warrior lady?

[liverpool rule]

do you like this card

 

 

plz comment + give rating

[EliminateHRN]

Cap the name like this "Sword Warrior Lady of Death" and I'm sure When needs to be capped and it doesn't have 2 "e" but 4/10

[Grayall]

4/10 Ultra OCG mistakes.If ya want correcting ,send me PM.

[kid]

error and spelling mistakes T_T, but nice try :)

[Junk Raver]

All of thee above + you need to add a Disclaimer and credit the artist.

[Yankee]

this needs ALOT of work, but it's ok

PM me if you want any help ^_^

[Bloodrun]

hmm

its When (capitalized),and its ATK points, when talking about increasing or decreasing attack and defense, they are written as such, ATK DEF, when just mentioning them, they are written as follows: Attack, Defense.

rating 7/10

[Slash]

OCG errors

Nice Pic

Good Job ^_^

[Ultima™]

6/10

[Atomix]

Bad OCG, 7/10

[Lucas Maximus]

When you improve on your OCG and grammar your cards will get much higher ratings. ^_^

Private message me for OCG help.

[God of Cadillacs]

It's not good. But I know you will get better.6/10.

[liverpool rule]

here is another one of my cards

 

 

hope u like it

[EliminateHRN]

Needs a background and here how the effect should be writen out (I think):

 

"When this card is sent to the Graveyard, Special Summon "Power Warrior of Paladin."

 

There someone else needs to correct as I'm not good with OCg but I think that is how to write it out but 6/10

[Parting Shot]

Needs a background and here how the effect should be writen out (I think):

 

"When this card is sent to the Graveyard' date=' [b']S[/b]pecial Summon "Power Warrior of Paladin."

 

There someone else needs to correct as I'm not good with OCg but I think that is how to write it out but 6/10

 

Yes, that is how it should be written. All-in-all, the card's aren't too bad, though the OCG on the first one does need quite a bit of editing.

 

overall - 8.76/13.69