsters. Plus, it's not like you can always use, I don't know, Smashing Ground and sh*t? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TRUE RULER^(Imper.Di ) Posted July 20, 2012 Report Share Posted July 20, 2012 [font=comic sans ms,cursive]Its perfectly balanced, not as overpowered as a legal playing blackwing I know of(Armor Master). Its a good card.[/font] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
newhat Posted July 21, 2012 Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 [quote name='ドレッド★Toyo' timestamp='1342743836' post='5983403'] It's not generic It needs Warrior type monsters. Plus, it's not like you can always use, I don't know, Smashing Ground and sh*t? [/quote] My mistake. Now it seems OK. Hey, you can use Smashing Ground on Photon Strike Bounzer too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minecraft R Posted July 21, 2012 Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 how u make cards like that it's epic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ginko Posted July 21, 2012 Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 [b]"This card cannot destroy monsters by battle. This card cannot be destroyed by battle. During your opponent's turn, you can pay 1500 Life Points: This turn, your opponent can only attack this card. If this card battles a monster, you can place 1 Oni Counter on that monster at the end of the Damage Step (max. 1). You can detach 2 Xyz materials from this card to destroy all monsters with an Oni Counter(s) on it."[/b] Now this effect is kinda broken, but somewhat balanced, but the fact that it cannot destroy monsters by battle seems useless. I see what you're trying to do with the oni counters, but making it unable to destroy a level 1 0/0 monster is useless. Its effect would be more suited to attack a larger monster, then use its effect to destroy it next turn. the effect where it detatches both xyz materials instead of one is what makes it more balanced in its effect. At first I was skeptical, but after thinking this monster is well balanced. 4/5 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted July 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 [quote name='elitetank55' timestamp='1342833780' post='5984262'] how u make cards like that it's epic [/quote] For the picture I use Zerochan.net, for the actual card itself I use Yugico's Card Creator. The effect and other tidbits are from my own creativity. @Ginko That's why the ATK is 2350, which is rather low. Also, this card isn't actually meant to be used in independent decks, it's meant to be the main card for my Oni Fist set. (If your interested in that, search "Oni Fist" and click the first result) Also, thanks for making the first proper review of this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ginko Posted July 21, 2012 Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 after reading its effect a few times, i realized it is a really balanced card, although making it unable to destroy a level 1 0/0 token is extremely useless, and you should remove that part of the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
宇佐見 蓮子@C94 Posted July 21, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 Alrighty then, effect changed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
minecraft R Posted July 21, 2012 Report Share Posted July 21, 2012 thanks 4 the help i don't know a thing about xyz monsters but i'll have a go Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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